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Nuff yun che? System bought stuff brings bad luck that eats away his luck thus killing him? Throwing yun che into a normal system run world that only has the basics of stats jobs and map? Put yun che into a mental mmorpg where death is real for him but he gets system cookies(that just taste good but do nothing) for each day he lives in game?

Change to a personal orignal after fast tracking this current altered atg in which syatem now has his own body and goes on how you want? View More
In Another World As A System? · C0
3 days ago
Or just create aging magic to physically age her body or growing/physically altering type magics ...really lots of magic to make her a full grown women that does not need magic to maintain and he just has to wish for it and skill creation will do the rest [not like she herself in cannon did not make a magic from the ahe of gods magica to age herself she just did it poorly since it was magically substained] View More

ProProcrastination: I just realised that even more so for him to not complain about her ‘little body’ is that he can give her a skill to change her body size. Easy peasy.

A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C49
3 days ago
Ya but you fail to include/notice the healing abilities both natural and magical that can fix up his dead brain cells and now he is cultivation so that should up the activity of that tiny mind of his besides cultivators also have higher healing otherwise with how much drugs they take they might drop dead from od and a short spin of cultivation method will cleans the mind from hangovers so wine is just a tasty drink unless it is spiked with cultivation drugs ..what with him now having the devour trait it should be impossible to get drunk since his body will just consume it as energy and increase his cultivation View More

Aikaya: Well, actually "getting drunk" kills brain cells, and he's getting drunk with "Godly Beer", so.... he's getting... "godly stupid"? xD

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C158
4 days ago
Ofc the godheads are shown in 5 chapters but even still the spirit stones he has are high wealth and high grade cultivation resorces that if he consumes will rapidly increase his cultivation but he does not uses them for anything but buying a freak'n room to sleep in [ when he can build a freakn house or even go to where his clones are to rest (and as a god he does not need to even freakn sleep so this is just wasting resorces for nothing )] View More

dragonmage124: In this verse any high enough cultivator with soul attacks can easily kill him as he is very weak in soul cultivation (a fact system has told him a lot of times yet he does nothing at all to fix this major weakness even when he is suppose to be getting stronger to be with goddess wife) so he is weak sht right now ( another fact goddess wife and system have told him lots of times) only having a strong body (by mortal standard) and even then his body is not at the current verse(a lesser realm then the real god realms) peak yet he does not use the resources he gains to cultivate for his cultivation ...so he is really freak'n dumb and weak since take his instantaneous mastery and laws away and he can not fight for sht since even after so many verses he has not learn any combat style and only eats,drinks,and fks around and has no sense of self preservation since he does not care to toss around wealth and even with system tell him what sht is he still called the godheads he has SHINY ROCKS...i really question if you gave read the story let only chapter to say the mc is not dumb

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C153
4 days ago
Pff he has lived in normalish worlds where they killed for lots of reasons but did not care but seeing them kill each other now seems to confuse him so i think he got dumber from all that drinking ...and since he has system that gives him everything he wants and needs too him what can let him grow stronger he has no understanding outside long forgoten human memory of what it is like to have desires that need blood sweat and tears to have a chance to gain ...since for him now it is just a system shop thought away as he gained far too many free points when he got the system and even now does not uses them for anything that simply buying the right skills would let him do himself afterall the system will do everything for him anyway he just needs to toss some system points at it View More

Sorazs: Why i feel silver just like innocent kid that do not know about cultivate that strong eat weak n killing here n there is common thing in cultivate world

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C158
4 days ago
In this verse any high enough cultivator with soul attacks can easily kill him as he is very weak in soul cultivation (a fact system has told him a lot of times yet he does nothing at all to fix this major weakness even when he is suppose to be getting stronger to be with goddess wife) so he is weak sht right now ( another fact goddess wife and system have told him lots of times) only having a strong body (by mortal standard) and even then his body is not at the current verse(a lesser realm then the real god realms) peak yet he does not use the resources he gains to cultivate for his cultivation ...so he is really freak'n dumb and weak since take his instantaneous mastery and laws away and he can not fight for sht since even after so many verses he has not learn any combat style and only eats,drinks,and fks around and has no sense of self preservation since he does not care to toss around wealth and even with system tell him what sht is he still called the godheads he has SHINY ROCKS...i really question if you gave read the story let only chapter to say the mc is not dumb View More

DonnutHermit: Mna, i don't think that the MC is dumb. The fact is that he is so strong, that he do not care about the others 'plots'.

