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Peaches: Can someone rewrite this story without a completely despicable MC? This guy has no redeeming qualities. He considers himself being "Kinder and gentler with a good personality than most" yet sits there and watches people die on multiple occasions and goes "Well, its none of my business."

His solution to problems he cannot solve with his high muscle mass is... add more points to muscle mass. He considered adding points to his intelligence stat on a few occasions, but he didn't since "Isn't intelligence only used by police and detectives? What good would that do in the dust world? Endurance, Vitality, Strength, Muscle mass, these are way more useful for surviving in the dust world."

Other characters have 0 personality, and the MC is completely unlikable. Reading was a total waste of time, had hoped he'd change by 70+ chapters in, but now it seems he'll remain a muscle head and continue being dumb.

So bad.

The City of Terror
3 months ago
Reading Status: C116
This novel is bad, so bad that it should get a negative rating. I encourage everyone to read it, to see just how not to write a novel, and how not to design your MCs. Its a good example of a decent setting ruined by terrible story writing/ideas/characters.

Also exp. View More
The City of Terror
3 months ago
"He was still not that cold blooded to do something like that, so after he thought about it, he raised the great spear and shouted, "Come this way!""

Really? REALLY? After watching 3 people die and brushing it off as none of your business, you're gonna flip over and think something like that? Holy ****, this MC is worthless View More
The City of Terror · C104
3 months ago
"he was worried that he might also become that cruel and unfeeling in the future."

You already are, ya dumb bastid. View More
The City of Terror · C82
3 months ago
So he'll save a woman from a molester, but not save a woman in the Dust World? Great. Awesome. SMH. View More
The City of Terror · C78
3 months ago
Reading Status: C72
Can someone rewrite this story without a completely despicable MC? This guy has no redeeming qualities. He considers himself being "Kinder and gentler with a good personality than most" yet sits there and watches people die on multiple occasions and goes "Well, its none of my business."

His solution to problems he cannot solve with his high muscle mass is... add more points to muscle mass. He considered adding points to his intelligence stat on a few occasions, but he didn't since "Isn't intelligence only used by police and detectives? What good would that do in the dust world? Endurance, Vitality, Strength, Muscle mass, these are way more useful for surviving in the dust world."

Other characters have 0 personality, and the MC is completely unlikable. Reading was a total waste of time, had hoped he'd change by 70+ chapters in, but now it seems he'll remain a muscle head and continue being dumb.

So bad. View More
The City of Terror
3 months ago
This author and his MC... smh. No words, this has left me speechless. View More
The City of Terror · C69
3 months ago

MrHmmm: Trash novel with stupid repetitive content and dumb massive information with no personality whatever so beside MC, the other character just one dimensional character, MC follower always worship MC, the antagonist always been portraid as Smart, Badass, but when they met MC they just suddenly became a stupid idiot who only always promises to get revenge later on then been crushed by MC many times till they never showed up again, and then the same antagonist with no personality showed up but with more awesome background than previous enemy.

The dumb thing author pull is how can 300 massive global corporation suddenly invest to the game and try to compete each other, that's basically most idiot attempt i've ever see in most Webnovel I read.

The good thing about this novel is the Translator and the update, the TL and editor is really done good job.
My advice to TL please if you want to pick novel again don't pick novel like this, I know you need money and how easily popular this novel, but please don't make reader brain numb.

I think my guess QI try to take over this novel is you can see that in TL patreon with profit 15K $/month of course QI want to take this project. With so many money involved per month I don't see QI why not take this project, you already guess.

Conclusion: this novel isn't different from MGA, ATG, ED it's just trash novel

Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
3 months ago
Reading Status: C1434
I'm a big fan of the VRMMO Genre of literature, unfortunately this story doesnt really do the genre justice. Its written poorly and unimaginatively, reminiscent of the generic wuxia novels out there in many ways. Stronger and stronger enemies surface, only to be beat down by the MC, and they -never- learn their lesson. Literally. The MC is doing things that shock and awe 'the masses' so often, yet the enemies are still doubting and insulting the MC and his guild, downplaying their capabilities. Unsurprisingly, they become startled and shocked over and over when the MC and his guild 'somehow' 'miraculously' 'against all odds' succeeds.

