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freemind: Chapter of nothing

Aatrox, A God King in a Modern World. · C110
2 weeks ago

DrazGrath: Ohh God!!! Pls dont die on me

Aatrox, A God King in a Modern World. · C110
2 weeks ago

Joaxo: this **** is dropped, isn't?

Aatrox, A God King in a Modern World. · C110
2 weeks ago

Darkanlan: Why does he go around shouting he'll break peoples hands if all he's going to do is knock them out? Shouldn't he keep his word and cripple the trash properly? If he plans to go the life giving fist route he needs to learn how to properly break a spine so they live while wishing for death unable to even speak to get revenge against him.

Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot) · C15
2 months ago
"dose" should be "does"
dose
n. A specified quantity of a therapeutic agent, such as medicine, prescribed to be taken at one time or at stated intervals.
n. The amount of radiation administered as therapy to a given site. View More
Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot) · C2
2 months ago

Sage_HiddenBear: Apparently wrecking balls have a liver. Who woulda thought.

Rebirth Of The Mightiest Disciple (Reboot) · C1
2 months ago

Nongameonlynovel: If Mr. has written a few more words, the author would have a new chapter in the collection 😅

A New Path
2 months ago

Asratic: This story has no building at all. He got dumped into an apocalyptic world, and the first thing he does is **** a chick before checking his powers or limits. Even before he leaves camp the next day, he doesn’t check ****. All he does is rush into fighting “being to fast”.

That description is absolutely awful in a story. It doesn’t develop a readers imagination at all. You have to compare something with his speed, and you have to explain the things in your story before abruptly moving on. And also, suddenly he is able to utilize his Qi like he had always had it???!!!? Not once since you brought him to the world, did he try any of his powers. This is simply too awful to even read.

Every time I read a story like this frustrates me to no end. Have fun continuing a work like this.

Adventures of Bayek: Through the Void and Beyond · C3
2 months ago
What is the WC? View More
Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods · C7
2 months ago
"inspiring author" should be new/young/up-and-coming author View More

Sanguis_Alexandra: Your review on the story is quite well formulated but please keep in mind that they might be a inspiring author and this might be their first time writing, but I can see that this isn't commented maliciously but to help them. Keep up the good reviewing habit there and you could get a job in reviewing.

Naruto System Within Naruto
3 months ago

Oath: "Time passed, the days after, a group called MK5 had provoked(...) and Aoi,but(...)"

Should be

"Time passed. In the days after, a group call MK5 provoked(...) and Aoi, but(...)"

《Strongest Furuichi》 · C14
3 months ago

BloodyDaoist_: What in the world did i just read. Dude if you can write something as fanciful as this you should be writing your own stuff

A New Path
3 months ago

Daoist_Dan: Don't buy what this guy is selling. This review does the story a little too much justice if you ask me. There's no "quiet genius" and the mc isn't nearly as soulful as this melodramatic review would have you believe. This is an average story at best and another example of a poorly written fanfiction at worst. It has some novel ideas sure, and I liked the fact that it didn't have a harem... But it's just another story. Don't expect too much.

A New Path
4 months ago
Itzguud!! View More
A New Path · C125
4 months ago
So fking GOOOD View More
A New Path · C121
4 months ago
Sooo GOOOD!! View More
A New Path · C120
4 months ago
I wish you success in life and in general! ✌️ View More
A New Path · C0
4 months ago

Vallori: I will absolutely try and not let you guys down with this novel. And now that I have to take longer to write chaps, they might actually be more planned out than previous ones. So we'll see if this might actually turn out to be something positive for this novel.

A New Path · C108
5 months ago

TrueBlue: Don’t worry about the schedule too much, sporadical updates are fine too. I just hope you don’t fully drop it, the novel has been getting better and better recently, especially since you started with avatar. One of my absolute favorites at the moment.

