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Honestly, the writing is unpolished to the point where it's too laborious to want to read. Seemed like it had potential as a story, but why read mediocre writing?

HOLY FUCKING SHIT. WHY THE HELL IS THE GOD DAMN BOOK WRITTEN IN PRESENT TENSE. DON'T READ THIS SHIT. IT'LL HURT YOUR BRAIN

It's a seemingly good premise and story plagued by writing quality slightly higher than dog tier crap. I wouldn't waste your time in hopes that the writer gets better, it probably ain't happening

Honestly it is very apparent that this book is only rated well because of people's appreciation for the authors other books. Overall the book reads like a child's wet dream. The speech is unnatural and the characters feel like someone read some bullsh*t about how to make 2d characters 3d and failed absolutely miserably. I would not recommend enough to not even bother reading this. It's just trash writing