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Thomas_Morey: Because he’s 6 years old and probably can’t count to 788, let alone 2000A.I. · C13
Overlord007: Why are you so insistent on saving Krypton!
It is pathetic and should go extinct!!!
And Kara almost killed the MC and his response is Okay!!!!!!
MC has human emotions in the body of a kyptonian with emotion repression but this is too much!!!!
No rage that he almost died again!!!!
Yeah I was reincarnated as a kryptonian.
Oh, I almost died because Kara wanted to test a rumor.
And why nerf the MC since the start.
I mean nothing goes for him at all and anything he does lands him in more trouble.
I mean if I imagine myself in the MC place, I would kill myself because of how depressing this sh*t is!
Nothing goes for me, almost died from a rumour and no emotions and control over my fate even though i can have so much power!
I usually don’t write such reviews but this one just got under my skin so badly!
I mean it has so much potential yet fails so spectacularly!Dio El
MimicReads: I wanna see what happened to his world after he diedGrandpa Universe In Multiverse · C1
Pyuog: he didn't mention infinite chakra《Infinite Stamina》 · C2
random_lazy_fella: Though I myself don’t rating like this but i hope after he become an ant his ability is powerfull or complete affinity with nen branches I really like the story don’t want to drop hope you can consider. Thank you :)Endless Adventure · C18
Dao_Master211: Well, i think every time he changes bodies he can manipulate more ghosts or efficiently control them. Just like hao asakura in shaman king, everytime he reincarnates he gets a massive boost of power.Endless Adventure · C17
RiskyA: A day life is just like use granade😱
That not worthEndless Adventure · C17
EvilDemon: Wow really weak abilities I’m out. All that training and using you’re lifespan and you can’t even injure hisoka like kurapika with much less time to master his nen was able to kill a phantom troupe member. Peace weak ass mcEndless Adventure · C17
SeaVen: Indeed... before gons transformation his power was far low... he only achieve that strength becuase he sacrifice his own lifespan ! Our current MC ability should be strong beacuse his lifespan is the energy...Endless Adventure · C17
Reader007: Even if you planing to change body, using so much lifespan and so little return = is really making feel bad to the readers and affecting quality of your work 😞. And use life span as condition type techniqes are very abnormally strong because it is damn precious🤮 but you make me feel really weird😩 with so little power with month of life so little return. PLEASE REMEMBER DEATH IS ULTIMATE CONDITION IN HxH AND YOU ARE WALKING TO THE DEATH!!!!!! ( kurapika all efinities power , neteros zero hand and partly gon aging techniqe is regerdad as last resort op techniqes😎.) I hope at least not use months of lifespan in every battle or make more powerful so we will feel at least worthy of that lifespan and do not feel like crap😭.Endless Adventure · C17
Endless Adventure · C17
Dao_Master211: It really is a cluche that the mcs family always dies lol. Poor lucky unlucky bastardsEndless Adventure · C1
Suicidal_Fool: Already read this on fanfic
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MastersgtJames: I'm liking the story... but these releases are so slow!!!! I need more chapters!!!
Also, Nooooooo! His son is dead!!!!
I again hope this instills in the MC to respect the dead, and to not kill humans if he can help it. if he can't then to do so painlessly. so tired of sociopathic MC'sBecoming Immortal · C12
Becoming Immortal · C12
ForgottenCurse1234: He didn’t buy VA (virtual assistant) but a virtual dungeon builder (VDB)The Naga Dungeon · C2
LordSpecter3366: I am rewriting the Story I have sent a message to everyone so if I already sent you this sorry, the Rewriting program is active on this novel, I am rewriting it from the beginning, the first and second chapter is done, if nothing happens there will be a chapter everyday remade at 11 so check the newest rewritten chapter.Infinity Fanfiction · C0
dadaoist: To me, it was more a problem of plot. The turning was supposed to be one climax of this story, and it isn't. Could have been fun to make an anti-climax turning ; ex : he can't remember his turning and the main plot will have been to understand who and why. So yeah a little disappointed here, but maybe the author is going somewhere with it, too soon to judge .Becoming Immortal · C9
ChronosTimeTyrant: Vampires doesnt grow weaker with age what the **** are you talking about, in twilight when they are changed the reason they are stronger its that their body is full of blood(theirs) when its consumed they become normal vampires what truly makes a powerful vampire in this universe its how much they control their abilitiesBecoming Immortal · C9
mrayj45: Mc will need jedi robes to hide the sparkles or maybe assassin's creed outfit.Becoming Immortal · C9
mrayj45: I think some people missed the point. He trained 2 years on his mind plus his previous training sure. But how long has she been a vampire and how long has she trained?Becoming Immortal · C9
Ero_Usagi: This is copy-paste. So gtfo don't bother to read it. Read this from its original source. Shameless shameless shameless shameless shameless shamelessA Pro Gamer in Young Justice
DemonRazgriz: Copy and pasted from an author on fanfiction dot net. Scumbag thief even trying to make a quick buck from having others give to his PayPal.A Pro Gamer in Young Justice
TNT_BOSS: You stole the story from ThatsALittleWeird you no good piece of gutter trash that doesn't deserve to show their face to the world because of how disgusted everyone who sees your ugly face would beA Pro Gamer in Young Justice
Crimson_Night: This story is plagiarism please don’t read and endorse theft it isn’t even paid for it is from Fanfiction.net if you wish to read it at its original site refer to: https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13332997/1/The-Young-Play-Justice
The author of this story deserves better than having to deal with this he is new and extremely talented I am saddened he has to deal with this and hope whoever posted this will take it dow as they didn’t realise that what they did was wrongA Pro Gamer in Young Justice
Ifchickenandnuts: Thanks for ruining a good thing, thief
Why did you even bother, It not like you even get much out of it or even anything at all
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daryck: Link to the original: https://***.fanfiction.net/s/13332997/1/The-Young-Play-Justice
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