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Wonder_whats_here

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well I like to read and I can be kinda a nut on occasions

2017-07-04 Joined United States

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just as a teen

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BNHA: Singularity

BNHA: Singularity

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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if you are going to get in trouble no matter what you do then you might as well make sure it is worth it to you for getting in trouble

That's why, he's no longer going to hesitate now. What's the point of hesitation when he could suddenly die the next day? Getting into trouble while trying to do something is more preferable than just being a passive pussy AND still getting into trouble anyway.

HP: The Arcane Thief

HP: The Arcane Thief

Book&Literature · Snollygoster

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Some one needs to put a HE-Man meme here

"Okay, I know what to do now. All I need to do is let the plot flow and just twist them to my liking a little bit. I have the power to do that anyway."

MARVEL: I AM TOAA GRANDSON

MARVEL: I AM TOAA GRANDSON

Anime & Comics · Phelio_n_Craze

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I am glad you left this I remember it from the first draft and yes it did become a joke lol

 He looks at me and smirks. He bows, "I appreciate your praise Lorm Mikaeru."(Somehow this became a joke in the previous Twin Slime Draft so I'll keep it in. You're all to blame for this.)

Twin Slime

Twin Slime

Anime & Comics · Fallen_Michael

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after all forges mutant power is tecnopath like

They need help, something Urahara is more than aware of, "We need someone who has experience dealing with alien technology and is a genius in technology itself Harry, otherwise researching the space station is going to take forever.

Harry's New Game Plus

Harry's New Game Plus

Book&Literature · Kurogano

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x-men's forge would also be pretty good

They need help, something Urahara is more than aware of, "We need someone who has experience dealing with alien technology and is a genius in technology itself Harry, otherwise researching the space station is going to take forever.

Harry's New Game Plus

Harry's New Game Plus

Book&Literature · Kurogano

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why not feed the temporal energies from the time slip to the realm as it happens for not only him self but the plants and stuff as well thus granting the realm its required time laws as well as solving the time slip issue of course he would still need to figure out how to displace the time slip affect from them to the realm

In fact doing so was probably more difficult than creating a whole new realm once again. The thing about realm creation from what Nick could see was that you don't need much mastery over the fundamental forces of one such as time and space. Rather you actually only need a tiny amount of each of these forces power to be combined correctly in order to create an incomplete realm like what Nick currently had. From there it is merely a matter of adding more and more of these forces power to the realm to expand it and complete it into a full world.-

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

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Although I like this version I have seen you make great progress as a writer as you did this one and as such I also saw you hitting more blocks as it went that in my opinion was do to how fast your writing level increased conflicting with your old level where for your old level of skill this story was great as an overpowered story but back then you where not trying for an overpowered story and as your skill level increased you subconsciously realized this and in trying to correct this away from an overpowered story it caused your new skill level to come into conflict with your old level thus causing the blocks there are two ways I see of solving this the first way is to do a rewrite with your new skill level the second is two stop trying to correct and instead make this an overpowered story and use your new skill level to make this an overpowered slice of life story since that it what categories it fits best with as well as a bit of romance and my own suggestion is to do both starting with the second option so as to wait till the rate at which your writing skill level increases slows down to avoid it happening a second time when you do the rewrite and once it dose slow down and stabilizes a bit then do the rewrite with you new improved skill level fallowing your original concept that might even rejuvenate your inspiration and once again allow you to improve in your skill further but a a more reasonable pace that will avoid this happening but also avoid you possibly having your skill level stagnating to much like some authors who lose sight of there original drive that made them good or even great authors to begin with.
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she gave the hallow a death nuggie

Occasionally, she even felt a little pity for some of the Hollow when Tatsuki straight-up German suplexed one of them and defeated another one by locking its head under her arm while vigorously rubbing her fist on its head.

Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach

Goddess of Ice: Corrupting Bleach

Anime & Comics · Maerry

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dance puppet dance

Albus, valiantly attempting to block, found himself on the defensive as Peter's attacks flowed seamlessly. A knife to the left, a swift spear to the right, ethereal weaponry seemed to rain down on him, leaving Albus breathless as he was forced to dodge, sending his aged body into overdrive.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

Movies · AlienWarlord

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pretty much not sure why or ho it helps I just find that it dose sometimes
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the author Eins came up with an equation for this

As for his orange flames turning blue, it's not bullshit but it is true, the purer flames are blue, like Endeavor's flames and dabi's flames, or our sun and a neutron star, the neutron star is blue because it is denser than our sun.

MHA : True Power of Telekinesis

MHA : True Power of Telekinesis

Anime & Comics · Omega200

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and technically he did not create the genre it was already the he just re brought it to focus since I have as stated in my other comment found said type of genre from other cultures that date back more then a hundred years before he was even born

Albert Einstein, Michael Faraday, Thomas Edison, Mahatma Gandhi, Aristotles, Maitreyi, Hypatia of Alexandria... these men and women were among the long list of insane individuals that contributed to the world's development.

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

Movies · OneArmedImmortal

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that may hold true for others but not for me I know what love crafting is because I read some of his stuff but for me he did not leave that much of an impression although I do agree that he was pretty good for an author but as for leaving a mark on human history not so much I know of several authors that left a larger impression on human history and this comment was on a paragraph that was referencing humans that left a large enough impression on mankind as a whole that they are considered as forebears in there field for all the world and for that take in horror and suspense that dose not go to love craft if you want horror and tragedy or suspense look for the original tales of the brothers grimm or the tales left from some of the old Celtic lore or even Russian/German lore and for aberrations and such look to the lore found in the Asian/Japanese folk lore and you will find things of similar model as love craft but it was done more then a century before love craft almost as if his was just a retelling of there's so again my point stands just as firm as yours since this is more of a opinion based view determined by how much someone has read and the genres they have covered plus when they where born where as the ones listed in the paragraph tend to be revolutionary figures that are heard of regardless of their time genres or whether a person reads a lot or a little and some are even know by those in places that have little to no known education and as I said in my comment I gave him his credit while trying to be neutral hence why I did not mention these things earlier I gave reasons that for the most part can show his brilliance but also why he might not have made the cut so to say

Albert Einstein, Michael Faraday, Thomas Edison, Mahatma Gandhi, Aristotles, Maitreyi, Hypatia of Alexandria... these men and women were among the long list of insane individuals that contributed to the world's development.

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

Movies · OneArmedImmortal

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for me it is the water bear

When you talk about immorality what comes into your mind? It's Jellyfish, right?

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

In Pacific Rim with the Ultimate Tech Resources System

Movies · OneArmedImmortal

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