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C153
4 days ago
System told him a lot of stuff is good for his cultivation and he knows if he wants to be with wife goddess he needs higher cultivation but this mc is foolish, senseless, stupid, lazy, and a constant drunk ...and due to system not being sealed so author can ho about forcing him to cultivate more then just his power but also his overall character (since everything is just system plot armor solved with a empty mc character) it seems i for one reader will be dropping this since it was fine seeing as he was stronger then everyone to have him do dumb sht for laughs but in a verse with many who can kill him due to soul attacks (which the blaze dragon told him he can do to kill him) he does sht to empower his soul and even his cultivation is slow since he is far too dumb to use his new resources that author says he has in millions and billions of high ranking resorces that will let him cultivate faster thus live with his goddess wife that much faster which is something he should want ( but due to hus constant lacking of character development he forgets all girls he is married too the moment he gets away from them showing no real love for them just collectors desire for them and now we even have new wife found due to little interaction and drinking) since the whole point of forcing main wife 1 away is to make the mc grow faster to get her back this became a story that was 2 op 2 fast but inly lasted due to some interesting development but dulled due to the same development plot being reused too much too soon for my taste View More

Asim1998: I know he is strong but what kind of retarded common sense does he have? System clearly told him it was valuable and that he could cultivate it using it but he nonchalantly gives it away, wtf even if he does care at least use common sense that retarded mc!

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C153
4 days ago

Golden_Halo: As usual with system that always pampering him, his intelegence seems decrease every time

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C153
4 days ago

Banana_Bomb: make him a bit more, how should I put it, think things through at the very bare minimum.

piss all over someone offer to teach him cultivation, because system.
instead of cultivating along his clone so it goes even faster he went out touring, because clone and system.
now pissing all over the place showing wealth without thinking through consequences, because system.

sure its fun to read, but its kinda degrading his intellect.
make him think at the very least, and make him less dependent on system.

"system" "hey system" "system can I xxxxxx" "what is this system?" "where am I system?"
might as well make them the only character in the whole arc.

Have a little love with your character probably is what I'm trying to say, make him OP sure, but a bit more ability to think logically, and less system will make him a good mc.

make more dynamics with other character instead of system.
interact more with the character of the universe he is in, it will be more enjoyable and a better story.

all this system that system this makes it looks like
"YUKIIII!!!!" "yukiiiii...."
but using system instead of yuki.
Mirai Nikki 2.0
thats how I felt reading recent chapter.

The Strongest Omni Traveler · C153
4 days ago
Urg spiderman is all american not some jap kid so get rid of that nani like he any american will for no reason speak Japanese 'what' when surprised View More
Marvels Spider System · C2
1 week ago
from how you write his body and veins they will only absorb the attribute of what he refines meaning his veins nor body will change much other then getting the attribute ...the attribute of the tyrannical emperor's divine veins can be summed up as one word 'power'....the need to have a heart of a tyrant and the desire to become an emperor and want to possess power so much that it outweighs all other aspirations to awaken the veins should not apply to him since his veins will still be world dao veins [veins by nature of being a world contain all attributes and all he is doing is awakening them via absorbing something with that high amounts of some attribute while he should be able to awaken said attributes via comprehension and understanding on his own as well] as such the only thing cultivation methods would do for him is pull in profound energy to increase his cultivation but only if his insights are enough for him to grow [since his body and his veins are a world the growth of the world needs his comprehension via what you yourself said to make a plot hole like breaking through due to absorbing the attributes of some veins makes no sense]...as you yourself said he can only grow via insights and understanding but then you go and have him forced into the emperor's realm when at most he should have gained insights into the dao of of tyranny , ruling, and power thus increasing his cultivation by maybe a realm {it also means he would not need the evil gods blood just yun ches after he absorbs it since yun che would then have the attribute of the evil god as well as the profound handle} View More

xraimon: He will find more cultivation arts and other techniques later on, there just hasn't been an opportunity yet, but in the next few chapters there will be, also replicating Xia Yuanba's veins would allow him to possess their attributes so being able to break through like that is expected since thats their effect, incredible breakthrough speed. and in regards to the backlash from using the special power of his veins, well thats gonna happen next chapter, and since he knows what the next test is likely to be, due to the phoenix testing Yun Che's character in the original, and saying that the harder test still involved a character test, its pretty safe to assume it won't be combat related, at least from his point of view.

