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The raikage is A not Ay.

Just like Onoki and Iwa, Ay and Kumo fell into the same dilemma. Though Fujin wasn't necessarily stronger than their top ninjas, killing him was an incredibly difficult task. Even if Fujin was defeated, the victory would be pointless if Fujin managed to escape. Due to his young age, he would steadily grow stronger and eventually become a headache for them.

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

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had got started at practicing -> started practicing

With the money he got from Cyrus's pouch, he'd gotten himself books and a wand and had got started at practicing basic 1st-year spells. He also had to brush up on many things which he didn't understand due to his lack of proper basic education.

HP: The Arcane Thief

HP: The Arcane Thief

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

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talented talents -> talented people
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My Skill Creation System

My Skill Creation System

Fantasy · Herolich

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It would be better if you write either the translated name or the original. I recommend that you use the translated one.

"Your average academy student doesn't have enough chakra in their bodies. The children have not entered puberty, the growth stage, where the amount of chakra develops rapidly with the rest of the body," Maruboshi continued. "While Henge No Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu) and Bunshin No Jutsu (Clone Jutsu) are taught in the academy, neither is useful in the field. Shinobi are trained to see through the illusionary clones, and while transformation can fool the civilian eye, a shinobi can see right through the jutsu's disguise. Disguising oneself is an art form in itself that takes years to perfect."

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

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They don't have lungs, why would they need to breathe?

The leaflings were drenched in perspiration and from the way they were breathing it was as if they would collapse at any moment.

Reincarnated As A Plant Life

Reincarnated As A Plant Life

Fantasy · Kurai_Takahashi

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with not -> without

"Why are you threatening me with not investigating the issue?" Shang asked. "If you are so convinced of my guilt, what would even be the point of threatening me with not investigating this issue?"

Sword God in a World of Magic

Sword God in a World of Magic

Fantasy · Warmaisach

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White Online

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Games · Alekzi

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Games · Alekzi

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[You Killed Goblin!]

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Games · Alekzi

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on the gates -> at the gates
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Games · Alekzi

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Thank you for increasing my knowledge*
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Games · Alekzi

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I am only teaching you to shoot the gun, I don't teach you to battle with it -> I am only teaching you how to shoot with the gun and not how to battle with it

Krystal put arms behind his back and mentioned, ''I am only teaching you to shoot the gun, I don't teach you to battle with it, everyone has their own way of battling, and copying someone might be inefficient.''

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Games · Alekzi

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the most*
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