And when this happens? They brush it off as the MC just getting lucky, but dont worry, they'll get their revenge soon, they'll just let the MC and his guild enjoy the spotlight for a little while...

Without fail, every single enemy and antagonist has this mentality, its sickening, stupid, and so far beyond unrealistic its ridiculous.

This is however a step worse than Wuxia novels, because the MC cant actually 'kill' these idiots. Its a game, and they get resurrected after they die, so they just keep coming back again and again, with newer and even more powerful 'backing' (which in the end doesnt mean a damn thing in the face of MC's plot armor). A waste of time to read.

Weed is no doubt rolling on the floor laughing at how bad this novel is. View More
Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
3 months ago
Reading Status: C0
The characters in this novel are incredibly shallow and one dimensional. Its like the author took a personality/behavior trope and forgot to include all the other normal stuff that makes up a person. There is no variation in character behavior, whether its the MC, or his numerous harem members. Characters have two emotions at most. Angry, and not angry.

The story itself is contrived and ill-thought out, taking place in a world where everyone other than the MC's love interest, or family, are people who look down on the MC and start fights or try to kill him over the smallest or dumbest of reasons. Other than that, it follows the typical eye-rolling trope of there always being someone stronger than the MC picking a fight with him, yet MC somehow ends up winning by 'acting tough' and face slapping (literally) every enemy he comes across.

It cant really qualify as wish fulfillment, as its a bit too retarded for that. Instead it's reminiscent of a prepubescent boy's fantasy of what it means to be 'cool'. View More
Red Envelope Group of the Three Realms
4 months ago
It isnt the first time they've messed up the chapters, wont be the last either. View More
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks · C62
5 months ago
Honestly, all those guys should have been left back on earth. The story just got pigeon-holed into one of several predictable outcomes. What a shame, not much to look forward to now.

Brothers pitted against one another as enemies, the big reveal of their past identities, how one ruined the life of the other, and that they plan on getting revenge and doing things differently this life. Yadda Yadda. Or the past will repeat itself, one brother will realize who the other is, then plot to stab them in the back etc, letting history repeat itself essentially.

Mehhhh... View More
CEO in a fantasy world · C190
5 months ago
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CEO in a fantasy world · C190
5 months ago

Dzerxx: Not a huge fan of multiple transmigrations/Reincarnations if I'm honest.

CEO in a fantasy world · C190
5 months ago
And naturally, the TL team has done a great job as well, forgot to include that. View More

Peaches: Jesus, never thought i'd give anything higher than a 3 on this website, given the overall quality of novels here. This however is probably one of the few exceptions there'll ever be.

I'm generally not a fan of "System" novels, mostly because they're used as tools to railroad the MC into doing **** that progresses the story. "If you don't do this, you'll suffer the consequences" tends to rub me the wrong way. This too has happened in this novel, but only once thus far so it isn't too bad yet.

The saving grace here is the novelty of the idea, exposing cultivators in a wuxia-like world to gaming, and turning them all into game addicted NEETs lol. I find their reactions to RE and gaming in general refreshing, the author took a good idea and executed it properly, rather than poorly.

I'm hoping it doesn't fall into the typical wuxia cliches/tropes, but that remains to be seen. If it does, i'll probably have to reduce the rating by a few points.

Thus far though, an enjoyable read, good grammar, no super annoying characters, just an MC enjoying himself in a self-ran internet cafe.

Black Tech Internet Cafe System
5 months ago
Reading Status: C35
Jesus, never thought i'd give anything higher than a 3 on this website, given the overall quality of novels here. This however is probably one of the few exceptions there'll ever be.

I'm generally not a fan of "System" novels, mostly because they're used as tools to railroad the MC into doing **** that progresses the story. "If you don't do this, you'll suffer the consequences" tends to rub me the wrong way. This too has happened in this novel, but only once thus far so it isn't too bad yet.

The saving grace here is the novelty of the idea, exposing cultivators in a wuxia-like world to gaming, and turning them all into game addicted NEETs lol. I find their reactions to RE and gaming in general refreshing, the author took a good idea and executed it properly, rather than poorly.

I'm hoping it doesn't fall into the typical wuxia cliches/tropes, but that remains to be seen. If it does, i'll probably have to reduce the rating by a few points.