1000 Reincarnations (ATG Fanfic) · C8
1 week ago
It seems 999 deaths made him foolish since he goes amd uses his life saving method (since it will take an unknown amount of time to replenish) to complete a combat trail...all the while he did not practice anything just stole some hair and now he is power drunk since he does not know how strong his body is without profound energy does not have any profound arts does not have any movement arts does not have any cultivation arts he does not even the most basics of any means to use profound energy thus he will be going all World Dao Smash it seems ..from how his body and veins were described that hair should not have done anything but let him enter elementary realm since he did not gain more understanding to anything View More
1000 Reincarnations (ATG Fanfic) · C8
1 week ago
besides his eyes would be a natural specialist type of nen in this world ....what with them having manipulation skills, personal enhancing (perception enhancement), skill learning and mimicry abilities ... and he goes for darkness when he has space and time ...really? some can teleport via nen already even if he does not know that making use of what he has the greatest affinity for should be normal but that gets toss aside to 'look' cool with skills that mix every freaking nen type that all are slapped with limitations View More

dragonmage124: ..these skills do not match what you called his nen type..with how strange they are they fall under specialist. All the while he picks one of the easier elements to cripple since enough light will mean more nen to use anything if even possible..since stealing aura, healing in a movement techniques (all the while crippling the movement method since besides the great weakness of blasting the area with light removing shadows 5 mins in shadows with no attack means possible makes it worthless since it would only be means to escape and that is limited by them 5 min with a massive 15 mins b4 it can be done again), item creation , aura transfer ect do not fall under simply changing ones nen to an element... and his body that he wished for would have fire and lightning as its elements since that was his chakra type

An Uchiha in Multiverse · C4
1 week ago
Specialization is made up of rare Nen users who do notbelong to the other five categories. In most cases, Specialists either came from Specialization bloodlines or had their abilities awakened by the special environments they grew up in. It is extremely difficult to develop a Specialization ability on one's own. However, some people like Kurapika were able to become Specialists later in life thanks to training.Specialization could be broadly defined as anything that does not belong in any of the other five categories, making it the vaguest Nen type. Accordingly, its effects are wide-ranging: some influence Hatsu itself, for example by appropriating others' Nen abilities or by altering affinities, while others allow the user to garner knowledge that would be unattainable through other means, such as about past or future events; others have completely different effects. Consequently, Specialists are not as much at a disadvantage as users of other Nen types if their category is revealed. Only Specialists can use this Nen type. It is possible to become one later in life, although it is more likely for Manipulators or Conjurers, which is why this category is placed at the bottom of the Nen chart. Since its position is dictated by a factor other than the affinity for other Nen types, it is currently unclear if it has the same acquisition rates as other categories, although it should be noted the presence of Specialization in the chart affects other Nen types regularly. It is currently unknown how Specialists develop their Nen abilities. In Neon's case, she obtained an ability that she had been wishing for since she was a child, while Tserriednich manifested his own one week after being initiated to Nen and without trying or even being aware of it.It seems that a Specialist's manifestation of Hatsu during Water Divination reflects their character and may thus give some insight into the general direction in which they might or should develop their ability, since Hatsu is profoundly affected by personality, although the information received this way is vague enough that it is impossible to pin down just what kind of ability a Specialist has already developed through their results during the Water Divination test. Of the many possible effects that can occur during a Specialist's Water Divination, only three have been shown so far: Neferpitou's aura caused the leaf on top of the water to dry out and crumble; Tserriednich's caused the water to boil and a putrid smell to be released;and Kurapika's caused the water to change colors and the leaf to spin. View More
An Uchiha in Multiverse · C3
1 week ago
Manipulators can control living and non-living things through the use of aura.On the outside, this category is somewhat similar to Enhancement but they are different in that Manipulators are capable of remote control, thus their Nen abilities are highly applicable. The more a Manipulator likes to use an object, the better they can control it. Therefore, many people have chosen to manipulate favorite things of their own.The main advantage of this category in combat is the ability to manipulate the enemy themselves. Abilities of this type are especially feared since the fight can be brought to an end as soon as the conditions are met. The aura of the ability user mixes with the target's, although it is not normally noticeable.The degree of control is, for the most part, determined by a condition that may or may not put the Manipulator at a risk or a disadvantage (such as attaching objects on the enemy, touching the enemy in a certain way): the higher the difficulty for the condition to be achieved, the better the degree of control. However, it is impossible to control a target that is already under the effect of Manipulation Nen. Manipulators are the Nen users who can pour the most aura into an object. In many cases they are seen capable of inflicting and maintaining the effects of their abilities from afar, seemingly without the aid of Emission-type Nen, most commonly with the aid of a specific medium.The complexity of the orders assigned also depends on the target: sentient beings and machinery can carry out more complex tasks, as opposed to simpler, inanimate objects.Manipulation of the highest class is capable of semi-forcing the Aura Nodes of a non-user to open.

