Webnovel Author: lamazelovelife - Novel Collection

If you say so, I'll give it a try again.

Yeah, as I said, you have great grammar The writing is perfect. I'm just disappointed in the characters Sulking For 13 years Because you didn't have powers And his Dirty Pride Because he didn't get into the college. He Stayed in the city Where he doesn't have no money and he's Starving To death Instead of going home Where his parents are worried about him. He never gives a call home. Finally, when he got his powers, he goes home.And he finds that his mother is missing because he couldn't just call. The character seems to only think about himself. There's nothing wrong with that, but It takes me out of the story when I Character Has no power. His personality changes from what the original was why. When you have power, it makes what already in you Bloom According to what type of personality you have? But to see you.Sulking Because you don't have abilitias 13 years. This was a grown man once who's living his life again. That is just weird. Who had so much confidence at the starting How could someone personality change back-and-forth Like this, that sounds like Spoil a kid. If you just ask me. He was a soldier that came from a world that was Having an Apocalypse. He should have had a stronger will Power done, he had in the First 13 chapters. Because it seems his will power wasn't there. Until he got the system. That's why I hate when people give people overpowered systems in novels. It takes away from the personal will power. It seems like A lot of people like writing novels And the system always tells them what to do. Your system supposed to be a supportive item, not control you. From the moment your system tells you what missions to go and do. It seems like entity controls you like a puppet. I'm just saying. Because I'm a person who likes.Novels with systems, but they should have a limit.

The only thing I could say positive about this Novel is It is the grandma Aside from that, I hate this Main character He was so headstrong confident in the first chapter. Then he died. He went to a new world but because he couldn't use the power they had He wallowed in his Self-pity 13 years. He was a soldier he never trained his body. After he was reborn. He got beaten up, but instead of he going home because of pride He stays in the city and almost dies And because he's the main character he gets A system that helps him at the last moment. I won't lie just reading the first Couple of Chapter P***** me off. Because he became lazy, it's like his whole Character to changed. And as he get the system, he's supposed to go back to who he was before. If so, that means that's not his personality that means That's just a facade, he puts on.