Forfixs

1mth

Posted

Well, let's say I struck gold. The novel presents a great theme, with an excellent and rich world-building, in addition to an intelligent MC, and yes this is rare, and in addition to having an excellent power system. The secondary characters are a little lackluster in comparison, with the exception of 5 or 6. Which you'll have to read to find out. Okay, I'll give you a spoiler, one of them is the main villain who makes the plot turn.

Forfixs

3mth

Commented

Why are you paying so much attention to Isabel? Wasn't the story #NO-HAREM? Well you know what you're doing. For me she continues to be an irritating character, perhaps over time I will change my opinion about her.

ch 213 I was wrong about you…

Magic's Return: I Can See The Spirits

Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth

Forfixs

3mth

Commented

I wouldn't say the worst, after all there are many works that did much worse with time skipping, but it could be done better, like the "mana usage" skill, it should have already become an advanced skill... even if the advanced skill was at level 2 Her levels have stagnated, I hope you don't turn this back against her, but she has a huge repertoire of skills, and her level is far from being an indication of her strength. I just hope that that 'apple' skill has evolved or that its xp is: level 9 430000/450000. This would at least show that she made an 'apple' a day

ch 544 The Quest System!

Reincarnated With A Glitched System: Why Is My MP Not Running Out?

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Forfixs

3mth

Commented

I still don't see her point in wanting to protect this r*pist and murderer, is it wanting to say that revenge was empty, that disgusting moralistic talk? The only thing I didn't like about this arc. I really liked the fights, the curse even being used to affect souls. I know it's boring to say this, but congratulations on the book.

ch 492 Talking With Friends

Reincarnated With A Glitched System: Why Is My MP Not Running Out?

Fantasy · PancakesWitch

Forfixs

6mth

Replied to Rikeri

wrong, being average is the ideal way to hide your powers, being below average is just an annoying decoy that will be used as a hook for a simple slap-in-the-face plot. After all, if he were a b or c rank, he would be just another person in the crowd. For me, it would be even more interesting if the machine showed that he was someone normal, without powers. If you still have this novel in the library, was it worth reading? Will there be an annoying slap-in-the-face plot? I would appreciate it if you answered me. I'm going to put this novel on the fridge while I wait for a response.

ch 0 6 Brand New Day (IV)

Reincarnated as the Son of Conglomerate

Fantasy · mozziexxxx

Forfixs

6mth

Replied to Ancient_Egyptian

is that everything is 8 or 80, or they are super mega overpower, or they pretend to be super mega weak, I think it's all a matter of how it's done.

ch 0 5 Brand New Day (III)

Reincarnated as the Son of Conglomerate

Fantasy · mozziexxxx

Forfixs

6mth

Commented

I know it could be a spoiler, answer if you want, is his lineage being nerfed by the system? After all, Fenix are known for their vitality. Another thing about power levels, he is at level 2/7, while the "mc" is at 5/16, he is technically stronger than our mc, but the difference is not that much, it would be better to say that he is the " mc" original game has much more strength than an average person at level 5/16.

ch 187 Dead yet?

No More Pain For This Villain.

Fantasy · Satan03

Forfixs

6mth

Posted

Writing Quality ***** very good Stability of Updates ***** very good Story Development ** disappointing Character Design * bad World Background **** good I gave low marks because of a golden rule that I follow very diligently, I don't read anything when the main character has sentient clones. I'm disgusted by this. I was flustered by the time invested, and with the note that it ended for "me", I really liked the more positive theme of the book, and I was very flustered that it ended in a depressing way for "me".

Eternal Cultivation of Alchemy

Games · Snoring_Panda

Forfixs

9mth

Commented

Doubt it, the artifact will only protect up to "Emperor" rank, and would only teleport it to its mother if it was a "Surpreme". So I didn't understand why he was sent to his mother.

ch 417 Lith got assassinated?

Forfixs

9mth

Commented

well, for the sake of maintaining the suspension of disbelief, i'm going to believe that he in the many fights he's had, hit his head hard enough, or even had some claw pierced his skull, because that's easier to believe than for him to "forget, because all that matters is was to survive."

For Bloed, only surviving was important.

Forfixs

9mth

Posted

sad to only give 1 stars but his word reigns. Thank you for writing this story, I look forward to new chapters, unfortunately I read them all in 4 days, I hope the love interests don't cause too much drama, although I love them and I still have a little hope that this romance will continue, although I understand and support in case you want to do something more "realistic" after all... adolescence. I noticed that you love to portray the works that came out around that year, and give your vision about it, this must be the main reason for making the volumes like this, this must be the reason people complain about the pace, I don't know if it's because I read it everything you posted so far in a few days, but I didn't see this problem, probably if you were writing a book people wouldn't even notice this problem, it's your pace, and I hope you don't change it in the future just for our opinions readers. Thanks again. Taken from google.translate, sorry for any mistakes.

Forfixs

9mth

Commented

this chapter gave me a smile, thank you!

ch 54 Departure

Forfixs

1yr

Commented

this scene is not well crafted, it seems very "timely" the arrival of help right at this moment, it could be better constructed if his father's arrival with help gave him the opportunity to escape where he was being held

ch 21 Chaos God Style versus Mountain God Style

Forfixs

1yr

Commented

any guild that sees a member with these skills try to at least raise him up to 1st or 2nd job.

Sometimes he'd act as a porter and steal a kill or two, but after his stunt was discovered, even that stopped being allowed. And like that, 6 years passed. He never made any progress and barely made enough money to support his mother.

Void Evolution System

Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead

Forfixs

1yr

Commented

Seriously? missed such a good chance to show that his harem are more than princesses in distress. That's sad. And take what I'm going to say next with a grain of salt, but I think it was just a tantrum, after all in the first interlude a lot of people said that Kimi did more in 1 chapter than the MC did in half an arc.

ch 275 275: Interlude — Kimi’s Perfect Run (2)

The Cursed Gamer

Anime & Comics · Master4thWall

Forfixs

1yr

Commented

I think all the anger I feel about this arc will disappear if it destroys this clan, or at least kills the leader and all the elders.

"That… you just showed her the Tenseigan like that. Father will get mad if he hears about it."

The Cursed Gamer

Anime & Comics · Master4thWall

Forfixs

1yr

Commented

NO, this system is awake, code 590

[Ding! Master can equip the Armour from the Character page. The size wouldn't matter that way.]

The Cursed Gamer

Anime & Comics · Master4thWall

Forfixs

1yr

Commented

hue, where's the amazing demonic magic control?

"I know the chances of you getting pregnant would be low." James explained with a smile. "But low chances aren't the same as zero chances. Also, to be honest, neither of us are ready to be parents if we should happen to hit the jackpot."