Transmuters can change the properties of their aura. This means a person can change the properties of their aura to mimic something else, or only specific attributes.Altering the shape of one's aura falls in this Nen category too. Similar to Emission, constructs created via Transmutation are pure aura, therefore they are invisible to individuals incapable of using Nen. Transmutation is often mistaken for Conjuration due to their similarities. The difference is that Transmutation allows the user to mimic the properties of a substance with their aura, whereas Conjuration changes aura into the actual substanceSome Transmutation abilities copy the properties of real objects such as Hisoka's Bungee Gum, which has the characteristics of both rubber and gum, and Machi's threads, but some are not based on any tangible things, for example, Killua's electric shock and Zeno's Dragon Lance View More
An Uchiha in Multiverse · C3
1 week ago
Conjuration is quite similar to Transmutation The difference is that Transmutation allows the user to mimic the properties of a substance with their aura, whereas Conjuration changes aura into the actual substance. Conjured objects can, in fact, possess special abilities. For instance, the Phantom Troupe thief, Shizuku, is able to conjure a vacuum cleaner that can infinitely suck up objects, but with the condition that it cannot suck up living things and things made out of Nen. Similar to Manipulation, Conjuration abilities tend to be very specific, complex, and conditional. Conditions can be imbued into conjured objects to make them stronger. Kortopi, for example, is able to materialize a perfect inanimate copy of any object or person that he touches. However, the copies of all objects generated will automatically disappear after 24 hours. By resorting to Limitations, a Conjurer can take their ability a step further and materialize objects with properties that come even closer to exceeding human capacity, although they still cannot surpass it. Conjuration is the only way in which Nen can create things that non-users can see and touch, unless they are hidden from the senses with In. Alternatively, Conjurers can create abilities whose constructs are invisible to non-users and even specific Nen users,to the point that only one person may be able to perceive them.However, the fewer people are able to see a conjured construct, the lower the risk and the more energy is expended in its creation, resulting in an increased aura cost.

Emitters can shoot out or project aura. The emitted aura and the intensity of a user's Ten are directly proportional. Being proficient at Ten will allow them to shoot out aura like bullets. Emission is very similar to Conjuration and many Emitters can also give their auras special abilities which have many applications. The two categories, however, are fundamentally different in that the objects created by Emitters are made of pure aura, believed to be invisible to normal people. Due to its properties, Emission is typically employed in abilities with an emphasis on range and/or those that have long-lasting effects. Basic applications include shooting out projectiles or beams of aura at high speed. While this method is primarily used to attack, it can also be used to propel oneself or to cast an effect pertaining to another Nen type remotely. Advanced applications of this Nen category include teleportation and enabling one's aura to phase through non-living matter.Emission has also been combined with music to achieve surprising effects, such as relieving fatigue and transfixing the listeners. Emitted aura appears to cap the user's output,and the more aura is separated from the user's body, the shorter the distance it can travel from the user. In some cases, users have shown the ability to recover emitted aura; thus far, this has only occurred when Manipulation was also involved

