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lsoma: Liked the idea of the story and think that it could have been great however I feel from up to the point ive read the author has made many poor decisions. Why im stoping now cause if it's like this now I can't imagine what it's like later. The thing im most upset about is his devil fruit choosing. I mean wind? How unoriginal, would have been way better if you give him a power that not every damn one piece fanfic has. Make the fruit his own if you get me ? If he had to eat one of the three there and then why tf did he go for wind ? Doesn't increase anything at all. Like there was blood fruit and myth. Why choose wind ? makes no sense.

Also I dont see the point of the wishes he made? Strong body... why is he so weak then if his wish was for a strong body ??? Also his other wish.. to know everything in one piece. With this frankly how fcking boring of a wish.. whats the point of knowing everything in the world ? You know what gold rogers treasure is, you know where this gold island is, plus if he knows everything then why does he need a map?

The only thing you have shown him using it is for fighting styles.. why couldn't he have just wished for a fighting style for himself then ? I mean I can kind of guess... your gonna use it later for your convince when he knows stuff that he's not meant to ? secret island etc to drag the story along

One Piece : Throne War
4 days ago
Even tho Adaptive growth bloodline has a bloodline in the name I doubt it is, it literally just him having infinite potential of mind and body, but he have to work them separately, reread chapter 2. Anyways up to this point, it doesn't tell anything cultivation related, every time his training is mention, it's all about physical exercises. The only thing he have from a cultivation novel is probably the library View More

Theus0707: Ok first of all, do u remember the wishes he was granted? Adaptive growth bloodline? Legendary library of heaven path? This thing was basically taken from a cultivation novels and we all know what kind of fuking training they do, in most mc is meditating in extreme environment is the norm.
And second of all don't worry I don't think he will be frozen like Steve...lots of content in-between😇

Bruce Rogers: Brother of Steve Rogers (Captain America) · C9
1 week ago
First of all, while he could still learn martial arts from the library, training in his mindscape will be useless because at the end of the day he is still in his mind. He needs his actual body for that, any type of body exercise or in his case martial arts needs him to actually train his muscle memory .
Second, putting a body on ice or cryostasis won't make a body strong, it literally freezes his muscles and organs (if you know how muscles works then understanding this should be a no brainer). View More

Theus0707: Even if he is captured in ice he can still train in his mindscape and his body will adapt and become stronger due to low temperatures and high pressure 😅

Bruce Rogers: Brother of Steve Rogers (Captain America) · C9
1 week ago
I hope you don't put Bruce on ice, that time could put to use with his training. View More
Bruce Rogers: Brother of Steve Rogers (Captain America) · C9
1 week ago

Ji_Yidao: This novel is written by a middle schooler. The plot is really dumb and keeps getting dumber as the story goes on, even hentai has plot that makes more sense than this. The authors attempts at fixing his protagonist with self-analysis monologues completely ruins the novel, instead of showing character development he just gives ****ty monologues (such as when he talks about being picky with his women but also he randomly rapes girls in the starting 10 chapters). The fact that his entire family knows about the system and that there's "another side of society" that the MC doesn't know about is also retarded. This should have stayed as a lust novel, sadly it's spiraling into random autism.

The Lust System
1 week ago

BlaqueLyte: It's like the author doesn't even bother reading the comments made by his readers

The Lust System · C24
1 week ago

Moon_represent: Lol mc say he is choosy over his women but he just say a couple chap ago " if i ever need to complete this mission i could just search a girl at school"..............................

The Lust System · C22
1 week ago

xShadowyLegendx: Nothing happened, except him going into Hagrids Hut and looking around.

