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Emh later in the novel he is not being a pussy View More

Feoinn: Read it up to chapter 30 something because I didn't want to judge too quickly. I was wrong. The MC is a coward, awkward guy even if his cultivation is high, he mumbles, stutters and cannot even act normal. Dont get me started on his fighting skills. The dude is a pussy. End of, no character improvement. If otakus are presented like this in fiction I hope in reality they're not that worse in Asia. If they are, I feel sorry for their parents.

Unfathomable Patriarch
1 month ago
Twentieth? I think you meant twelfth right? View More
Cultivator in a Zombie Apocalypse · C22
1 month ago
Write these specific on the prologue View More

KingSeshy: He was 16 on Earth and had learned previous techniques.

Forgotten One · C6
1 month ago
U need to write these specific words like this it's more realistic View More

KingSeshy: The beast was already dead. The point of a beast's tooth is the sharpest part and without any power behind it, it won't be able to cut his skin. Also, he didn't grab it from the point.

Forgotten One · C3
1 month ago

GoldenKitsune: Is this a demonic sect?
Because only demonic sect do these thing to their potentially new disciples xD
A righteous sect will accept all kind of forfeit even at the last trial, they can't block their freedom of choice to leave the trial

Forgotten One · C18
1 month ago
Is this a demonic sect?
Because only demonic sect do these thing to their potentially new disciples xD
A righteous sect will accept all kind of forfeit even at the last trial, they can't block their freedom of choice to leave the trial View More
Forgotten One · C18
1 month ago
I want to know how a youngster from earth on his firsts battles can do these movement and have this much experience in combat, but it's your novel and you make the rules. View More
Forgotten One · C6
1 month ago

GoldenKitsune: Author i think that all the people who are reading this novel think that instead of more chapter with a low level of grammar, we prefer less chapter but with an high level of grammar, it's less stressful for you and you can improve your writing skills.

Forgotten One · C5
1 month ago
Author i think that all the people who are reading this novel think that instead of more chapter with a low level of grammar, we prefer less chapter but with an high level of grammar, it's less stressful for you and you can improve your writing skills. View More
Forgotten One · C5
1 month ago
Him sharpening wolf's theeth is seriously a joke lol
Aren't they sharp enough?
And how he can take them out of the wolf mouth without suffering an injury?
You might not know but wolf's teeth are really sharp :) View More
Forgotten One · C3
1 month ago

GoldenKitsune: Aslan

Saving The Future · C33
1 month ago
Aslan View More
Saving The Future · C33
1 month ago

Featun: Aslan!

Saving The Future · C33
1 month ago

KIING: Juno kind of ruins the story. Especially the suicide part

Saving The Future · C8
1 month ago

LongSongGolden: Ikr, "oh I've just absorbed literally galaxies worth of souls, but this one little girls soul is apparently enough to kill me I've she kills herself in some retarded way" what a bad addition to the story.

Saving The Future · C7
1 month ago

lsoma: Ik it may change in chap 25 like you said however we havent got to that point. Reading this has completely turned me off the story. She appeared outta no where and starts talking all this sht? From reading now it doesnt make me want to continue especially if it goes on for 25 chaps.

Its like with enemies they may be annoying but they are not in every chap. With her char she is gonna be with him the whole time and in every chap. A constant annoyance.

Gl in future chaps

Saving The Future · C7
1 month ago

LongSongGolden: Wow, just because you've read worse doesn't mean it's a good thing. Annoying is annoying, no way around it. Novel did not need some annoying loli girl in the MCs head who is basically retarded and serves as filler while she screws around whenever the MC tries to ask a simple question.
If this is "comedy" then kill me now because this is horrible comedy.

Saving The Future · C7
1 month ago

Darcksage: Extremely obnoxious character added.

Saving The Future · C7
1 month ago

tekite: So this little ***** is just a freeloader then? He literally had to struggle for 2 billion years, endure unimaginable pain to get where he is, but this ***** ass ****er just fell asleep and woke up. Come on, wtf. You literally undid everything he did. Even if she is a type of system, she shouldnt have any power or control over him, like committing suicide and killing him at the same time. He literally went through hell to get where he is and earn his powers and this fucking pipsqueek just comes out of nowhere with some type of control over his soul and body.

Saving The Future · C7
1 month ago

Arentsvelt: How could this book go premium when the author cant even find someone to edit his work?

To the author:
If your reading this review, why dont you try reading your novel through the app. Lets see if you wont get annoyed by the """.

Emperor of Steel
1 month ago

GoldenKitsune: Wth why the mc in the previous chapter was a ''ok im not going to kill innocent because they did nothing to me'', but now he's going on a rampage and is killing everybody in his sight?