Enhancement is the most balanced category, allowing users to spread themselves evenly between offense and defense and become very powerful using only simple abilities. Examples of more complex Enhancement abilities include enhancing one's healing factor or boosting the target's growth. However, it is a common belief that Enhancers generally do not need special techniques as their natural category already has the best balance between attack and defense as its primary attribute View More
An Uchiha in Multiverse · C3
1 week ago
welp it seems another author really did not look up enough information or just went off some of what they read from memory .... personality of nen types and the fun fact that unless they are a of the Specialists nen type they can not have any effects that exceed what can be done from other types of nen with their main nen type being the focus of their abilities ..
Enhancers are simple and determined.They are generally very selfish and focused on their goals.This is reflected in their Nen as Enhancers typically rely on simple and uncomplicated Nen abilities.
Transmuters are whimsical, prone to deceit, and fickle. Many transmuters rely on techniques that give unique and unpredictable properties to their Nen that reflects their personalities.
Emitters are impatient, not detail-oriented, short-tempered, and quick to react in a volatile manner. Because of the nature of Emission, many Nen abilities created by Emitters are primarily long range.
Conjurers are typically high-strung or overly serious, stoic, and nervous. They are often on guard as to be cautious. They are very observant and logical, rarely falling into traps. Being able to analyze things calmly is the strength of Conjurers. Many of the items that Conjurers create are often used by them in a very deliberate and practical, logical fashion.
Manipulators are argumentative and logical. They advance at their own pace and tend to want to keep their families and loved ones safe. On the other hand, when it comes to pursuing their own goals, they do not listen to what others might have to say about it.While Manipulators often use techniques that allow them to control their opponents, some choose an inanimate medium to control.
Specialists are independent and charismatic. They won't say anything important on them and will refrain from being close friends, but, because of their natural charisma that draws others, they are always surrounded by many people.Because Specialization is unique and can have many facets, most Specialists possess only one Nen ability. View More
An Uchiha in Multiverse · C3
1 week ago
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An Uchiha in Multiverse · C3
1 week ago
You should not go overboard of girl plans ....and miya and maya are old enough to be his mother 1 of which is already dying from natural means so you might as well remove her since and her sister unless you want to have him foolishly have thrown himself onto the radar of all major world powers. (Besides he is still a kid not yet old enough to enter high school and lots of the names you want for him seem to be from big families that would want someone with high magic talents and other factors like loyalty to their house not marrying into a large number of houses that no major family or governing body will let happen on the grounds of power balance...unless you show by the time he is in highschool political means to deal with all the red tape and personal power that can beat all the families even if they work together while hopeing they do not send people to kill the girls when they no they would have to work with other major families to have a chance at killing him [might even try to collect hair and blood to see what is genetically different and if they can make an artificial version if not should they plot to take his kids or force them to marry into their families ) View More
New Life In Mahouka Koukou No Rettousei, The Way To The Harem! · C7
1 week ago
Rio is not cannon mc....you might want to fix that or altogether stop mentioning cannon this and cannon that View More
A Commonplace Story of Overpowered Sorcerer · C40
1 week ago
..these skills do not match what you called his nen type..with how strange they are they fall under specialist. All the while he picks one of the easier elements to cripple since enough light will mean more nen to use anything if even possible..since stealing aura, healing in a movement techniques (all the while crippling the movement method since besides the great weakness of blasting the area with light removing shadows 5 mins in shadows with no attack means possible makes it worthless since it would only be means to escape and that is limited by them 5 min with a massive 15 mins b4 it can be done again), item creation , aura transfer ect do not fall under simply changing ones nen to an element... and his body that he wished for would have fire and lightning as its elements since that was his chakra type View More
An Uchiha in Multiverse · C4
1 week ago
Lol...not much info really on the other villages so if they ever want a different village it would need lots and lots of original people and events...and then their is the wars 1 person would not win for a village so they might end up as folder or forced to be missing nin to save himself View More

daryck: the story is good and everything but it's just another cliche story I really don't understand why don't you choose another village since if you stop to think he chose the village which is where most things go wrong like an attack by a speechless bijuu that within this village there is still an organization of killer ninjas who use children to raise emotionless soldiers as if that were not enough he doesn't even know in which part of the story he was born he can literally be born in the middle of a war he chose the clan Nara was interesting but even this is already becoming a cliché already has many stories that do the same thing not all that makes the story bad and one more question why always choose the same place if someone can answer me I would appreciate it (sorry for my English)

