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NightcoreNewbie: If there isn't like 20+ ending chapters closing all the open-ended things, the author will be hated for the next 5+ years and if he makes another novel, he'll be review bombed. GL author but please don't mess this up like the previous 500 chapters.

True Martial World · C1703
3 months ago
If there isn't like 20+ ending chapters closing all the open-ended things, the author will be hated for the next 5+ years and if he makes another novel, he'll be review bombed. GL author but please don't mess this up like the previous 500 chapters. View More
True Martial World · C1703
3 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: First off, let me say that the translation quality and updates are quite good. There is some odd grammar here and there but within acceptable margins considering the upload speed.

I've read up to the latest chapter as of this review (ch. 151) and the MC has barely progressed in cultivating. There's supposed to be 8 or 9 levels and most likely more, but up to ch. 151, he's barely at half kan-level i.e. the first level. According to the statsguy, this novel only has 798 chapters which means more than 1/5 is complete and the MC has done almost nothing.

The author spends more time of emphasizing the social life and random events regarding the MC which doesn't contribute to the overall story in my opinion. Even though he should studying for exams or cultivating to progress himself, why is he doing random things like going to his fiance's middle school for parent/teacher meetings or "protecting" her from other students. She didn't need his protection before, why now?

Let's move on to character development, trick statement, there isn't much to begin with. His school friends make the same lame jokes about his good luck with women and trying to get the hot girls' numbers from him. His fiance's constant attitude problem hasn't changed much and his just-revealed childhood friend never liked him until he started getting popular which betrays her own character design. She was portrayed in the beginning as goody-two-shoes girl who didn't care about popularity, wealth, or power, but she ends up doing the exact opposite.

Lastly, while I understand China's age of consent is 14, it's still kind of creepy to read about a university student is touching a middle school girl's legs who is 15. Why does the author constantly describe how sexy a middle school student is? It's not just the MC's fiance either, there are several occasions where it mentions some of her friends and other random students. It's just weird to me reading it since I'm American and where my state's age of consent is 18.

Take my review for a grain of salt but the story just isn't going anywhere at this rate for me to want to continue reading it. Have a nice day.

Dragon King's Son-In-Law
5 months ago
Your statement would be perfectly fine if the author actually put in effort to have Yi Yun be emotionally attached to other people but he hasn't. How many people has he met in the story where he "cares" for the people he saves? He saves them from death then gives them some items to survive on their own and then leaves. If the author really wanted this story to be more emotional, he would have done it instead of randomly placing people into the story to add conflicts. View More

Akhil225: U are wrong Human Emotions are always precious and Beautiful..... What the point raising his strength exponentially for what.... for whom....

True Martial World · C1632
6 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: Great. What's next? Is Luo Hou'er going to come back too? Come on. This story is supposed to be about Yi Yun's rise and not all these side story girls coming and going like water drops in a sink. What has Lin Xingtong done since she came back? Nearly nothing while Yi Yun saves her again. Please make it stop.

True Martial World · C1632
6 months ago
Great. What's next? Is Luo Hou'er going to come back too? Come on. This story is supposed to be about Yi Yun's rise and not all these side story girls coming and going like water drops in a sink. What has Lin Xingtong done since she came back? Nearly nothing while Yi Yun saves her again. Please make it stop. View More
True Martial World · C1632
6 months ago
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Beauty and the Bodyguard
8 months ago
Reading Status: C151
First off, let me say that the translation quality and updates are quite good. There is some odd grammar here and there but within acceptable margins considering the upload speed.

I've read up to the latest chapter as of this review (ch. 151) and the MC has barely progressed in cultivating. There's supposed to be 8 or 9 levels and most likely more, but up to ch. 151, he's barely at half kan-level i.e. the first level. According to the statsguy, this novel only has 798 chapters which means more than 1/5 is complete and the MC has done almost nothing.

The author spends more time of emphasizing the social life and random events regarding the MC which doesn't contribute to the overall story in my opinion. Even though he should studying for exams or cultivating to progress himself, why is he doing random things like going to his fiance's middle school for parent/teacher meetings or "protecting" her from other students. She didn't need his protection before, why now?

Let's move on to character development, trick statement, there isn't much to begin with. His school friends make the same lame jokes about his good luck with women and trying to get the hot girls' numbers from him. His fiance's constant attitude problem hasn't changed much and his just-revealed childhood friend never liked him until he started getting popular which betrays her own character design. She was portrayed in the beginning as goody-two-shoes girl who didn't care about popularity, wealth, or power, but she ends up doing the exact opposite.

Lastly, while I understand China's age of consent is 14, it's still kind of creepy to read about a university student is touching a middle school girl's legs who is 15. Why does the author constantly describe how sexy a middle school student is? It's not just the MC's fiance either, there are several occasions where it mentions some of her friends and other random students. It's just weird to me reading it since I'm American and where my state's age of consent is 18.

Take my review for a grain of salt but the story just isn't going anywhere at this rate for me to want to continue reading it. Have a nice day. View More
Dragon King's Son-In-Law
9 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: Everyone! Get your boycotts ready if this reunion goes south! Also, **** the author if he really does that!

True Martial World · C1544
9 months ago
Everyone! Get your boycotts ready if this reunion goes south! Also, **** the author if he really does that! View More
True Martial World · C1544
9 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: I swear to god. If this author teleports Yi Yun to another Empyrean and doesn't reunite him with Xintong in this arc, I'm done with this novel.

