Webnovel Author: I_Am_Immortal - Fanfic Collection

Thanks for the advice, I will try to be detailed as much as possible. I am very grateful for your review, and long reviews are always welcome.

He slapped little girl, but there he perfectly controlled his strength, so she did not receive any damage. To onlookers it looked very hard slap, but it wasn't anything. There she may got emotional damage. Instead of providing her just one time help, they provided her lifetime help. Now her mom is working for EBTC at a very good position. She also received 'worker of the Year' award. They are not hiding their power for their own. They are hiding power for their family. you are right he has conquerors haki, but doesn't mean that he can protect his family from anywhere in the world. Have you not read about cipher pol agents, they one time killed whole town while they were searching for suspects. So it was good thing that they hidden their power. Many people say that this world is not like others, where families get targeted. One Piece world also not much different, here are many such examples. Most direct example is of Yonko, Big Mom. If anyone rejected her invitation to her party, she would send them head of their closest one as a present. So I think it is better to hide their power. As for not changing story, there I have written he can't change the story 'intentionally', if something happens unintentionally it doesn't matter. So don't think there will never be change in the story. In future chapters he will very cleverly circumvate the problem of not changing the story. So I hope your misunderstandings will get cleared from this. I am very grateful that you have taken your time to write this review.

Every world has its own power system. For our world true power is Money and Authority. How many of us are truly trying to be a Billionaire or the President of country? If you can't be in a top in our world, then forget about thinking that you will do any better in other worlds which has magic or any other power system.

He wasn't making fun of them. He was just talking from his point of view, for him training was too difficult. So he couldn't imagine how others could endure through such tough training.

You are right. MC was stupid. Even though he came to the One Piece he didn't change his mentality from the earth, happy and peaceful environment of village also helped in this. Even though he knew dangers, he ignored them, He thought he could spend his whole life peacefully in village. This makes MC stupid to the extreme. But that's how I wanted present MC to the readers. MC who is stupid, lazy, scum, etc.

On the earth MC was just a lazy otaku, never exercised, knew nothing of pain. Even though he knew he was in the One Piece world, his village was very peaceful, to him it felt like he just came from city to countryside. Even though he had [Limitless], it wasn’t easy to activate, you truly have to go beyond your limits to activate it. For a guy like lazy MC, he truly needed wake up call to go beyond his limits. As what he knew of dangers of One Piece world was from manga, he never experienced anything. One Piece was just excellent story to him. Before the pirate incident. It wasn’t long since he came to One Piece world, he wasn’t truly attached to his new mother, Nejiko. Only during pirate incident he got to know how much she cared for him. That incident was true wake up call for him. Above two things are the main reasons, that many don’t like my novel. I think everybody knows how to make standard likable MC, who just cares for everyone, saves everyone, and trains very hard for even little setbacks. But I wanted to try something different, in his origin story I wanted MC to be very unlikable, only after certain incident who would change himself. Most of us are similar to this MC. All of us have so much potential, but how much have we truly used it? We don’t tap into our true potential unless something happens. Every world has its own power system. For our world true power is Money and Authority. How many of us are truly trying to be a Billionaire or the President of country? Anyway thanks for the review. I really likes when someone gives detailed review to my novel.