Way of the Stat Shinobi · C1
1 week ago
ya better to love than not at all when that very love will be an almost guaranteed to kill the woman and her very death maybe done by your very hand [since making the planet go boom if cultivation is high enough and the anger clouded his mind from his love was great enough thus killing her and everyone else all because he wanted to love while going into the fields of study that will put him on the radar of every power]...besides the simple fact that he will be chasing after and dating a girl who will die well b4 you with little to no chance to give you a kid hoping in the process that she stays with you with all the hydra, shield, anti- groups and social troubles that dating him will bring so if he stays looking like a **** it will bring even more so unless he can make illusions that fool even high tech equipment to show him aging or force his body to really age as if he was a marvel human not a DE human with cultivation {yes i view them as different when 'truth' needed to use energy to make his body just so he can cultivate de methods he can not be called a marvel world person but a de realm person stuck in marvel} even with that due to lower fertility he would need to hope she does not leave him due to wanting a kid so bad she cheats and falls in love with someone who actually cares enough to spend time with her {since living longer means time really does not matter as much so days of not seeing someone maybe nothing in his mind but can mean everything to those of us with small lifespans that and with cultivation he will eventually not need to eat or sleep so days will just roll together unnoticed until he stops what ever project he is working on enough to notice how much time past even modern people doing major project have time seem to roll together when doing something major let alone him who will be studying lots of different things with many potential projects that he will do on his own}]...so ya i highly doubt any real lasting loving relationship will come from someone like him since it will cause all sorts of issues what with how much he stands out with no backing and how little he has shown to care about strangers since he does not try to get to know anyone that was not cannon important and the family that adopted him [besides lots of people will just want to get close to him just because of all of what he shows meaning unless he looks at the soul of every single person he talks with any girl to get close to him may just be a spy (even spys can love the target they are spying on but will still do their jobs for the most part) or even an assassin (what with him being too smart lacking a background and going to invent stuff that will make more trouble then he even knows {advancing medical means too much and the powers will fight to have monopoly many criminals will get saved from what should have killed them ...messing the 'timeline' up big time...making advanced programs or studies into weapons or chemistry will eat into the big name companies benefits and they would not like that at all ...) {the the biggest risk to any weak normal human is if by chance she really gets preg with his kid since all the groups will want said kid as a hostage or to test on if he ever show any inhuman abilities like making fire thus getting a mutant label}]... View More

AsianLadyBoy: you've never been in love before have you, or you have but they just did not love you back. as for me even if i was a fucking god and will never die if i loved this one girl and she loved me back i would spend that time with her for how ever many years shes going to live for. Because too me its better to have spend time with the one you love then none at all.

Ascending the Heaven's · C11
2 weeks ago
meh i would have went attuned to nature instead of sharpshooter since with the chakra perk becoming a sage would be an option and training to throw things is easier then becoming a sage...but this does seem interesting View More
Way of the Stat Shinobi · C1
2 weeks ago
As for reasoning it is a perfectly logically sound reason since unless you want to stand out he will look like a young **** while any 'wife/girlfriend' will start looking as if she is middle age (thus looking more like a woman that likes young men) to eventally having to watch her die all the while looking the same [imagine that 100s of years of pain from loss that will last until he losses a humans emotions due to cultivation tgat might just kill him since it would be a heart demon from being with her and having almost no chance to give her any kid (different genetics from universe and reduced breeding chance from law punishment for cultivators)] View More

AsianLadyBoy: thats a pretty ****y reasoning, "oh hey, I love this girl and she loves me. But I'm not going to go out with her because shes going to die before me"
he could always give them cultivation techniques. since he has the library he can give them the best one and help them become op as well, while also increasing there life span.

Ascending the Heaven's · C11
2 weeks ago
Ya..guess you did not read ...'truth' made it impossible to pass on cultivation methods ( but it seems soul method works but not past 2nd realm) ...so he will out live even the longest lived race unless they are among the real 'gods' that oversee the universe or they have immortality of some kind since the one he is in a noncultivating universe and his body itself was made in the structure of DE universal laws so he could cultivate those methods. View More

AsianLadyBoy: thats a pretty ****y reasoning, "oh hey, I love this girl and she loves me. But I'm not going to go out with her because shes going to die before me"
he could always give them cultivation techniques. since he has the library he can give them the best one and help them become op as well, while also increasing there life span.

