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It would be fantastic if the author released whole chapters, but of course, it’s important to milk everything. I really enjoy the story, but the constant chapters where nothing happens, or it just sets up another chapter, or it’s basically an extended definition chapter is getting excessive. And the only reason all these chapters are cliffhangers is because they are broken up that way. About every four to six “chapters” on here make a normal chapter in a book. It has gotten to the point where I personally no longer support this novel or Grand Ancestral Bloodlines, and I very much enjoy both books, but can just no longer accept being fleeced.

I am sorry, but this whole plot line is nonsensical and unrealistic.

I’ve got to say, all the ”boy” and “child” descriptions is getting irritating. First, anyone that is 6 foot 6 with a chiseled physique is not going to be referred to as a boy or child. Second, anyone 18 plus years old, especially in a medieval setting would be thought of as a man by most people. So while it makes since for people of the elder generation or antagonists wishing to demean Leo to refer to him as a boy or child, almost no one else would. And lastly, I think the constant use of boy as a term of description for Leo really clashes with the picture that is trying to be painted. That of a burgeoning battlegod like character. I would think anyones first reaction looking at a huge 6 foot 6 incredibly fit and muscled individual would be intimidation/jealousy/inadequacy or a combination of all three, not “look at this little boy” or “who does this child think he is” type of responses. Sorry for the long response and I understand there are 700 plus chapters as of writing this so my criticism won’t effect anything, but it got to the point I felt obligated to make my thoughts heard anyways. Although, I’d also like to say, I do love this story. Definitely one of my favorite web series or stories in general. So keep up the good work. I think this is now a step above Grand Ancestral Bloodlines now, though I do like that very much as well.

Thank you for your reply. You can email me and we can echange contact infomation if you’d like. I wish there was a message function on here, but I don’t think they care about adding useful features all that much. Too busy trying to milk us for all our money lol. I’m not on Snapchat, or at least I never use it. My email is jcwmonroe@gmail.com I look forward to having an interesting discussion with you.

Aren’t you adorable.