A New Path · C108
5 months ago

Milkshake: [Translation Quality]
4/5
a. First thing, MTL vs TL. Even though I am not a Chinese speaker, i have consulted with someone who is (credits to Weirdo) and the latest chapter indicates a proper translation by Chinese speakers and not a machine translation. The TL is coherent enough albeit he didn't like how the "Demonic Sound Clan" was TL-ed among a few trivialities. So whatever the past teams did or whatever the past staff of this translation brand did, the current staff are not MTL-ing. I would suggest to the new staff to make TL notes on character names, faction names, chinese characters and their explanations on why they were translated that way and other possible translations, and indent that stuff at the end of chapters as it would showcase that they actually think about this and give the users some peace over how they treat this work in terms of translation.
b. Naming Standardization. I haven't re-read the whole novel, so i don't know what the current state of the past chapters is. Naming standardization was not bad.
The only thing i could complain about in the past was that the editors couldn't
agree upon the name writing styles (combined or separated).
Examples (each line is one character's name):
- YaJi / Ya Ji
- Cao Zhilan / Cao Zhi Lan
- He Qingman / He Qing Man
I don't know how things are now, so take this as a grain of salt, or the staff can take it as a suggestion to edit if they missed some character names so users can find it easier to google search characters to brush up on their past appearances and involved events. A poll on whether separated or combined are more memorable or not would be good, as user input is important and a poll can be indented at the end of a chapter like TL notes. I suggest the staff use polls from time to time since user-staff interaction is bad on this site, or at least indent a Discord channel or some chat channel or something where the staff can be reached instead of e-mail, as it is more interactive in regards to user feedback on grammar and spelling and other.
c. Grammar was sometimes great and sometimes horrible in the past. Again, i don't know how things changed in this regard now when it comes to past chapters. The new chapters were very readable with a few spelling or grammar mistakes.
After copy-pasting Chapter 299 into notepad++, i instantly found about 4 or 5 legitimate spelling mistakes by scrolling through it and observing what words were underlined, with 2 or 3 false positives, and it took me 30 or so seconds to do this.
[World]
The world is rich and vast, with cultivation and laws sculpting some places geographically and climatically. I would suggest to the users to write a glossary of places and factions and their descriptions as they may need it.
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===SOME SPOILERS BELOW====
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[Cultivation & Martial Arts]
This novel has an inheritance system for cultivation. Interesting concept which becomes less and less relevant the more the story advances because the MC becomes part of a cultivation world where everyone has powers. I wish the author focused a bit more on this, but i guess it's too early for me to say anything. I would suggest to the readers to especially write the skills and descriptions of the powers that the MC gains through the story, because it will immensely help with visualizing the battles and understanding what is going on. The author didn't make it memory-friendly. The battles themselves are damn fun in my opinion though.
[Story & Characters]
The MC is an anti-hero. He's not as evil as Warlock of the Magus World MC, but also not nice either. If you want a novel with someone who has a moral superiority complex and a boner for justice and ethics and all that boring jazz,
seek another work. The MC is selfish and cares mostly about survival and adventurism. His personality of an adrenaline junkie passed on into the new world, with his wisdom and intelligence rising as he goes through the story and has new experiences, but his soul remaining the same. You can regard him as a vagabond who only stays in places if they provide power.
He is not a hypocrite and admits on doing things on his whim. He is also lecherous, which comes with an "i can die any day, so i might as well" attitude as well as his way of steaming-off from his adrenaline and/or special cultivation technique.
The work is NSFW, so all easily triggered and frustrated feminists, conservative religious soccer mommies, and sexual moralists in general, seek another work instead of producing farts in the comments that only serve to stink up the room and achieve nothing beyond that.
The characters are varied, even among the powerful ones, and apart from the cliche like arrogant seniors you also have seniors who step back and think before building enmity with the MC. Some characters are forgotten, some characters come back to have interesting interactions, so i can't say there's nothing to lose in memorizing characters. Write a glossary as you read. Side-character focused scenes don't take too much of the reader's time most of the times as they usually take up a quarter or third of a chapter when they happen; but they all have a purpose and aren't exactly fillers.
The story itself isn't bad in terms of development speed; it's among the average level leaning slightly towards fast.
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To the staff i would suggest: Make a glossary page for the readers.
Make it in chronological order of introduction and emphasize it as that because this is a good spoiler-countermeasure as readers then know up to which line to check the glossary. It is not only for the good of the users, but also for the good of the staff in regards to naming standardization.

God Of Slaughter
5 months ago
I think the rating is appropriate. If I saw this on a shelf I would not even check the back of the book. View More

Kebabshop: I love reading about [An anciend world] mate fix you cover Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please Please fix your cover i feel physically nauseous every time i see it.

An ancient World
5 months ago
Reading Status: C2
The concept here is Grade A incredible. 210IQ idea. Executed with awe-factor 9999.

Will update as I read.

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5 months ago
Haha View More
A New Path · C97
5 months ago
My opinion is that he shouldn't invent reasons to complain. I hold it strongly. Do you mean I shouldn't be allowed mine? He can have his. I'll tell him where I think he should shove it. View More

Jingerd: Ey man just let him have his opinion you dont have to react that strongly

A New Path · C92
5 months ago
Yeah, keep flailing angrily. You're only proving my point. View More

lucifer_brightest: You wouldn't know what I'm talking about cause your intelligence is already stuck under an iceberg. Your already wasting space and air that someone important could have so don't start wasting ppl's time as well.

A New Path · C92
5 months ago
Just inventing things to complain about. /smh View More

lucifer_brightest: Y did his intelligence take a nose dive

A New Path · C92
5 months ago
Complaining about the free books you don't even like. Why haven't you been killed off by abusive parents yet? People like you are better off never having to share the planet with the rest of us. Fuck off! View More

lucifer_brightest: Y did his intelligence take a nose dive

A New Path · C92
5 months ago
Reading Status: C15
Updates have been stopped for months. This is enough to make any other positives irrelevant. Chapters are short too. ---------------------------------------------------- View More
Goblin Plane
5 months ago
:) haha! I enjoyed writing about your book about as much as reading your book. View More

Vallori: I read it and I honestly do not even know what to say. It's the most elaborate and well put together review I've ever seen. It holds meaning in every strange word you encounter when reading it. It is incredible and it was incredibly heartwarming to read.

What I will do for certain right now is go share this in my discord. They need to see the best review that probably will ever exist on this website of ours. So I thank you for the link and the majestic and complex review. It was an absolute treat to read for me :)

A New Path · C91
5 months ago

Vallori: I read it and I honestly do not even know what to say. It's the most elaborate and well put together review I've ever seen. It holds meaning in every strange word you encounter when reading it. It is incredible and it was incredibly heartwarming to read.

What I will do for certain right now is go share this in my discord. They need to see the best review that probably will ever exist on this website of ours. So I thank you for the link and the majestic and complex review. It was an absolute treat to read for me :)

A New Path · C91
5 months ago
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