Battoth

1yr

Commented

As I understand it 13-19 is the teens as seen when spelling out the numbers but when writing laws some silly people that didn't get the memo in kindergarten wrote whatever number they felt was appropriate in the law book and called it teen. So now there is the truth and the law which is different in different regions. But unless you're a lawyer it's 13-19 for everyone else. I'm pretty sure I'm right because them lawyers are a crazy bunch so it would make sense if it was all their fault that people worldwide can't agree on even small things like this.

Zeld, an eleven-year-old teenager, who had joined the Revengers Thief Gang less than a year ago, arrived in desperation at a busy tavern. As he was only a child, he was received courteously by the young nobles in the place.

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Battoth

1yr

Replied to Niquiito

Author forgot to translate "umm" properly. Annnd it's pretty annoying. 😒

"I don't have parents, so it was easier. Annn... I was living with some friends in a boarding house."

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Battoth

1yr

Replied to Murky_depths

When Luke appeared in her vision, Ayumi believed she had found the perfect candidate. A scowling boy, strong enough to catch the eye of Oliver's sharp eyes and too serious to be a gallant. Ayumi only feared that her daughter would fall in love with this half-wolf.

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Battoth

1yr

Replied to Shadoh

First I thought he said he was from Ann and that it was a strange name for a town. If he meant to say umm he should do so. Now it just reads as a bad translation.

ch 0 5 Weapons of Panspermia

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Should probably be "Forget it, I'm leaving."?

"Forget it, I'm going for it." Dota elicited his sword-like Panspermia Weapon and walked down the street. The crowd began to spread out as well, now that all five had been chosen.

My Girlfriend is an S-Class Adventurer

Fantasy · NandoFalske

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Almost feels a bit off when you suddenly spell sacred correctly.

There were many people in the Heavenly court. All looked dignified and sacred. Some had many pairs of white wings that looked holy on their backs. They were discussing certain things in the Emperor's court.

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Having issues imagining a palace looking scared.

In a dark majestic palace that looked a little scared and holy, unlike it's dark nature, inside a dark room where the only light came from the source of a big telivision screen.

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Commented

It's impressive with all the drinking he does that he doesn't wet the bed daily. 😳

Lilith then left and arrived at the Queen's quarter, in her bedroom. She looked at Lith who was sleeping like a baby. She stripped herself naked and laid beside him. Lith in his sleep, feeling warm again, subconsciously moved his hand and mouth, looking for his mother's breast. Lilith chuckled everytime looking at his actions, she then held her boob and brought it in front of his mouth. Lith started sucking milk from it in his sleep.

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Commented

I think she better beat his focus issues out of him before he starts to explore the world outside. Otherwise he's going to need resurrection on a daily basis. 😒

He was about to get lost in his thoughts when Lilith gave him a flick on his forehead and brought him back to the current world.

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Just comparing with USA of today they would have no issues though they might have to move to the right place. Copy pasted, source dated 2022: "Most states have a minimum marriage age for minors with parental consent, ranging from 12-17 years old. However, California and Mississippi do not have minimum ages for minors to be allowed to marry with parental consent."

[A/N: The mc was a 19 year in previous life who reincarnated with his same conciousness. 13 years have passed upto this chapter and so, he isn't underage. Please do know about this fact.]

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Replied to EMPYREA

NTR is not just a mere taboo, it's a betrayal/backstabbing of epic proportions. Betraying someone like that in a world where you can be killed more than once is not a good idea.

Lucy on the side was bewildered about her mother's words. She knew it was taboo but they were Vampires. Taboo hardly mattered in the Vampire race. Infact, the more the taboos, the better it is for them. It adds more spice in life. The guilty feeling of doing something only excites the crazy Vampires. Lucy thought that her mother would get crazy and shamelessly take her own son's virginity but she didn't expect that her mother would give him a choice. Her mother was still sane!

Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Replied to dukkeh

I just translated it to CQC in my head after also doing a double take at this.

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Vampire's Slice Of Life

Fantasy · SocialHippo

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Her age is mentioned way too often. What's wrong with just saying she's way more experienced some of the times instead to mix it up? Or at least a quick "remember my age" comment instead of using the full repeat? Try to make it feel less repetitive, please.

Zirani agreed and then proceeded to blindfold herself. She must have sensed my confusion. "It would be unfair for you if I wasn't handicapped. I'm four hundred years old."

Aether Beasts

Fantasy · I_S_Rift

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Did they do that last exercise with weights on? 😳

ch 156 Chapter 156(18+)

Aether Beasts

Fantasy · I_S_Rift

Battoth

1yr

Commented

He has intimate relationship with three girls and says he loves both of them? So which girl is left out?

But first, I needed to have a long conversation with Zirani, Misty, and Sandra since there were all just as much a part of this as I was now. I love both of them as odd as that seemed. It had only been a few months and my life had changed so damn drastically, and I had a feeling it would only escalate as we moved towards the border. With everything I'd learned about the lands beyond the great scar, it was shaping up to be a very interesting and dangerous place, after all, they called the plains, the peaceful lands.

Aether Beasts

Fantasy · I_S_Rift

Battoth

1yr

Replied to nightray323

That's basic to check for hidden stashes. And to check for hidden rooms you need to smash all the walls as well.

We finished the tea and then proceeded to ransack the home of anything that looked even remotely valuable. There were a few locked chests that we stored to open later and plenty of herbs that Zirnai might find interesting. I even took the chair since it was very comfortable, and would be wasted here.

Aether Beasts

Fantasy · I_S_Rift

Battoth

1yr

Commented

Not to mention all the chicken meat for the foodie?

"We fight," I replied, knowing that there was no point in running. If the necklace was pointing in their direction then we would need to get past them and I did not feel like having to run from them when we could deal with them here and now.