Thus far though, an enjoyable read, good grammar, no super annoying characters, just an MC enjoying himself in a self-ran internet cafe. View More
Black Tech Internet Cafe System
5 months ago
Reading Status: C6
A very boring read. The story keeps going on and on about the various histories of either the hospital, the medical technique, or the doctors themselves. The times where the MC actually uses his medical skills isnt very exciting either. This is one of those stories where i feel the system actually detracts from the story more than it contributes. Had he been an actual genius showing off skills and such before seasoned veteran doctors, it would have been a bit more interesting. Hell, even if it went the Zang Ye route with tons of repetitive face slapping, it still would have been more entertaining than its current state. A shame, Translators did well though. View More
Great Doctor Ling Ran
6 months ago

Tsubasa93: Bye Q, hello QU.

Elixir Supplier · C107
6 months ago
EndlessFantasy indeed, cause its nothing but a fantasy to expect quality translations of this novel from those guys. Copy&Pasta entire chunks of chapters, missing chapters, broken engrish translations, nothing being fixed, etc. 0/5 stars. View More
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks · C34
6 months ago
Reading Status: C33
Thus far it is an interesting change of pace compared to other VRMMO novels. The MC does not play the same class as he did in the past, but picks a new one he felt had the greatest potential. The author also avoids certain cliches, though not all of them.

While this is great for the story, the information on the world itself is rather lacking (but who knows, this is only ch22 so its relatively early in the novel, perhaps that'll change in the future chaps). The one thing that bugs me however is the translation quality. The translators literally copy-pasta'd the First Kill announcement of one boss for another, without changing the boss's name. So even though the MC killed one monster, the announcement was for something else he killed earlier.

This just speaks of laziness. Second are all the grammar issues and missing words that leave the occasional sentence in broken English. The translators need to put more effort into the editing process. Period.

Edit: After the recent chapter snafu with ch 33 & 34 and the translators not doing a single damn thing to fix it, ontop of the lazy translation, this has earned them 1 star rating. I'd give less if i could. View More
MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
6 months ago
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MMO: Pierce Heaven Til' It Breaks
6 months ago
I feel like this is a missed opportunity for comedy.

*A few soldiers encouraged themselves as they walked to Caesar's side… in only a matter of a few minutes, 350 knight's had already volunteered.*

+Some of the knights were dissatisfied.
"Damn, why dont we have more horses!? Ah?" A knight spotted a donkey pulling a cart outside the barracks, and a sparkle filled his eyes. His gasp alerted the others, and they too grew excited.

When Ceasar and his 350 knights rode out towards the enemy camp, wails could be heard just out of range,
"Our Marshall, hang on! We are coming!" The knights cried out, kicking their donkeys which huffed, heaved and wheezed from the strain of the knightly weight they carried.

"Curses! Why cant these worthless donkeys run faster!" A knight exclaimed, spewing profanities. Finally he had had enough. Hopping off the donkey, he wrapped his arms around it with an iron grip, causing the donkey to squeal in horror as it was hefted above the knight.

"GRAAAAAAAAAAHH!! IM COMING MARSHALL!!!!!" he fervently shouted, chasing after the group nearly thrice as fast as previously.

The others too followed suit, and soon a group of several knights totting donkeys above their heads were seen by the wall guards from afar.

Upon arriving at the enemy encampment, the knights were near frothing at the mouth in fervor, pure joy filling their veins at having finally met up with the main force. One knight was so eager to join the fray with his fellow brothers, that he chucked the donkey into the melee, crushing two unfortunate enemy soldiers. Soon after several more donkeys joined the first, as they were similarly disposed of. View More
CEO in a fantasy world · C32
6 months ago

Peaches: The crazy things I learned from each chapter

Ch.1 – The entire village hates the protagonist, protagonist and his sister get bullied. Why? No good reason, they just do. They’ve given the excuse “because you were abandoned by your parents!” “You’re a dirty orphan!” Forced hatred is forced. It’s downright silly. It even reaches the point where adults are sneakily trying to get the kid killed during his excursion into the mountains. Seriously? … REALLY?

