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Peaches: Can someone rewrite this story without a completely despicable MC? This guy has no redeeming qualities. He considers himself being "Kinder and gentler with a good personality than most" yet sits there and watches people die on multiple occasions and goes "Well, its none of my business."
His solution to problems he cannot solve with his high muscle mass is... add more points to muscle mass. He considered adding points to his intelligence stat on a few occasions, but he didn't since "Isn't intelligence only used by police and detectives? What good would that do in the dust world? Endurance, Vitality, Strength, Muscle mass, these are way more useful for surviving in the dust world."
Other characters have 0 personality, and the MC is completely unlikable. Reading was a total waste of time, had hoped he'd change by 70+ chapters in, but now it seems he'll remain a muscle head and continue being dumb.
So bad.The City of Terror
The City of Terror
The City of Terror · C104
The City of Terror · C82
The City of Terror · C78
The City of Terror
The City of Terror · C69
MrHmmm: Trash novel with stupid repetitive content and dumb massive information with no personality whatever so beside MC, the other character just one dimensional character, MC follower always worship MC, the antagonist always been portraid as Smart, Badass, but when they met MC they just suddenly became a stupid idiot who only always promises to get revenge later on then been crushed by MC many times till they never showed up again, and then the same antagonist with no personality showed up but with more awesome background than previous enemy.
The dumb thing author pull is how can 300 massive global corporation suddenly invest to the game and try to compete each other, that's basically most idiot attempt i've ever see in most Webnovel I read.
The good thing about this novel is the Translator and the update, the TL and editor is really done good job.
My advice to TL please if you want to pick novel again don't pick novel like this, I know you need money and how easily popular this novel, but please don't make reader brain numb.
I think my guess QI try to take over this novel is you can see that in TL patreon with profit 15K $/month of course QI want to take this project. With so many money involved per month I don't see QI why not take this project, you already guess.
Conclusion: this novel isn't different from MGA, ATG, ED it's just trash novelReincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks · C62
CEO in a fantasy world · C190
CEO in a fantasy world · C190
Dzerxx: Not a huge fan of multiple transmigrations/Reincarnations if I'm honest.CEO in a fantasy world · C190
Peaches: Jesus, never thought i'd give anything higher than a 3 on this website, given the overall quality of novels here. This however is probably one of the few exceptions there'll ever be.
I'm generally not a fan of "System" novels, mostly because they're used as tools to railroad the MC into doing **** that progresses the story. "If you don't do this, you'll suffer the consequences" tends to rub me the wrong way. This too has happened in this novel, but only once thus far so it isn't too bad yet.
The saving grace here is the novelty of the idea, exposing cultivators in a wuxia-like world to gaming, and turning them all into game addicted NEETs lol. I find their reactions to RE and gaming in general refreshing, the author took a good idea and executed it properly, rather than poorly.
I'm hoping it doesn't fall into the typical wuxia cliches/tropes, but that remains to be seen. If it does, i'll probably have to reduce the rating by a few points.
Thus far though, an enjoyable read, good grammar, no super annoying characters, just an MC enjoying himself in a self-ran internet cafe.Black Tech Internet Cafe System
Black Tech Internet Cafe System
Great Doctor Ling Ran
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks · C34
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
CEO in a fantasy world · C32
Peaches: The crazy things I learned from each chapter
Ch.1 – The entire village hates the protagonist, protagonist and his sister get bullied. Why? No good reason, they just do. They’ve given the excuse “because you were abandoned by your parents!” “You’re a dirty orphan!” Forced hatred is forced. It’s downright silly. It even reaches the point where adults are sneakily trying to get the kid killed during his excursion into the mountains. Seriously? … REALLY?
Ch.2 – Adult wants to kill protagonist for punching his son. Extreme much? Typical wuxia nonsense. Adult’s subordinate has been tailing protagonist and making sure he doesn’t get many resources, and is forced to head deeper into the mountains. Why not just... you know, kill the kid with your own hands? It’s in the middle of the forest, no ones going to see (or from the looks of it, care. Case closed, story ends. It’s getting a bit harder to continue reading this nonsense.
Ch.3 – Not much going on, mostly protagonist taunting animals that seem to perfectly understand whatever language hes speaking. They must be magical. Bull is fooled into running into a bottomless pit, manages to wrap its tail around protagonist’s ankle and drag him in as well – must be part monkey.