Taking on the Magical World · C80
1 week ago
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It took half of the chapter to recap last one View More
Taking on the Magical World · C58
1 week ago

Skepparn: So how long is 1 conversation gonna take? It really cannot continue with 3-4 chapters a conversation like this, it's just a long boring thing that could've gotten over with in 1 chapter

Taking on the Magical World · C45
1 week ago
Wow only chapter 1 and we're already getting some action View More
Rebirth in a Magical World · C1
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C26
It's really good, but got to be honest at first I was kinda skeptical mainly at the title, I mean come on, no one put 'A harry potter fanfic' as a title, other than that I thought it was going to be another fanfic that blindly follow the plot, and it doesn't. While it does follow the plot, you can see how the mc's interference makes meaningful changes in the story and how this changes impact all the people involved, it makes your mc truly feel real in your story.

Overall your story is great! View More
Fate's Request: A Harry Potter FanFiction
2 weeks ago

Montuixote: This is honestly just a transcript of the CW show. The only difference is the even dumber protagonist having a system. Barry does the same stupid things and makes the same stupid mistakes as he did in the original, despite knowing they're coming

INTO THE FLASH.
2 weeks ago

Haise99: P.S. : what Gate of Babylon is that if its empty, it's basically just the same as Erza trash magic,, some times I don't understand the thought process of Author 😒😒😒

Slayer of Babylon · C2
2 weeks ago

Medusa17112001: I really hate the fact his father died. He was a very loving father and husband in my opinion. Incest would have been good but doing it by removing him was bad. U could have done it by some occasional playtime and not direct s*x.

Naruto: Jin's Path · C0
3 weeks ago
Well like he said, even though he lived another life, he was just a normal person with normal job, he wasn't a soldier or someone with quick decision making, and although he did practice, it's still unlikely he should beat someone with experience (as I said should because maybe the author will have him win). View More

Zefelina: Well, he's mentally older. If we take Harry's power at the age of thirteen and Draco now, I believe that he could defeat HP with no problem. Granted, HP isn't a genius and not good enough to go to these dueling competitions. But it's not like Draco didn't learn or practice anything, be it before or when in Hogwarts.

Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C52
3 weeks ago
As much as I love mc winning every obstacles, it’s kinda unbelievable even if he is supposed to be a genius, as experiences beat talents and day. View More
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C52
3 weeks ago
Look I’m not gonna argue with you of what the author should or shouldn’t do on his novel, but you have to understand the author is basically picking many characters from different anime and putting it to his fanfic, if the fanfic was all about shouko’s story (don’t remember the name) then I would have agreed with you, but it’s not. I don’t want to wait +50 chapters so the arc can move along, it’s likely the author drops his fanfic before the actual plot started (guessing from the title, it is most likely going to focus more on that anime idk). View More

Nirvanic_Sun: I'm fine with the grandma dying, it's the author killing her off YEARS before she died in canon just so he can get closer to Shouko that I'm upset about. There could have been a long buildup to her death and him helping her with her bullies and to come to terms with what will happen once she's old enough to understand the concept of dying, something that could have been much more emotional. But no, Shouko needs to be sad just so that the mc can exercise the shoulder she's going to cry on. All of the protagonists tears and emotion feel misplaced since if he where never born, Shouko would have her grandma for years to come.

Re-Nisekoi · C6
3 weeks ago
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I quite find it refreshing, the way his life has it’s ups and downs makes the mc feel more real, especially with so many fanfic nowadays find death a taboo subject. And if you’re really sensitive about it but without death, I suggest the other fanfic which this novel derived from. View More

Nirvanic_Sun: Again you kill someone off because it's easy to give characters emotions when they're crying. Her grandma doesn't need to die for him to go to the next step in his relationship with shouko, the fact that you kill characters off so easily just to advance relationships/plot disgusts me.

