RED_SABER_NERO

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Replied to Hummus

His idea of story is good, but it become weird if author don't know geopolitc and millitary theory. Editor work is to give author direction to which his story will go. Explaining politic and millitary matter to author is good idea to make it more beareable to read.

ch 0 2 Volume 1 Chapter 1 Battle of Shura Sea

President Make a Unrivalled country In Another World

War · NandaMaulana

RED_SABER_NERO

1yr

Commented

Huuh it disapointing that mc is to selfish. He can use his ability to not impergenate woman but olga and chole is last of their race, olga will still feel responbility because she is former dark elf queen. What mc do will hurt olga feeling.

ch 19 Ch.17 (R-18)

RED_SABER_NERO

1yr

Commented

So the 2 of them is last of their race huh. Then it good idea to make them fertille and impergenate them as soon as possible

ch 18 Ch.16

RED_SABER_NERO

1yr

Commented

Hopping chat group will go to adventure to new dimension.

ch 175 A Good Day.

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

I hope Mc will go to FGO to push him and adapting using Balance Breaker

ch 130 Interlude 6

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

This..... it have scent of teanage drama. Author you need to reread your story and you will see how agreasive ruby is unrealistic.

ch 15 15

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

Gott mitt uns

ch 126 Preparing for an Invasion

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

With this much reaserch in weapon how in the world future tech is just worth a $300 billion? Weapon is bringing a profit and with america millitary all over the world I surpiresed that they not upgrade all their frontline unit with better equipmment. With just weapon future tech is worth in hundread trillion dollar and honestly with all their current product in market future tech it self is worth more than that.

ch 80 Armored Suit Trials

Re: Life - Business & Technology

Sci-fi · Viincentt

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

Why I feel you forgot abaut chat group? It becoming rare to see comunication betwen member of grup.

ch 167 Of Prison Moons.

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Posted

Hmmm overall it good story but honestly one thing that distrubing is MC reasoning, when he relase games in his website his explanation is to lacking. Do this story still active? Because it already 1 year but I don't see unlocked chapter. I see 300 + chapter but I just see 39 chapter unlocked. I do hope it this story will unlock some chapter because not all people have bank in their account.

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

Not that I care enough, seing same text in one paragraph is already enough to know this guy is Fking araund

ch 0 2 A night never to be forgotten (18+)

Ain Soph Aur: The Holy Maiden's wish (DxD X Fate Fic)

Anime & Comics · J_Titan

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

Heeh this why I love nero....she is cherfull and honestly her live is suck but she still keep her cherfull personality. I still hope Mc will recover if it not his next mission will be pain for him. So what new world next? Mass effect, Helo, or yujou senki?

ch 164 Strangers.

RED_SABER_NERO

2yr

Commented

You write a story or diary? If you write a story don't use Btw. Change it with other word or don't use it.....

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Why nerf her?? Do you forgot in age of god in nasuverse is full of danger.....if you want to nerf her you need to not letting MC parent die....demigod or not to survive in wild is same as making your character died....you idea is good but your strory is to short and to fast