Ch.4 – States protagonist has been falling for over an hour, and then a few sentences later states its been over half an hour. Its revealed that the protagonist has an unnatural affinity for fire, cause he’s never been burned before. Hell, must have an unnatural affinity for life as well, considering hes never been killed before. A few sentences later, his eyes and nostrils are seared by burning air. There goes that fire affinity~ Then some stuff happens. Something begins to rise up from magma at the bottom of the pit, suddenly a brilliant blue edge slices through it, then another and another. A diamond shaped blue lotus emerges from the magma. Crystalline petals unfurl, and I’ve no freaking idea what the hell is going on for the next 10 pages. Lets just say “Some crazy sheit happens that ultimate leads to the protagonist somehow surviving, all while having been falling for who knows how many hours/half hours.”
Yeah... Nope, no thanks. Stopping right there. I’m not sure what kinda crack the other reviewers are on, but if it can improve the quality of novels enough to give this one raving 5 star reviews, I need some STAT.Godking Ascending the Heavens
Godking Ascending the Heavens
Reborn: Super God of War
The10thCrow: When I read about them using a black hole as a power source. I was like what the **** why? You have the technology to make a fucking black hole you use it as an energy source. And dont let me get started with it connecting earth and moon together I mean why won't it just swallow everything in the solar system? I have no problem with sci-fi novels I read swallowed star and super gene my problem is when they try to be "scientific". When people read this they might think ow a black hole can be used as a power source hmmm. Why not a giant antimatter factory its still possible. But this just makes drop it instantly swallowed star has extraterrestrial super beings. Super gene goes for the multiverse they both tackle the things that we know little about. but we no a lot about black holes and what it does and it is definitely not source of energy its more like it pulls things in orbit. Maybe if they use a white hole it would have been more belevable. Ps. for those who will say that we dont know anything about what happens inside a black maybe thats where the energy is. BOI IF YOU HAVE THE TECHNOLOGY TO POKE AROUND EVEN AT THE SURFACE OF A BLACK HOLE THAT CAN LITERALLY PULL THE FUCKING ATOMS IN A MATERIAL WHY WHOULD YOU FUCKing NEED TO BE AFRAID. The MATERIAL THEY USED MUST BE AT THE LEAST BE INVINCIBLE TO ANY PHYSICAL DAMAGE. AND WHATS THE POINT OF THE STORY THEN?Battle Frenzy
The Almighty Ring
Peaches: When i read this story, and the many others like it, it makes me wonder what the authors were thinking. I imagine a women's meetup where they all decide to write a martial arts/romance story, and discuss what'll all be in it.
"Lets all go with a reincarnation trope, its popular currently!" "Sure!" "Yeah!" "Okay!" "I love reincarnation stories! YES!"
"So my FL is going to be an Alchemist!" "Oooh, mine'll be an Armament crafter!" "Mine's gonna be a poison specialist!" "Mine's gonna be able to tame spirit beasts!" "Mine'll be an Alchemist too! But she'll also have spirits that give her special powers and help her cultivate!"
*collective excited squeeing*
"Okay, now lets see, lets make her family rotten, this way it'll show our readers our beloved FL is strong and can take care of herself and trample on all opposition!" """"YEAH!!!""""
"But what about the ML? What'll he be like?" """"...""""
"How about very feminine in appearance?" """"Yes!!""""
"He should be confident, arrogant even!" "Yeah! And domineering!" "Oooooh, im liking him already! He should be royalty too! Someone so handsome should have high standing in society!" "And he should be forceful with the FL, claiming her as his whether she likes it or not! *gigglefits*"
""""YISSSSS!!!! You are a genius!""""
"He should also have secrets! Maybe he's wounded and hiding from enemies, while posing as royalty!"
"OR! He is Royalty, and is hiding from enemies wanting to wipe out his entire bloodline!"
"PERFECT!" "You're so good at this!" "Hee hee, right?"
And thus, we have 20+ carbon copies with essentially the same theme with small twists and changes...Prodigiously Amazing Weaponsmith
ravhage: The content has been blockedEndless Path : Infinite Cosmos
To be fair, the male / male-audience-targeting authors do meet-ups like this too LMAO. Seriously, though, it's actually in Qidian's writer manual to carbon copy popular works. From what I've gathered, writing by numbers is the whole idea. I don't usually read long works whose endings I can't even see, but single-volume works like manga live off of tropes, and I for one don't mind bingeing them until I've had enough, then I try other stuff. I guess there are many who have longer patience out there ;P
P.S. I just made this reply because I found your review very funny. Thanks for thatProdigiously Amazing Weaponsmith
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