Re-Nisekoi · C6
3 weeks ago
I’m so relieved that you’re taking the time skip route, I’ve seen way to many authors that like to start off a story way before the plot just to crash and burn before even reaching for the plot and drop a fanfic altogether. View More
Re-Nisekoi · C3
3 weeks ago

ash0700: its called dragging. make more fillers make more chapters, nothing happened, i just skim it. sooner or later, its dropped because theres literally nothing happening

Cursed with Mystic Eyes in Naruto · C26
1 month ago

LostClouds: Is it ironic that after leaving to go on his journey that it only took thirty minutes for Gin to be captured. Now our MC will follow the young girl who captured his heart, all while doing his best to make it as awkward as possible. Pokemon: Whipped Edition

Pokémon: SoulSilver · C17
1 month ago

DarthCerdac: Still a dick move to end in the middle of a sentence though

Unlimited Spells Works - A Harry Potter fic. · C27
1 month ago

Lingtian47: Hermione did absolutely nothing wrong, that's Harry behavior thé problèm.
In addition Hermione does everything to take care of hime it would be nil to destroy their relationship

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C86
1 month ago

SamStrike: To me, it's Harry fault. He could have easily make along with Minerva, all she asked is to come along but he is too pridefull to even do that? Even if he doesnt respect her as a mage/teacher he should respect her as an older person. He is also part of Hogwarts considering he used all those secret rooms for himself.

He should also see things from their perspective, a boy considered to be bad was seen near a burning hut, it's normal to think he may be responsible especially when he refuse to say the real reason and to talk. But he just blindly think he is right without considering others' persepective, thinking he is above everone and everyone should only look at his side, he is just like Voldemort in the end

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C86
1 month ago

Ammar_monim: DROPPED!! It started amazing but the mc became more and more unstable and retarded 80 chapter and he accomplished nothing and your no were near finishing the 1st year and the side characters are pure garbage I mean how many chapters were just on Hermione "betraying" the mc the adults are Dumbledore fanatics maybe you should tone down the drama and focus more on learning magic and doing anything worthwhile.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C86
1 month ago

Kali_Grapy: Reading this last two chapters I discovered that this HARRY POTTER is mentally unstable. He suffer from PTSD and trauma and such. Growing up with an abusive family then sending him off to a world he truly know is already a bad idea but at least a mind of a child can easily adapt to things but this harry potter with an another soul just made it more destructive. He's controlling, destructive, and can't cope with his emotions. The only thing that stopping him from becoming a sociopath that will destroy everything like voldemort is Hermione and Penelope but the moment this two do something he really didn't like, he'll hurt them, badly. He attempted to strangle Hermione just because of her said betrayal, which in my opinion is an overreaction. Would you really strangle a woman you said to love, let's say your lover(supposed) or mom, just because you felt humiliated in front of everyone? No, not even Lucius malfoy would do it and that guy is one arrogant bastard.

All I can say is that he need a psychiatrist to help him or cope with his problems or he will hurt everyone he love. This harry potter isn't really a genius, I say he's a failure.

And to the people that said Hermione need to go, I say to you NO. If you don't want this harry potter to become literally a dark lord then he need Hermione or someone like her to stop him from being one. Hermione is the only one that's keeping him at least have a humanity, believe it or not.

AND PLEASE AUTHOR, FIX HIM ALREADY!! HE'S TO UNSTABLE AND IF HE DIDN'T KILL HIMSELF BY ACCIDENT, HE'LL PROBABLY KILL OR HURT EVERYONE HE CARE ABOUT.

Peace.

New Dawn- A Harry Potter Transmigration Fanfic · C86
1 month ago

Thoth0: We dont care about Patreons, we care about how there are no chapters being posted on webnovel. And how we get false post that are just not chapters.

Chronicles of Arth: Prince of Shadows · C0
1 month ago
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The comments, though it is predictable it’s still funny, honestly I find it refreshing for an mc to not just outright kill the guy, don’t get me wrong I’m not a pacifist, but killing everyone that oppose you or disagree with you just makes you a one dimensional mc or an edgy psychopath especially those that justify killing as good. Anyways I’ve been that guy on the comments, but when so many fanfic pop ups like that, it gets redundant. View More
I am in Harry Potter! · C2
1 month ago

atomjack111: people are all like murder the drunk but most people aren't complete psychopaths who want to be come murder hobos I can see in the future when he is fighting evil wizards but he is a freshly reincarnated teenager who lived a less then average life so murdering when he wakes up dosent seem all to reasonable

I am in Harry Potter! · C2
1 month ago
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