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  • Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

    Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword

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    Observe how Bai is reincarnated at Douluo Dalu world at Tang San time and aim to be at the top. Being reincarnated as Ning Rongrong big brother with a mutated sword spirit read how he strives to reach the tio ------------------------------------------------------ I don't know anything that you recognize all rights go to the author. The cover is not mine. --------------------------------------------------- This is my first time writing something and english is not even my second language so I will be thankful with correction of grammar and orthography. Constructive comments are appreciete plis avoid toxic comments.

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In a near arc the protagonist will be paul View More

RAmZa7138: Now that ypu bring out Paul, Bai's flaws really stand out. Hope you let Paul take control every now and then it would be pretty interesting specialy now that he seem more stable.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C72
1 day ago
True, the grammar sucks. At first i didn't even read it before post it. And this was my first time writting in English. I think that I improved in last chapters. This was my objective, improve my writting and speed. View More

ThatOneGUy: I'm surprised this even has good ratings with how trash the grammar is.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C1
2 days ago
When i said that he killed normal people? View More

TrSDTKW: So Paul was a absolute dick who killed normal people and was a asshole who for some reason used his skills to be a total and utter twat seems logical SIKE tf is wrong with this dick being a dick to others but to yourself is kinda retarted

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C69
6 days ago
For the first part you will see it in the Future. For the world travel i can assure that there won't be. If i want other worlds i'll do another fanfic, i really don't like travelling worlds, is like making them less important View More

Azathothgrim: I hope in future they will merge together or accept each other (similar to Naruto during training with bee) and become get dual colour hair (similar to Todoroki half-half) mixed black and white or grey.

Second I hope when they combine together awaken a third spirit stronger than the previous something legendary as well as world Traveller in other words because I don't want this fanfiction to finish
thanks in advance.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C67
1 week ago
The previous episode was the thrill of being in control, he won't be always like that View More

KSt0n3: It all make sense now. At least Paul seems to be stabilized.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C67
1 week ago
He learned to use some little comprehension of the other personalities. But as he is not the main one, he can't use it at all power, being lower level one. For example, he can't make another domain except his own. For the wood element is based on calmness, and Paul is not good at it. View More

Illusory_Reality: Paul should be able to use the wood element , right?

You can make paul develop his space control and get a skill like kamui ..... where nothing can hurt him unless someone has more space comrehension

You can make paul also develop teleportation ....in two ways : 1 like flying thunder god teleprting toward marked locations or things , 2 like instant transmission towards certain spirit power auras ,
3 teleporting towards a place he can see like bodyflicker jutsu or like nightcrawler from marvel

You can make his 5th spirit ring be of a mental & ice attributed spirit beast

You can make it so that when bai and paul and the other personalitues fuse at the spirit sage rank ,that his NTGTS spirit alwill evolve and become something like Yin-Yang Chaos sword .....

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C66
1 week ago
He is a spirit king now View More

TrSDTKW: What realm is he at cuz I’ll be happy with the added ruthlessness to bai but I don’t want such a prick who can’t handle darkness so he goes berserk and ruins someone’s life wait correction his life

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C66
1 week ago
I already explained before. The fuse of personalities will be at the spirit sage realm View More

Majeh7: so when will you think they will fuse together ?

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C66
1 week ago
Later it will be explained what exactky happened, when paul episode finish. It won’t take more than 4 chapters View More
Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C64
1 week ago
The oreo spirit it came from Paul while the sword is controlled by bai. With bai disconnected it can’t be used.

For fenrir is glut name from paul, who is influenced by the dominant personality View More

LimitlessDreams: Can anyone remind me where the fenrir comes from? And why the sword can chose not to respond but the oreo agree or probably don't have any will at all(i thought the mutated nine tiles pagoda, the nine tiles sword is still new, so or shouldn't have it's own ancient spirit or somekind of residual spirit/ inheritent memories in bloodline). And the heck!! Is this bleach? Why there is hollow form (Paul) there instead of merging of soul or same person with different lifetime (locked memories), isn't it reincarnation?

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C64
1 week ago
being trapped so much time, he is a little crazy. As social animals, for humans the loneliness could really make you mad. So he is not too stable View More

Grum: ??? Why is Paul like that? Is it because he was trapped?

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C64
1 week ago
I could assure that there won't be otherworlder cheats. I really hate crossover powers, but some reference are good to use. View More

Illusory_Reality: And the author can make paul has an attack sword intent (cut ,pierce ,corrode ,......) and bai can have defense sword intent (parry ,shield ,dome ,....)

And maybe the author can fuse both bai and paul into one entity ......

And also the author can make it so that paul got a cheat when he reincarnted into bai's sword spirit ..... maybe something like the haki and rokushiki martial arts from one piece will be good ??... maybe also mihawk's sword mastery legacy ......

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C63
1 week ago
It's not slaughter View More

Kikik1: She went to try the legacy of slaughter?

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C62
2 weeks ago
And thanks for your advisings View More

Illusory_Reality: You can make it so that bai can add attributes to his created swords ....

Also, you can make bai learn to dual-wield sword or create three-sword style like zoro ....this will improve his power.....

And you can make bai be able to learn other sword intents.....his sword intent (protection) sucks
Preferably if each personality inside his NTGTS spirit is able to learn its own sword intent .....and he can fuse all sword intents together to create heavenly ancestral sword intent that holds the power over creation&destruction, space&time,yin&yan and all elements.....

