Drakiros

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well yes if he knew it was a celestial

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Drakiros

1mth

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this gives me joy

Shalazar bursting into cartoonishly evil laughter did not help her confidence in me.

Drakiros

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perhaps

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Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin

Book&Literature · DreamyApe

Drakiros

2mth

Commented

His face twisted, "You stupid, ugly motherfucker!"

Drakiros

2mth

Replied to Vyktor

I was going to say the T and D should be closer enough for a mistyping but I guess it was the auto corrector

"Zu'u lost bo fah hin klov ahrk Zu'u fent kriin hi us hin rah!"

Drakiros

2mth

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a good story so far, a few grammatical error here and there and a few repeat of sentences,but overall good, now in game you have choices such as becoming institute leader after destroying the brotherhood and railroad (that has yet to be mentioned here), now according to what ive read so far this minutemen uses a lot of tech so you could after nora somehow gets institute leadership mesh both factions into one, Sico(that I keep calling Sisco) could get Paladin Danse to become the next brotherhood leader(accordign to some remaining files in the game this would have been a option but was scrapped) mesh the faction with the minuteman

Nora: "Sico, given the situation, I'm unsure of my next steps. What should we do? How do we approach Shaun and the Institute now?"

Fallout 4: Rebirth At Vault 81

Video Games · Tang12

Drakiros

3mth

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it is a nice read apart from the charm working even though it is visible your going to break it soon,

I wanted to ask all of you, how do you like the writing so far? I can't stop comparing myself to others and only thing I notice is that my writing isn't that good.

Drakiros

3mth

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it is a good story so far , the only thing that bothers me is that the battles are written using the same style as normal text/speech by that I mean the battle scenes you could either put them in italics or BOLD my honest opinion, apart from that the battles are nice to read

ch 19 chapter - 19, Pokémon Movie 2000 - part 1

Drakiros

3mth

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honestly might as well bring serana from skyrim somehow xD, or just a new character that fits within danmachi , leave the known characters to be themselves

Alr guys tell me who do you wish to be MC's romance interest?

Drakiros

3mth

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took me a bit to get it but this be my reaction

"So... grandfather" I drawl, the word feeling rather unnatural in my mouth.

Drakiros

3mth

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I honestly can't really say much because its been a while since I last read this story itself so I'm legit a bit lost trying to remember who's who and the why's of where the MC currently is at, anyway from what I do remember and where it currently is at, it is a good fine read keep doing this good work you do with this story

AN: we are off to Japan soon. tell me what you think, critical feedback is welcome, I know the pacing is fast, a bit too fast maybe, but i'll leave you guys to tell me.

Drakiros

3mth

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great, now that it is near the start of the journey, I shall comeback to this story in a 100 or 200 chapters goodbye. See yal later, hey author I'm currently writing a fanfic on fanfiction dot net, called multiverse tamer, and I wonder if you'd allow me to use your style of system along the concept of the "royal" version of pokemons, currently it only has two chapters but your story being one that inspired me to start writing my own I just really wonder if I can use what I asked

I was happy to see them all before my journey and we definitely had fun talking about everything possible. A lot of advice was thrown out, and all of them said that the most important bit was to have fun. They all left shortly after 10 p.m. since they knew that I would be leaving early, and less than an hour after they left, I went to bed after wishing my parents a good night.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

Drakiros

3mth

Replied to Dr_Dred

now all you need is jagged sides, so you can literally spearhead into the side of an enemy ship and commence boarding straight from the main dreadnought

(Image here)

Star Wars A Galaxy Reborn

Others · Dr_Dred

Drakiros

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A

The cave is small and mostly empty, save for a medium sized old chest, looking it over I feel a bright, almost blinding aura.

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Drakiros

3mth

Replied to Ragequit1

this the comment I was searching whenever I hear dodge I hear this sentence xD

A sadistic smile spreads on her face and I know we are fucked "Your first lesson is.... dodging"

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Drakiros

3mth

Replied to ArSolaris

the most common sense answer I've ever seen , how come I've never thought of that

"He's not crazy," Alaric interjected. "Read those words backward in Latin, and it's 'I am up to no good.'"

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Book&Literature · bobthewriter

Drakiros

3mth

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also this right here either he should be first or last because he doesn't have a surname, Alaric what? surnames are the most significant thing in HP world,whenever potter is mentioned you think of either James or Harry , when Evans is mentions you think of Lily or petunia, Weasley any of the big family members dumbledore is the surname of Albus so in the end what is Alaric Surname

The last three students were sorted:

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Book&Literature · bobthewriter

Drakiros

3mth

Commented

I honestly thought I surname would be mentioned

"Alaric."

Harry Potter: Journey to Godhood

Book&Literature · bobthewriter

Drakiros

3mth

Commented

I dunno why but when I think arcanine line going dragon I expect it to look like the Long Dragon type

'Affinities: Fire, Dragon (budding)*'

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

Drakiros

3mth

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this is a me thing but Alpha Squad rows Better on the tongue than squad alpha

"Excellent!" she said at my reaction. "You'll be joining Squad Alpha, which is directly under my command. Immediately head to the armory and pick up your allocated field gear as well as a gun and rifle. You better hurry since you only have 3.5 minutes until you have to be at the north gate," she shared with me, and I briskly headed to the armory after giving her a final salute.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

Anime & Comics · Azrail93

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