Evolution God
3 months ago
Reading Status: C30
Wth why the mc in the previous chapter was a ''ok im not going to kill innocent because they did nothing to me'', but now he's going on a rampage and is killing everybody in his sight? View More
Evolution God
3 months ago

TheDolphin: Good sorry but it’s a bit repetitive with what seems to be “forced plot” and the MC does dumb things like letting a girl with the freaking Eyes Of Destiny go chase he just “doesn’t care” aka Arthur cant be creative and wants to move plot. It’s mostly super rushed and descriptions mean jack ****. There only relevant in that moment but then never again. Also apparently dragons are pretty common. This novel also falls in the wuxia trap, AND ITS NOT EVEN A WIXIA NOVEL. The second the MC gets stronger apparently everybody in the world is a suddenly
Also stronger. “Lord rank? I got a few those in the back, want some?” Also MC is pretty damn dumb, like 0 common sense. He doesn’t exploit moves that give himself TONS of exp cause he doesn’t “want to hurt innocents” which is completely forgotten about when it’s no longer needed for the story. Like don’t give him the move is he can’t exploit it ffs.

The only reason it even gets 3 is cause there’s no human transformation yet, but when there is the story is going insta 1. Also the pace is a bit to fast it seeing how he evolves can be cool at times.

Evolution God
3 months ago

airambach26: Just kill the giant left the elves since they did not do anything to mc I hate how mc become to greedy

Evolution God · C30
3 months ago

phamtomof57: I'm not sure what to say... the MC is losing his mind and sees everything as exp like a game. The elves didn't do anything yet were killed without pity. What will happen to the MC when he will reach the peak if not thinking that this life was void and he just took a path of loneliness 😧

Evolution God · C30
3 months ago

AJMaxi82: Thx for the chapter, also I think it’s a bit cruel to kill hundreds and maybe thousands of innocent people/creatures just for a little bit of exp, don’t you think?

Evolution God · C29
3 months ago

Sanguine: I'm going to be real, I would love to read this novel, but the webnovel logo int he bottom left tells me this is sponsored by them and therefore later in the story we are going to get ss blocked from chapters so i'm not going to waste my time.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
3 months ago

AzureMystic: Id like to start off by saying that the concept behind the novel has alot of potential, four races create a vr mmorpg where participation is somewhat mandatory after a certain age and most conflicts are settled in game rather than real life.
However none of the important parts of the novel are explained such as why his parents dont help him out when hes just starting out or play with him at all and why his school is so loose with rules/regulations regarding the game when they dont teach anything else, how he manages to find a legacy item somewhere that hundreds if not thousands of people visit regularly for years, the small amount of classes even though the game has been running for hundreds of years, the company/ people behind the game i dont think was mentioned and they have not become a huge super power even though they built something so important, why three women who are 7-9 years older than him fall in love ludicrously fast, why he gains a huge amount of money but hides it for fear of the government coming after him instead of using it for his family, why a 16 year old kid doesnt act like one when hes had a relatively normal upbringing and doesnt have any actual issues and one the author claims to be shy and introverted doesnt behave that way half the time, why the MC has actually no friends not even close acquaintances even though he has lived for 16 years, why people treat NPC’s like dirt even though being courteous at least leads to more opportunities and quests even after hundreds of years of the game being around, how the MC seems stronger than average characters even though he hasnt put any points into stats (before he gets his wolf partner), why the “CLASS” quest that he gets requires him to run all over the game world before getting ANY ability or even the class name, the authors fetish with black cloaks and the way he introduces them, why does the MC need to keep everything a secret when the major powers offered him benefits in exchange and the did so somewhat respectfully instead of chasing him down and killing him to level one, why he bought a mask if he doesnt take off the cloak around people except his harem and NPC’s.

I have a lot more things i could add but i already passed 2k characters so ill end it there, but please get an editor and translator, everytime i read a novel like this i cant help but feel it would be at least 2x as good in the native language of the author and a “rough” translation to english brings the story down.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
3 months ago

EveningSong: This novel was struck by the curse of the failure rabbit. It was quite good until the female love interest became a harem in training. Then all the interesting bits was buried under a pile of boring and the novel died.

Dropped as of chapter 80. Thanks for about 30 good chapters Mr. Author. I might check back in 6 months or so to see what happens.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
3 months ago

Skyrixz: I just want to say that your intro and starting of the novel was great and all until you reach chapter 44
..the mc meets a girl and becomes flipping retarded by giving in to a girl just because she is pretty...the mc was just about to get op but noooooo! The freaking author just had to ruin it by doing this crappy character development. Manipulative, and controlling females? Not my cup of tea. Sorry but im dropping this novel. Was great while it lasted.

MMORPG: The Tales of Souls
3 months ago
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