Webnovel Author: Vallori - Fanfic Collection

It has the potential to be funny with it crossing so many dimensional barriers to get the MC's crew. But the problem is it needs A LOT of editing. The structure of the paragraphs is all over the place. And from one author to another; Do not put multiple dialogue lines in the same paragraph (it is so weird to read). You also need to take another look (maybe three) at the grammar. There are many obvious mistakes even a non-English speaker can point out. Otherwise, I advise downloading the free version of Grammarly, it will fix most sentences here. Also, try and minimize mixing arithmetic words with ordinal numbers. If it is system-related you can use; 1, 2, 3, 4, like that. But if it is anything else, for Example, age then it should only be this: twenty years old... Not this: 20 years old. There are many things I can point out. But here is a summary: - Shorten paragraphs. - Limit the use of arithmetic words, instead go with ordinal numbers. - Check grammar more than ones (use Grammarly) - Do not put two different dialogue-lines of two different people in the same paragraph. I hope this helps. Have a Wonderful Day.

There is not one currently. 1-2 chapters a week hopefully. Maybe more sometimes. It will all depend on how much time I can spare. I try to make the chapters quite long to make up for the slow release. Have A Wonderful Day!

Making Mihawk so trusting so quickly was a deliberate choice. It won't happen with every character MC meets. The reason for it is because Mihawk is OC in this story - my own version and I know it might be weird to think about him so easy-going. But, I think it will be okay, I am also not entirely serious with the whole "plot" about the story. And, I will eventually continue my Itachi story. Have A Wonderful Day!

I will try and do justice to Itachi, but I will still write him my way. Erza isn't gonna be his little sister and she isn't gonna call him "Onii-san" nothing like that. He will mostly always be the stoic badass the world knows him as. But, he will still have a personality and development. I will try and keep him logical most of the time. He will always have a goal and a reason for doing something. If he is acting like an idiot, then there is a reason why he is doing so. Have A Wonderful Day!