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League of Legends: League of Unknowns · C37
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League of Legends: League of Unknowns · C33
5 days ago

notlair: I struggled reading up to chapter 7 because of the bad grammar,

The story itself has a decent potential but the grammar is dragging it down,


So author, you need to proofread this or even use grammarly, or other websites that helps in checking/correcting grammarsm..m.

One Piece: Bouny System
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League of Legends: League of Unknowns · C24
1 week ago

AGoodBargain: I've given up on reading after one chapter. The translation quality is just that horrible. If you can live with that, this mihjt still be a great novel. However, I can't enjoy this quality..

Warlord of Chaos
2 weeks ago

Brezer: So haven't made it past the 1st chapter so far but the translation is terrible, its reading like a nooby author. So ya the translation already needs help. Not sure on the rest so far but you would think a site that has mainly translated stories would make sure translations would be right.

Warlord of Chaos
2 weeks ago

SorcererCat: They really need to download and use Grammarly to help with grammar and sentence structure with their translations. You can download it here grammarly DOT com. Please up-vote to get the translators attention so we can get better translations.

Warlord of Chaos
2 weeks ago

Asmodai216: Writing Quality: Trash tier. The grammar is awful, you can tell the writer isn't a native English speaker. It's legible, you can understand it, but a 5 minute spelling and grammar check on each chapter isn't too much to ask for.

Stability of Updates: The author Seion writes a bunch of different system based stories and updates all of them with great frequency. This is great as far as updating the story goes, but it seriously detracts from the quality of the story. An author churning out multiple updates a day for different stories will end up suffering when it comes to quality and foresight.

Story Development: Like a lot of the sub-standard wish fulfillment series on this site, the pacing of the story is very quick. Characters who should gradually build up a relationship with others are instead instantly won over for no real reason, and a bunch of plot points are not thought out well... Whatsoever... At all.

Character Design: The MC we're given is freaking ridiculous. I personally appreciate an MC I can relate to, but I usually like an MC that has a fleshed out character. This MC fails to react with anything resembling common sense, decency, caution, or any other reasonable character trait. For fucks sake, in chapter 8 he literally molests a goddess and goes on to say that he likes things to be consensual.

Speaking of, the characters from the series are massively OOC with no real explanation given. Sure, some basic traits are there, but they are railroaded onto whatever path the author wants with no explanation other than, "Hurr durr, Hestia is cute, I don't care if she's a virgin goddess who only fell for the pure-hearted Bell after he spent months earnestly supporting her, I want her to get with my supah awesome MC." I don't even care if he stole her from Bell, just make it actually make some damn sense.

Then there are the background characters who just go along with this complete bull****.

World Background: The only reason this is getting 2 stars is because of the ALREADY FUNCTIONING world provided by virtue of being FANFICTION. Frankly, the additions made regarding the system, the MCs abilities, and his self-insert into an adventurer's body make no goddamn sense whatsoever.

"Hey Eina, I'm already level 3 despite not being in a familia. It doesn't matter that even having a level at all requires someone to have a falna, I'm supah aweshome and you'll totally believe me"

"I've never been apart of a familia, even though the body I took over was actually apart of one before I got here."

Summary: This is a pretty standard work for the author, Seion. Crappy grammar, characters and powers that don't make any damn sense. Railroading into relationships that don't make any damn sense from the chicks standpoint. Generic crappy wish-fulfillment fanfic is trash.

Dungeon System Within DanMachi
3 weeks ago

NulZilch: Why would he agree to the job? Bull, forced plot 10/10. He already had enough money to leave gotham. I predict him to be getting deeper and deeper into this drama, then we would have some reaction chapters. Usual stuff i guess. Hard to find any smooth fic on webnovel.

Fate/Heroes · C8
1 month ago
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Eternal Sin · C3
2 months ago
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The Dragon Prince's Wife is a Translator · C1
2 months ago
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Serpent of the Chat Group · C55
2 months ago
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Sugar and Spice: The CEO’s Feisty Wife · C1
2 months ago

Morning_Fragrance: Exactly what I was just thinking. It's literally the same novel but different name and some paragraphs were redone but if anyone has read that novel, they will know it's stolen.

Absolute Stealing · C1
2 months ago

Morning_Fragrance: The dude deleted my review after I called him out for plagiarism. Thinking about review bombing repeatedly or just settling with posting on each chapter while trying to get some likes to keep it bumped up.

Absolute Stealing · C1
2 months ago

Aces_Mark: https://sj.uukanshu.com/book.aspx?id=79800 seems oddly familiar to this Chinese fanfic just with different names for the main character

Absolute Stealing · C1
2 months ago
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Sugar and Spice: The CEO’s Feisty Wife · C1
3 months ago
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Sugar and Spice: The CEO’s Feisty Wife · C1
3 months ago
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Prince_of_Thieves: Have him date somebody else, at least to make Alice jealous.

How Not To Live! (Twilight) · C8
3 months ago
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