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hautar: I used my All-seeing eyes that I stole it from Yhwach and I see
[Getting cockhold by your cousin achievement had acquired]Sinfull life with the strongest system · C9
Arunavazael: Yanagi : Yui has been staring at you for a while, is that okay?
Brando : ..... 'god...save me' (sweating ... alot)
Yui : ....... 'I dare you' (intense stare)
God : ...... 'wish you luck son' (averting eyes and whistling)Jurassic Hero (Boku no Hero Academia Fanfic). · C52
Shinkaio: He knows that he need power but he wasted 1 year doing farm job? I don't know if he is a moron or if it's for the plotThe Dusk Emperor · C3
Cha0s0wl: 😂😂 did anyone else get the joke
Rayne Ashbringer turned Madara in ash 😂😂😂The Devourer · C84
darkoneko: "He found a refrigerator [...] Its outer shell was severely damaged" Indiana Jones hid in it during the explosionI Found A Planet · C3
IHateSpiritStones: jajajaja i was thinking that 😂, Saitama powerThe City of Terror · C370
OnePun: How did he live a year in forest? After coming down to the town there is no change in his physical appearance? Wtf?Felix's Classroom of the Elite · C2
Felix's Classroom of the Elite · C2
The City of Terror · C401
OnePun: The Unspeakable terror, the killer of all uncles, the Oppai Loli.I got Possessed by the Tentacle God (R-18) · C32
I got Possessed by the Tentacle God (R-18) · C32
Soawn: Water. Water. One water.
20% plot. 80% of the descriptions. This is not a novel. This is a game guide. The most detailed, which devotes entire chapters to a superficial description of the class. And then another chapter, which describes a part of the class skills. But this is only the beginning of suffering.
Describe skills, classes, battle systems ............... and do not show in the plot. Describe the skills and class, but in the plot show through 100-150 chapters this, of course, without forgetting 2-3 chapters to repeat the previous descriptions.
The main minus of the novel is that the author makes a guide to the game, not a novel.
And of course REPETITIONS. Repeat every 5 chapters as far as legends are cool, with a description of their coolness. And to say how MC is far from them. What for?
From the pros, MC. Nice world.
But the main minus is a huge amount of description. Literally describing damage calculation formulas. WHAT FOR? You do not play the game. You cannot manage this data.Abyss Domination
Demonic_angel: Good idea, but i felt like this thing has already been used alot in a good way, a novel with Supreme Being's body parts, elemental orbs in Wu dong, ,yun che. I felt like I'll mess up that theme with my first novel if I do that at the beginning.
But I already had something like this planned for future, but a little differentRise of the Demon God · C32
OnePun: It's just my personal preference. But can you make MC struggle for it.(ex: Yun Che from ATG).
Getting things for free will make the story bland. If you had made a trial and twists for him when getting the rings then it would have much interesting.
Less plot armour = More realistic feel.
Btw love this novel. Don't worry about other things, keep it up.Rise of the Demon God · C32
Rise of the Demon God · C32
VicL: Disgusting. Way too much idiocy and talking nonsense. I mean, after all the build-up for yet another tournament, there's three chapters of talking rubbish before anyone even throws a punch? I get that the author's getting paid more by putting more words up, but this level of fillers is ridiculous. Also somewhere along the way, I got really annoyed with the main character. When I found myself rooting for his enemies to beat the crap out of him, I realized I really shouldn't be reading this any more. I'm out.Martial Universe
OnePun: Dude, don't jinx it. Now it's 22 days.Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C28
XystOblivion: Love this. I will be waiting patiently for the next one. Hopefully not 18 days from now.Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning · C28
OnePun: Mc dies.
End of the novel.I got Possessed by the Tentacle God (R-18) · C29
I got Possessed by the Tentacle God (R-18) · C29
OnePun: Yeah right.... Translator disappear for 18 days without any notice and returns with 5 chap. Real premium.
Last time translator disappeared for 12 days and returned with 7 chap.
And this novel is still going on premium, seriously?The City of Terror · C387
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