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And less peanut character(Character that you didn't bother to even named.. Just put them as vaguely as possible..)

I wouldn't agree or disagree with any of your opinion because in the end, it's your novel and I don't want to comment and make you hesitate in your path.. Anyway, I can't give you some good advice in improving your stuff other than basic grammar, spacing, appropriate word usage and all those stuff.. But what I can really advice is to put yourself as a prince and imagine as what you would do there. I remember some fanfic author once told that he always imagine himself as mc with the cheat and he just bulldoze all the way and it is good(I forgot the title, but its douluo dalu fanfic...)... So if you think that what mc does is what it should be, then I have no comment... All I ask is that you don't nerf the guy, that's all.. And be consistent with character. Some of normal mistake of author is when they make this character good, then suddenly bad, and suddenly turn good again for no reason.. Careful of grammar, word usage, spacing, your own logic and common sense, no forced nerf etc, and you should be good? I guess...

Hurm, 3.6 star from me. I'm going for lower, but it may make you feel depressed... My opinion is nearly the same as Elder, the one who review before me... The story actually bordering average and boring at start, but after a few chapter it get trash fast... I get it, you want to fvck as much as you want, get thousand harem member as fast as you can, but this is way too.... Hurm, how to say it without hurting you feeling?... A bit too.. Virgin-ish?...