Ch.2 – Adult wants to kill protagonist for punching his son. Extreme much? Typical wuxia nonsense. Adult’s subordinate has been tailing protagonist and making sure he doesn’t get many resources, and is forced to head deeper into the mountains. Why not just... you know, kill the kid with your own hands? It’s in the middle of the forest, no ones going to see (or from the looks of it, care. Case closed, story ends. It’s getting a bit harder to continue reading this nonsense.

Ch.3 – Not much going on, mostly protagonist taunting animals that seem to perfectly understand whatever language hes speaking. They must be magical. Bull is fooled into running into a bottomless pit, manages to wrap its tail around protagonist’s ankle and drag him in as well – must be part monkey.

Ch.4 – States protagonist has been falling for over an hour, and then a few sentences later states its been over half an hour. Its revealed that the protagonist has an unnatural affinity for fire, cause he’s never been burned before. Hell, must have an unnatural affinity for life as well, considering hes never been killed before. A few sentences later, his eyes and nostrils are seared by burning air. There goes that fire affinity~ Then some stuff happens. Something begins to rise up from magma at the bottom of the pit, suddenly a brilliant blue edge slices through it, then another and another. A diamond shaped blue lotus emerges from the magma. Crystalline petals unfurl, and I’ve no freaking idea what the hell is going on for the next 10 pages. Lets just say “Some crazy sheit happens that ultimate leads to the protagonist somehow surviving, all while having been falling for who knows how many hours/half hours.”

Yeah... Nope, no thanks. Stopping right there. I’m not sure what kinda crack the other reviewers are on, but if it can improve the quality of novels enough to give this one raving 5 star reviews, I need some STAT.

Godking Ascending the Heavens
6 months ago
Reading Status: C5
The crazy things I learned from each chapter

Ch.1 – The entire village hates the protagonist, protagonist and his sister get bullied. Why? No good reason, they just do. They’ve given the excuse “because you were abandoned by your parents!” “You’re a dirty orphan!” Forced hatred is forced. It’s downright silly. It even reaches the point where adults are sneakily trying to get the kid killed during his excursion into the mountains. Seriously? … REALLY?

Ch.2 – Adult wants to kill protagonist for punching his son. Extreme much? Typical wuxia nonsense. Adult’s subordinate has been tailing protagonist and making sure he doesn’t get many resources, and is forced to head deeper into the mountains. Why not just... you know, kill the kid with your own hands? It’s in the middle of the forest, no ones going to see (or from the looks of it, care. Case closed, story ends. It’s getting a bit harder to continue reading this nonsense.

Ch.3 – Not much going on, mostly protagonist taunting animals that seem to perfectly understand whatever language hes speaking. They must be magical. Bull is fooled into running into a bottomless pit, manages to wrap its tail around protagonist’s ankle and drag him in as well – must be part monkey.

Ch.4 – States protagonist has been falling for over an hour, and then a few sentences later states its been over half an hour. Its revealed that the protagonist has an unnatural affinity for fire, cause he’s never been burned before. Hell, must have an unnatural affinity for life as well, considering hes never been killed before. A few sentences later, his eyes and nostrils are seared by burning air. There goes that fire affinity~ Then some stuff happens. Something begins to rise up from magma at the bottom of the pit, suddenly a brilliant blue edge slices through it, then another and another. A diamond shaped blue lotus emerges from the magma. Crystalline petals unfurl, and I’ve no freaking idea what the hell is going on for the next 10 pages. Lets just say “Some crazy sheit happens that ultimate leads to the protagonist somehow surviving, all while having been falling for who knows how many hours/half hours.”

Yeah... Nope, no thanks. Stopping right there. I’m not sure what kinda crack the other reviewers are on, but if it can improve the quality of novels enough to give this one raving 5 star reviews, I need some STAT. View More
Godking Ascending the Heavens
6 months ago
Reading Status: C6
It's like a badly written version of RSSG. The MC is supposed to be the battle emperor, but he plays like a total newbie, making bad decisions left and right. The game has also just started, yet theres huge guilds with leatherworkers and blacksmiths somehow supplying their armies with full 'bronze level' armor, allowing them to clear out entire leveling zones? Riiiight... This is something that should happen weeks or months later, not on Day 1.