Ascending the Heaven's · C11
2 weeks ago

Raze_: It may be a bit late, but maybe instead of a system you could make him have a coliseum in his mind that appears when he falls asleep, every gateway into the coliseum would lead to a different trial with 1 specific kind of yokai, and if he completes the trial he’ll unlock a seed of that yokai’s power, but he’d still have to train the powers, as when he unlocks them they’ll be at the bare minimum for that species.

You could also add limitations as to unlocking the trials, such as receiving the recognition of a member of that species of yokai (in other words, to unlock the trial of a yuki-onna, or snow lady he’d first need to gain the recognition of one of their species), this could provide the mc a reason to befriend the Nura clan, anyways this is first and foremost your novel author, so if you have a plan and the reader’s suggestions oppose that plan then it’d probably be best to ignore what the readers say, there have been many good stories ruined or at least degraded due to implementing certain reader’s suggestions, especially those who constantly recommend extremely cliche suggestions (which is why I generally don’t offer suggestions as to which direction to take a novel unless the author asks, and I especially never offer suggestions once the novel already has an established base).

Nura Clans' First Young Master · C0
2 weeks ago
Wow more stone greed for smaller chapters and even new hights of greed called stockpiled chapter for 500 stones for a meagre 3 chapter...this is too bad since this is the only stone story i read and it looks like i should really drop it since the stone cost is going up yet chapters do not advance fast unless it is smut View More
Dual Cultivation · C186
2 weeks ago

madesaturday: damn i wasted stones again

Dual Cultivation · C186
2 weeks ago
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well simple makes things easier to plan around since then the story does not use too complex a plot armor what with him having a system plot armor already adding too much more armor can make the story hit dead ends fast as he grows too fast for the progress .so my simple idea can let him slowly combine fighting styles so long as he trains enough or make a fighting style that fits him best from what he learns due to the system aiding him with how ever you want

you can also use the simple idea to have him be born well before Rikuo with a different women so that they are half-brothers or even have him adopted so that he does not have to be a Nurarihyon type yokai or even have human blood this way when the 'plot timeline' you want starts he can be whatever age you want him to be and have learned what ever you want him to know and just use flashbacks of him tell Rikuo of his training (while training him) to introduce his many skills {so long as the total time training them does not exceed the age you gave him} [so long as it does not make him so op that the story dies on itself].

i saw someone wanting the A.I. chip from warlock and magus well that thing is basically a nerf system + lhp combo as that can use analyze to identify stuff around the user so long as they have enough information and strength by having the user need to look thu/read lots of books since as an a.i. it can store the information, compare to other source information, and run experiments to improve some task based on information gathered and user personal experiences , identify plants/poisons/powerful entities while the user needs to improve their own power so that they can read get information on the physical stats+energy stat of others that are stronger then themselves [so it can be used to toss the system wish so he does not get quest, system shops, or the horrifying system forced events to make the user stronger while it would mix with the lhp wish and nurf them both so he does not grow op without hard work and effort since the chip can only show him how to improve but does not improve him {so reading a book fast the chip retains it but not him (unless he has the memory to do so) so if he wants that information he has to read it from the chip or remember it himself}].

as for nen in hunter x hunter if you go that path you can make it so any with enough human blood can learn to use nen due to nen being life energy [this way you can make the original plot go away from the start since onmyoji will also have nen abilities and have possibly to be just as physically strong as some of the more muscle type yokai if their nen went down the path].

but the satan flame would need him having devil bloodline or alter his fear type so his father or mother would have to be a devil unless you change his fear type from displacement to flames making him a different yokai then a nurarihyon due to fear type being different [so if he is still to be brothers of rikuo and a young master of the nura clan he would need a devil for a mother thus no humanity bloodline for the mc or became a different yokai altogether due to fear types and abilities determining what yokai they are thus while being half-human he would not be a nurarihyon yokai].

but they have yōjutsu already it just never seems to be used much and are call ougi after all the Nurarihyon is a the owner of a displacement type fear but can use high grade yokai sake to make flames to burn enemies . so you can add this in as how ever you want as the mc understanding of fear and onmyoji arts grows [going to https://nurarihyonnomago.fandom.com/wiki/Osore will tell you more about fear types] View More

HOT_potato: Simple idea, I like it. I will consider it.

Nura Clans' First Young Master · C0
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