True Martial World · C1524
10 months ago
I swear to god. If this author teleports Yi Yun to another Empyrean and doesn't reunite him with Xintong in this arc, I'm done with this novel. View More
True Martial World · C1524
10 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: I don't even bother paying stones for this novel anymore. I just wait a few days and the chapter becomes free.

True Martial World · C1503
11 months ago
I don't even bother paying stones for this novel anymore. I just wait a few days and the chapter becomes free. View More
True Martial World · C1503
11 months ago
I don't even bother using the stones anymore. I just wait a couple days and the chapter releases for free. View More

DK1018: wow I didn't think it was possible for a n 11 spirit stone chapter to contain nothing... but I guess miracles do happen.

True Martial World · C1501
11 months ago
But everything in this story is about bone age which Yi Yun only aged 5 years regardless of how long that seclusion was. If the water didn't stop his bone age, I'd say he was 300 but it didn't. View More

Devgobind: It's five years in normal, but in River of forgetfulness cave it's 200 years

True Martial World · C1493
11 months ago
No, he didn't. After he took the river of forgetfullness water, he went back to check on the pill in Magus empire and it had only been 5 years since he went into seclusion. I just checked the chapter and I quote in C1354: "A hundred and twenty years was long and it was nearly double Yi Yun's present age. But in fact, due to the River of Forgetfulness's water, Yi Yun's true bone age had only increased by five years. It was as though time had stopped acting on Yi Yun's body over the hundred plus years." Essentially, his abilities aged by 200 years but he himself did not. View More

Devgobind: No, he spent around two hundred years using river of forgetfulness, so he is around 350-400 years old

True Martial World · C1493
11 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: Hold on a second. Yi Yun is nowhere near 300 years old. Shouldn't he be like 150 at most? If I'm not wrong, he entered the sinkhole at around 100 years and he hasn't experiences enough time skips to be that many years old. Although, judging by how much the author forgets about his own story, I wouldn't doubt it if he didn't remember Yi Yun's age.

True Martial World · C1493
11 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: Hold on a second. Yi Yun is nowhere near 300 years old. Shouldn't he be like 150 at most? If I'm not wrong, he entered the sinkhole at around 100 years and he hasn't experiences enough time skips to be that many years old. Although, judging by how much the author forgets about his own story, I wouldn't doubt it if he didn't remember Yi Yun's age.

True Martial World · C1493
11 months ago
Hold on a second. Yi Yun is nowhere near 300 years old. Shouldn't he be like 150 at most? If I'm not wrong, he entered the sinkhole at around 100 years and he hasn't experiences enough time skips to be that many years old. Although, judging by how much the author forgets about his own story, I wouldn't doubt it if he didn't remember Yi Yun's age. View More
True Martial World · C1493
11 months ago

NightcoreNewbie: Hmm I just thought of something. What if the nameless sword guy is being controlled by the bone and is luring people to feed it constantly? He did say that he went down this path numerous times and yet the bone still hasn't been taken. That makes no sense when every character in this story is greedy prick.

True Martial World · C1463
1 year ago

NightcoreNewbie: I wonder how he saves himself this time. I doubt Bai Wuya would keep interfering because Wentian would just turn into all the young masters that he killed before. Arrogant and expecting protections from his elders.

Ancient Godly Monarch · C759
1 year ago

NightcoreNewbie: How is it safer to go to the RSS where all the enemies are waiting for him? That's doesn't seem smart.

Ancient Godly Monarch · C609
1 year ago

NightcoreNewbie: I don't think that is Bai Yueyin. She's most likely a reincarnation or possibly someone who has the same aura as her. I highly doubt that Bai Yueyin wouldn't be able to sense Yi Yun's sword dao especially since he cultivates in techniques from the Pure Yang Sword Palace.

True Martial World · C1476
1 year ago

NightcoreNewbie: I don't think that is Bai Yueyin. She's most likely a reincarnation or possibly someone who has the same aura as her. I highly doubt that Bai Yueyin wouldn't be able to sense Yi Yun's sword dao especially since he cultivates in techniques from the Pure Yang Sword Palace.

True Martial World · C1476
1 year ago
I don't think that is Bai Yueyin. She's most likely a reincarnation or possibly someone who has the same aura as her. I highly doubt that Bai Yueyin wouldn't be able to sense Yi Yun's sword dao especially since he cultivates in techniques from the Pure Yang Sword Palace. View More
True Martial World · C1476
1 year ago

NightcoreNewbie: Well, my theory my 90% right a few chapters ago. I didn't expect that the bone and Nameless would mutually help each other. Time to die now fool. Yi Yun is about to wipe you off the face of the universe.

True Martial World · C1466
1 year ago
Well, my theory my 90% right a few chapters ago. I didn't expect that the bone and Nameless would mutually help each other. Time to die now fool. Yi Yun is about to wipe you off the face of the universe. View More
True Martial World · C1466
1 year ago

NightcoreNewbie: Hmm I just thought of something. What if the nameless sword guy is being controlled by the bone and is luring people to feed it constantly? He did say that he went down this path numerous times and yet the bone still hasn't been taken. That makes no sense when every character in this story is greedy prick.

True Martial World · C1463
1 year ago
Hmm I just thought of something. What if the nameless sword guy is being controlled by the bone and is luring people to feed it constantly? He did say that he went down this path numerous times and yet the bone still hasn't been taken. That makes no sense when every character in this story is greedy prick. View More
True Martial World · C1463
1 year ago
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