Overall, a terrible read. View More
Reborn: Super God of War
6 months ago
This has been more entertaining than the book itself. 5/5, thanks guys. :) View More

The10thCrow: When I read about them using a black hole as a power source. I was like what the **** why? You have the technology to make a fucking black hole you use it as an energy source. And dont let me get started with it connecting earth and moon together I mean why won't it just swallow everything in the solar system? I have no problem with sci-fi novels I read swallowed star and super gene my problem is when they try to be "scientific". When people read this they might think ow a black hole can be used as a power source hmmm. Why not a giant antimatter factory its still possible. But this just makes drop it instantly swallowed star has extraterrestrial super beings. Super gene goes for the multiverse they both tackle the things that we know little about. but we no a lot about black holes and what it does and it is definitely not source of energy its more like it pulls things in orbit. Maybe if they use a white hole it would have been more belevable. Ps. for those who will say that we dont know anything about what happens inside a black maybe thats where the energy is. BOI IF YOU HAVE THE TECHNOLOGY TO POKE AROUND EVEN AT THE SURFACE OF A BLACK HOLE THAT CAN LITERALLY PULL THE FUCKING ATOMS IN A MATERIAL WHY WHOULD YOU FUCKing NEED TO BE AFRAID. The MATERIAL THEY USED MUST BE AT THE LEAST BE INVINCIBLE TO ANY PHYSICAL DAMAGE. AND WHATS THE POINT OF THE STORY THEN?

Battle Frenzy
6 months ago
Reading Status: C54
Self-proclaimed professional gamer MC acting like a noob? Check.
Mary Sue MC? Check
Plot Armor thicker than the Author's face? Check.
Loyal Fatty? Check
Instant Harem of breast jiggling women without even trying? Check.
Harem wasted on Clueless Virgin MC? Check.
Bland Thug encounters that exist solely to show how awesome the MC is? Check. View More
The Almighty Ring
6 months ago

Peaches: When i read this story, and the many others like it, it makes me wonder what the authors were thinking. I imagine a women's meetup where they all decide to write a martial arts/romance story, and discuss what'll all be in it.

"Lets all go with a reincarnation trope, its popular currently!" "Sure!" "Yeah!" "Okay!" "I love reincarnation stories! YES!"

"So my FL is going to be an Alchemist!" "Oooh, mine'll be an Armament crafter!" "Mine's gonna be a poison specialist!" "Mine's gonna be able to tame spirit beasts!" "Mine'll be an Alchemist too! But she'll also have spirits that give her special powers and help her cultivate!"

*collective excited squeeing*

"Okay, now lets see, lets make her family rotten, this way it'll show our readers our beloved FL is strong and can take care of herself and trample on all opposition!" """"YEAH!!!""""

"But what about the ML? What'll he be like?" """"...""""

"How about very feminine in appearance?" """"Yes!!""""

"He should be confident, arrogant even!" "Yeah! And domineering!" "Oooooh, im liking him already! He should be royalty too! Someone so handsome should have high standing in society!" "And he should be forceful with the FL, claiming her as his whether she likes it or not! *gigglefits*"

""""YISSSSS!!!! You are a genius!""""

"He should also have secrets! Maybe he's wounded and hiding from enemies, while posing as royalty!"

"OR! He is Royalty, and is hiding from enemies wanting to wipe out his entire bloodline!"

"PERFECT!" "You're so good at this!" "Hee hee, right?"

And thus, we have 20+ carbon copies with essentially the same theme with small twists and changes...

Prodigiously Amazing Weaponsmith
7 months ago
Yikes, looks like i should stay away from this novel. Rather not get invested into something that eventually devolves into the equivalent to a virgin's wet dream. Thanks for the warning! View More

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Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos
7 months ago

WinterBud: XD
To be fair, the male / male-audience-targeting authors do meet-ups like this too LMAO. Seriously, though, it's actually in Qidian's writer manual to carbon copy popular works. From what I've gathered, writing by numbers is the whole idea. I don't usually read long works whose endings I can't even see, but single-volume works like manga live off of tropes, and I for one don't mind bingeing them until I've had enough, then I try other stuff. I guess there are many who have longer patience out there ;P

P.S. I just made this reply because I found your review very funny. Thanks for that

Prodigiously Amazing Weaponsmith
7 months ago
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