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MerLo2018: We are talking of a veeeery diferente tipe of being well here, depression is one thing and helping someone regaing his/her abbility to cultivated is another thing that only a powerful very high level cultivator can achievedCelestial Peak · C3
Azunyan: Story seems interesting enough. Basically, dude is transferred over to another world. Said dude finds out there is a vr game that uses weapons from his world that was probably not seen in the world he is in. He decides to jump in and play in hopes of figuring out exactly how he got to the other world. Mc as a character isn't annoying, but remarkably average in a sense. Not the fault of the MC, but the author hasn't put the MC in situations where we could see more of his personality or capitalized on those moments where we could see his personality. Out of the 10 chapters so far, I think only one was dedicated to the real world while the other nine were in the vr world. Interestingly enough, the MC is like a super solo player and has had no interactions with other people besides pking. Overall I think this is going to be a fun read, but ten chapters is seriously too short to figure stuff like this out.Fatal Shot
DarkSchneider: My friend, if you are bothered by criticism, complain to Webnovel for making these commentary systems in chapters and star ratings unobtrusive, they were obviously made for readers to write critiques, whether good or bad.
And are you telling me to write a book? You mean anyone who doesn't like something should be quiet and if you want to opine it should be a "smart" on the subject? If I want to criticize a movie I must have directed one to do it? Should I start an internet provider company to complain about the speed of my internet?Mutagen · C14
Rebirth in Bleach · C92
Rebirth in Bleach
lsoma: Feel that this story has been getting worse lately...
It was said earlier he didn't want hollow powers aswell now look. This story was actually unique but now it's turning into shinigami and hollow powers like every other bleach novel + he is literally getting involved with every girl in the damn story! what happened to his personality !?Rebirth in Bleach · C58
LMaltez: This chapter was really disappointing... Hollow powers, really? Sure, it'll give a power boost because MC who was one of the most powerful beings in existence already wasn't strong enough even though he still has so much room for growth and was still learning how to control all of his powers and that's even excluding his eyes which can literally kill with a look at its strongest form...Rebirth in Bleach · C58
Bhkboudif: Oh my god is a an arrogant rich girl getting punished for her arroganceNine Yang Sword Saint (Fan Translation) · C9
YourGrandfather: Fuck who cares if his name changed. No one would have noticed if it wasn't mentioned.The World Online · C106
Middlemost: It's BS everyone he meets is either too knowledgeable or this really shouldn't have been mentioned as a secret to begin withMartial Universe · C956
MartyUrsus: Now he’s showing his backpack to rose and thorn great I hope he loses everything due to his stupidityMMORPG: The Tales of Souls · C51
MartyUrsus: God stop talking to her and stop being nice gosh I hate her and I’m dislikeing the mc for not haveing a backbone and telling her to leave him alone.MMORPG: The Tales of Souls · C44
Daoist93: So here are my suggestions 1) I find his technique of cultivation trash because we all know that a real cultivation technique includes the 3 things to know (the body, the qi, the soul) but it's the part of the soul and without the book it is useless; 2) there from this chapter we can see that there will be a universal war for his race (his people) but for it to become powerful enough to save his people his technique slows him down; 3) your novel is too much Well, especially, do not change, and you want chapters in continuous masses like that.The Pleasure Lord · C25
Suicidal: Have faith in the Lord Fifth, gain eternal life!
When the Lord Fifth appears, who dares to cause strife!Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C41
PettyOfficer: I tend to use fiery language whenever I hate something. I’m a passionate person when I care about something, and usually, when I hate something, I’m excessively angry. If you’re offended, it can’t be helped.
Now, if you want perspective on how others think? Read their comments. They’re on each chapter and within the paragraphs themselves. You’ll see some people who are like-minded to me.
The “mental issues” you describe have no relation to the failures I described. The synopsis said the MC had “unconventional thinking, knowledge, and abilities.” That implies he should be smart and detached. However, the MC isn’t. He looks like he is because the other characters have no real skill or knowledge.
In the end, he’s stuck with people that hold him down. He acts recklessly and becomes randomly ignorant of social interactions. He’s annoying to watch for me.
If you want more on how I think and the author thinks, go read my review. We disagree on points, but I don’t think he’s wrong everywhere. It’s just that he’s thinking from 30-50 chapters ahead while I’m here in chapter 17. I don’t want an explanation 20 chapters later. I want an explanation 3-5 chapters later, or at least, some foreshadowing.
Here’s a quote from the author to show what I mean.
“Now if I have to ask??? You're not the first one but why does everyone that gives a low review barely touched the beginning of the story.”
The beginning is rough, and the author’s story is long. People like me just don’t like the MC and drop out early.Mutagen · C17
FangMing: When have I judged the novel? When have I judged "the whole book"? Judge the attitude of the MC, not the novel, not "the whole book", I also don't need to read more because I know what his attitude will be and I've seen many similar things. Looking at your profile on Webnovel (comments you make and novels that follow) is not worth having a discussion or conversation with you. That comment you wrote to me is stupid and pathetic.Mutagen · C16
DarkSchneider: Sigh... Looks like the MC is really a prince on the white horse who saves women, only that he hides behind his supposed "anti-heroism." I'm dropping this.Mutagen · C14
a_commoner: I hope Author the reader didn't force you to create a inhuman MC, a balance is always the best.Mutagen · C10
Exallion: yeah, that's true >.< Its just a matter of luck and physique for her case though :DMutagen · C6
DAIMMY: So the MC got backstabbed welp happensMutagen · C5
Codel: I figured this would happen. Hopefully he learns a lesson from this.Mutagen · C5
AnimeIsLife: And?Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy · C4
Lazyy: He'd be able to do that if he actually invested more of his Attribute Points into Power. Power strengthens the body and if the body's strengthened enough, shouldn't it be able to withstand The Eight Gates? Most likely, yes. But it looks like this author likes Agility/Speed more than Power/Strength, so I don't see how this could happen properly without him pulling something out his ass.Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system · C7
Reborn as Neji Hyuga with a system · C5
Ochoa: Guidelines could be epic for the core members...The Sword Path · C18
james0sjr: I think the only exception would be kings who are war mongersSpirit Cultivation · C11
InvicibleGod: man he should not make a guild maybe join a top guild but not his own
im tired of these crap you should change it to being on his own (one man army) or join a top guildThe Sword Path · C10
wyldfox: Seriously? Whyvu hide his class rank?The Sword Path · C9
InvicibleGod: u should have solo rewards etc its not the same if u kill it with 100 people and 1 manThe Sword Path · C4
Terrorofthedeath: The guy will literally die if he doesn’t increase the affinity with the princess and get her fat fragment. He could use other methods but giving gifts would certainly help, especially considering that he used 2 of his chances to get something for the girls. They will definitely feel moved by his action and get closer to him.Spirit Cultivation · C22
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