You can make him undergo the asura god trial and the sea god trial..... maybe even get chosen by the sword god or the elemental god .....

And please give him an ability that allows him to age his spirit rings of his sword spirit...... and give his oreo spirit the ability to recover health/heal and cure poisons as his 5th ring....

And bot to forget .... you can make him give tang san his golden oreo to enhance his blue silver grass ...maybe getting an immortal herb suuted towards himself as repayment .... and maybe get the tang sect techniques too..

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C60
2 weeks ago
In the future you will see something similar of what you told, but i write this story as a weak to strong. I dontmreally like oberpowered character quickly made. I know a could write one like this, with an immense harem but i also know that i would be bored quickly and dont continue for long. So lool forward for bai development View More

Illusory_Reality: You can make it so that bai can add attributes to his created swords ....

Also, you can make bai learn to dual-wield sword or create three-sword style like zoro ....this will improve his power.....

And you can make bai be able to learn other sword intents.....his sword intent (protection) sucks
Preferably if each personality inside his NTGTS spirit is able to learn its own sword intent .....and he can fuse all sword intents together to create heavenly ancestral sword intent that holds the power over creation&destruction, space&time,yin&yan and all elements.....

You can make him undergo the asura god trial and the sea god trial..... maybe even get chosen by the sword god or the elemental god .....

And please give him an ability that allows him to age his spirit rings of his sword spirit...... and give his oreo spirit the ability to recover health/heal and cure poisons as his 5th ring....

And bot to forget .... you can make him give tang san his golden oreo to enhance his blue silver grass ...maybe getting an immortal herb suuted towards himself as repayment .... and maybe get the tang sect techniques too..

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C60
2 weeks ago
Do you want to transform it in some kind of useful advice or you prefer to keep it without any information to improve? Grammar is very widely and as a not native, surely will be bad, even in my language it will be. View More

John_Seng: And ur grammar sucks

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C60
2 weeks ago
Both of them create weapons, the difference being in that unlimited blade works can store them and that age of babylon is using the ground. His skill created swords, it didn't store them. It's only that he can only do one special. So it's neither one or the other, some variation. View More

John_Seng: It like unlimited blade works

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C60
2 weeks ago
At rank 40 you're still a spirit elder, you need a ring ro advance. So you fight vs others spirit elders View More

Bella1000: I had understood that Mc and Fl had already reached level 40, but if so how are they fighting in the spiritual arena with level 30 people .... 😵😵😵

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C25
2 weeks ago
If you arrive at chapter 19 you will se View More

Bella1000: It would be really cool if the author created a fl for mc, many fanfics use ziquing, xiao wu, among others .... a new fl would be refreshing

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C2
2 weeks ago
A good start so far. It would be necessary to see how its develop. I suppose thab in the near future he will explain his martial arts.

For another thing, start sentence with capital letters, it's seems strange and incorrect otherwise View More
Sky blue bison douluo · C3
3 weeks ago
It's not cannon. And it's not a god candidate View More

KSt0n3: Is Hei Qi canon? Seems like someone became God Candidate.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C54
3 weeks ago

Lize: Pls no ****ty drama.. like her mom is get hurt badly..
And making her in coma..
😂🤣😂🤣
Anyway.. thx for chapter.. 😁😁😁

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C53
3 weeks ago

Choir: Well in my opinion its necesarry to slow down the mc so not too op and to get renxue

Btw he amnesia when help his mother not when fight renxue if i am not wrong.

Go go renxue go!!

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C52
3 weeks ago
If this is your opinion, you surely will prefer the next volume, after the tournament. But now it the part that is focusing in making connections that will influence the future View More

Stanvir: Am I the only one who doesnt like mayi and I wish author would focus more on mc.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C50
4 weeks ago
In the next chapter he will ate it, but I warn that it won't be anything too special View More

Choir: Btw, why bai do not eat golden cookie? He still dont have second awakening right?

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C51
4 weeks ago
Lingling, i can assure won't be part View More

the_lost_lotus: Please don't add her to the harem only 2 girls is enough and it'll be easier for you

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C51
4 weeks ago
She will try to be more intimate View More

Original_Sinner: Bai must be protected. Just a question, is Yu Feng going to go after Bai.

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C50
4 weeks ago
It's a complete change in her spirit, changing even her skills creating using her previous energy as reference to form new ones, plus the environmental energy. I second awkening is something abstract, so maybe this can't be consider one.

For Mayi, yeah I always want to her to act like a little sister but being a little yandere. View More

Alext900: It's ridiculous, spiritual rings don't increase their age with the second awakening of the martial soul.
That ant is crazy!

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C49
4 weeks ago
Fuck! The EVs gonna be ****! View More
One Piece - Adventure of a Pokemon Trainer · C1
1 month ago
When I decided to write a fanfic. I though to create one about being reincarnated as Yu Xiaogang. But then I thouught that maybe it will be too diffucult to start writting. Surely he woulb save Bibi dong View More

Lize: Bibi dong............
Kidnapped as a child.. then her entire village destroyed..
Falling in love with that coward.. then being separated by spirit hall..
Then being raped multiple time until she pregnant with a daughter..
Then being that old monster slave..
😅😅😅😅
I want to read a ff about dd but the timeline is when bibi dong still a child.. so the mc can save her..
Then have adventure together.. the 2 of them..
😂🤣😂🤣

Douluo Dalu: 9 Treasure Sword · C48
1 month ago
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