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dragonmage124

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2017-08-02 Joined United States

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this is the largest flaw i have ever seen in a combo chain based power if it needs physical/mystical attack chains due to how easy it would be for nep to forget she did something and just do it again if it worked the first time...now the only real question to ask is the mental attacks from her actions count as part of a combo if so then this flaw becomes the greatest perk with this 4th wall breaking monster..
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Great talent repeated

In order, from bottom to top: Small Talent, Medium Talent, Great Talent, Great Talent, Royal Talent, Divine Talent.

A journey through the universes

A journey through the universes

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depends really if the hate is bloodline induced due to being a hunter (like in fate/stay night nanaya shiki just passed by the true ancestor and had the uncontrollable urge to kill her).. or it could be due to memories shown while alucard was teaching him (since no backstory on the training has been shown really so how the teaching goes is unknown) or even just seeing some vamp killing someone he knew as nothing more then food could have made him hate them . might even a mix of all the above.
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ahh well it seems things are going down hill on this story seeing how he is acting like one of the wolfs who imprinted while at the same time is losing all sense of self to this bond (what little sense of self 4 chapters gave but still).. 4 elements is not op there is a vampire that can use 4 elements as well not to mention he is slower and physically weaker than a vamp and still has all the human weaknesses so that he would be hard pressed to kill more than 1 vamp at a time in a fight unless they group up and he can blasted them with high temp fire.
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Most like me do not comment before 30 some chapters or interesting events happen..others do not even try new novels/fics unless they have a large amount of chapters..as for how the story was going it seems interesting but not much has happened to tell if it will be good/ great or bad enough to drop from the reading list. since it is the start of the story that is painted like well thought out outline far I would have eventually commented or rated but since you are dropping then this can now be deemed trash until you resume the story .
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venus or oshun if you are going to use the name to bless the ship more since both of these goddess could bless the crew the best
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while wish type reincarnation is not bad the constant use of instant mastery ruins all stories since it basically goes you took 1 step now you can walk even if your body is too weak to really walk.. you swing a stick now you are a master swordsman but your body does not have the instincts nor muscles needed so good luck not breaking your body since you are trying to use master level swordsmanship with a beginners body...and the list goes on and on while killing the story since now the mc will never learn make errors in any skills since try and doing it once and now instant mastery auto makes you a master thus unless the mc is forced to be several times weaker than any enemy and in great need of body training to use the 'mastery' he will just steam roll all combat due to high mastery letting he attack from all the flaws he sees in his opponents ..while outside of combat instant mastery can make mc a master of all theory and other study type knowledge thus letting any 'instant mastery' mc correct anyone in any field since hey i picked up the basic knowledge now i know everything about it better than you who studied for years so let me tell you what your doing wrong since i can but plz remember my plot armor means you will not be able to kill me even if you try since i just got to learn a new skill if i ever get in a pinch and even if i can not kill you now i can run then kill you latter .... if you must give accelerated learning or instinctive corrective movements such will still need training will actually give plot [training time in which the mc actually studies and trains how to do stuff which if they self study can be told by a master that they trained wrong for combat thus giving even more plot devices that "instant mastery" kills while can also let mc have things he can not do well or at all thus giving him flaws making them more real as well as flat mc that kill stories faster then poorly made system fics]
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No the girl has been almost raised by him it is just wrong besides the massive age gap
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Akamatsuverse would meet a lot of points to let him grow stronger and fight with strong people.. at the same time he can learn lots of stuff depending on the when you have him show up or if you have him age slowly you can have him learn for a long time many different magics and natural sciences that can help him plus with meeting the right people he could study and make himself a nice self contained living space that he can move his island to while making many training/experiment places so he can continue he past studies without worry of others finding him [or use it to hide]
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