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  • like nice balance fanfic without harem,

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  • Danmachi : Myth Return

    Danmachi : Myth Return

    Anime & Comics Action Adventure Danmachi

    What happens if Danmachi's History is wrong This is my first novel and I will only write if I want so please be patient and kind to me I am not a native English speaker so if you cant endure just don't read. Google Translate + Grammarly(free) This is a work of fiction that draws heavily upon the original source material of Danmachi. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content.

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FvckinBored: hmmmmm....his skills are pretty down below compared to my expectations on what it should be because he joined his father in the world cook tour thingy

but still ty author for the chapter

Shokugeki: The Demon Chef · C21
1 week ago
Ninth ring, come! View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C183
2 weeks ago
False and true... Are you mean fate/strange fake?
If it is then, after staynight.

Btw, if i am not wrong for female older sister is "nee"
While male is "nii"
Like you know, "mya-nee!"

And it is Emiya not imiya.

I suggest you re-read your story before upload it.

Good work. View More
Playing in fate · C6
2 weeks ago
Nah.
Now you only need to write after story and
THE END...

Its okay, its still a quarantine time so there will no one will come to your house to commit murder. XD

Just kidding.
Good work. View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C176
2 weeks ago
Good work.
But yes, the power balance is bit off.
I also have same problem with you actually XD
Its like, yeah, i want to make my OC the most powerful char, but i realize it will not going to work for future.

Pocket dimension, isnt it more like skill than develpment ability?
Also cursed is an abnormal situation right.

Anyway, thanks for the idea.
I think its good to add some wise word in story but not that cringe. View More
Danmachi: An Outsider · C4
3 weeks ago
The will of author is absolute. View More

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Ghost of the Uchiha · C88
4 weeks ago
Thank you.
you're right. actually, I want to read a novel with its characters developed so I write this.
about the new MC., he will come. well, you already can guess it.
you're the sixth comment I got. XD

I have some problem with the power balance so if you find it bit off or a character dead (passive) please tell me. I will try to fix it.
also if you have some nice novel for reference. like Parcasious's View More

kouk2002: I just finished reading all 8 chapters. It is really good. It's rather unusual for a fanfic to not have a new MC, no wishes or cheats or systems. Just a new story on a bit of a what-if.

I've only seen about half of season 1, so I don't know too much about the whole plot, things changed in my life and I find watching anything hard, in the end, reading is all that's left. Point is I can't question or point out any flaws due to not knowing enough about the original plot.

I know nothing about the Myth even if they were originally a part of the story's history. That said I love how much you brought their characters to life. Not just them, even the like's of Loki family and Hestia family feel true to their characters.

I like the story you've created, and even if the release rate is slow the chapter length and quality more than makes' up for it to the point of justifying it.

Thanks for the enjoyable read, I hope more people start following and commenting as it seems a little sad at the moment. Like it isn't getting the recognition it deserves.

Danmachi : Myth Return · C8
1 month ago

DartUpdates: Good ass book keep it up please!!

Danmachi : Myth Return · C3
1 month ago

Kreo08: This is heavy

Danmachi : Myth Return · C4
1 month ago

Kreo08: You great sh*thead, give me back my tears!!!

Danmachi : Myth Return · C0
1 month ago

DartUpdates: I was so fucking confused yet I had tears.... GIVE ME BACK MY F*CKIN TEARS CHOIR!!!!!🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬👹🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬

Danmachi : Myth Return · C0
1 month ago

WilsterPendragon: I don't know much about danmachi anime haha did sorry my friend can't help you.

Danmachi : Myth Return · C6
1 month ago

kouk2002: I just finished reading all 8 chapters. It is really good. It's rather unusual for a fanfic to not have a new MC, no wishes or cheats or systems. Just a new story on a bit of a what-if.

I've only seen about half of season 1, so I don't know too much about the whole plot, things changed in my life and I find watching anything hard, in the end, reading is all that's left. Point is I can't question or point out any flaws due to not knowing enough about the original plot.

I know nothing about the Myth even if they were originally a part of the story's history. That said I love how much you brought their characters to life. Not just them, even the like's of Loki family and Hestia family feel true to their characters.

I like the story you've created, and even if the release rate is slow the chapter length and quality more than makes' up for it to the point of justifying it.

Thanks for the enjoyable read, I hope more people start following and commenting as it seems a little sad at the moment. Like it isn't getting the recognition it deserves.

Danmachi : Myth Return · C8
1 month ago
Thanks for the review View More

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Danmachi : Myth Return
1 month ago

DartUpdates: Good ass book, not the best grammar but still easily readable. Nice change to plot.

Danmachi : Myth Return
1 month ago
Thanks for the review.
You can tell me If you find something wrong or hard to understand, i will fix it if i can. View More

DartUpdates: Good ass book, not the best grammar but still easily readable. Nice change to plot.

Danmachi : Myth Return
1 month ago
Ahh..she permanent death right? What a great news XD View More

picaco: Nop

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C149
1 month ago
Thank you
After few month accumulate chapter and find mayi death and kiss renxue.. what a great story.

Well. Did mayi will come back and become the raksasa ? View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C149
1 month ago

Choir: Then the temporal book still in desert. Wew.
Library + temporal book

Tales of Demons, Gods, and Libraries · C0
2 months ago
Then the temporal book still in desert. Wew.
Library + temporal book View More
Tales of Demons, Gods, and Libraries · C0
2 months ago
Just my comment after reading from first chapter. It like, why in the hell he can get qualified become an angel in first place. View More

Mysti: Why would he fall from this? The angels fought the grigori in the great war, I doubt they would have survived if every time the killed an enemy, they would become the enemy. Plus, he's basically just apathetic. He's not wrathful, he's not indulging himself, and he's not drowning in bloodlust. No real reason for him to fall in this chapter. If he banged someone, or killed an innocent... Then yeah, maybe.

DxD: God of Gamers · C21
2 months ago
And yet he do not fall.. a devil in angel skin View More
DxD: God of Gamers · C21
2 months ago
Emiya papa, kiritsugu
Okita alter
Shiki ryougi View More
Naruto : A trio reincarnated from nasuverse · C15
3 months ago
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Naruto : A trio reincarnated from nasuverse · C15
3 months ago
Savior or salvation? View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C108
3 months ago
Hmm..maybe will mayi go out with slaughter king and become raksasa god instead bibi dong(she now become more tame right) View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C103
4 months ago
Not yet. Okay View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C98
4 months ago
He trying survive in test of human sin.. seven sin and finally he fight with spirit beast if i am not wrong View More

picaco: Do you remember what Tang San did in the Hell Road?

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C98
4 months ago
An expectation for mayi to die is enough to make me happy.

But well the reality is hard to accept sometimes View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C98
4 months ago
like I said.. she is yandere!!, quickly immolate her View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C78
5 months ago
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