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Demon's Virtue · C80
MyRedeemerLives: Also author romance is so overrated, it would be better just having him be single and focus on his goals first. People like to forget that Protagonists don't do romance until they came to the end of his "heroes journey". Adding meaningless wank fiction usually makes the fic worthless. Of course I'm not saying no interaction with the other sex, but making the protagonist just love certain females for no reason other than wish-fulfillment is just awful. Please author heed my words.Elder Blood Witcher · C2
SnowLove: If you cuck Geralt Im dropping, no if i just willElder Blood Witcher · C2
crywolfseven: If I could offer some advice I would say that everything so far feels a bit too... I guess bare bones is the closest word for it. I mean he shows up on earth and can breath perfectly, then his powers start to kick in and he’s almost instantly got a rather good control of them, then he just so happens to run into a nice farm family instead of any of the countless beings who would sense his magical arrival, the he just so happens to speak the same language, then they just so happen to have lost a son 14 years ago and all but cut themselves always from the world so nobody would know their John didn’t survive allowing the MC to take over, then they offer him a spot in the family after like 10 minutes worth of talking.
Basically I’m saying that the story feels more like a story outline at the moment then an actual story. This isn’t meant to be insulting, the outline is much harder then going back and filling out the story to have more detail and less just happenstance where everything just boils down to luck or magic. I mean come on we know that earth has people like The Ancient One, Professor Xavier who are highly sensitive telepaths and can sense sudden changes and people like shield who would likely pick up some kind of changes in the energy readings since he litterally just popped up in their reality. I’m just saying,
I look forward to where this story will go from here and hopefully now that we’re passed the myriad of impossibilities that brought him to earth and got him adopted (which I admit is rather tough to write in) I’m hoping that the rest of the story will be more flushed out. I mean like I said I accept it would be very hard to introduce the MC to a family on earth without making several impossible things happen so I’m more then willing to give all that a pass and just basically count everything before this chapter as a prologue that is a bit rushed in order to get into the story. I really hope this doesn’t come off as insults or complaints I am trying to offer constructive criticism. Since again I understand how difficult it can be to get into a story when you’re doing a crossover.Joh-El, a Kryptonian in the Marvel World. · C5
Ryouha: Holy fudge. Jura unable to smell is like Eiro not being Big Brain. Damn Jura is getting old T_T
Theres a mistake where instead of Jura's it said Eiro'sDemon's Virtue · C76
vkg313: Interesting. Mc still seems dumb thought for wanting to do a ritual where he doesn’t even know what the effects will be.Nightmare's Call · C53
1568743: what the hell is this story? some bastard kicks down your door and tells you to fight him and if you win you get money but if you lose you pay money? for the love of god, I can only suspend my disbelief so much author. You mean to tell me the diluted MC's first thought is to simply allow such a situation to happen instead of FUCKING CALLING THE POLICE????Nightmare's Call · C53
alwaysareader: Those are not friends those are leeches, parasites human scum.
So is there anyone in that family that doesn't think that trouble is gonna come knocking at their door.
Tnks 4 da chapter.Nightmare's Call · C51
Seink: There goes Noah again, stealing another girl's heart.... XDBirth of the Demonic Sword · C422
salem277: Big surprise as expected the family was used as a way to give mc a tragic experienceDark Moon Era · C23
AdamNics: They can completely blame the monsters if they want but garralosh being there is the legions fault.Chrysalis · C443
Unmatched: That’s what I thought as well, it seems the author forgot this and just writes as he goes along 😅Gate to the Multiverse · C7
TheAdorableDumplin: And thats why they dont give these types of powers to horny 11 year oldsGate to the Multiverse · C1
TheTrueGilgamesh: No harem stop contaminating this story leave it all😏Gate to the Multiverse · C1
TheTrueGilgamesh: 80% of the story in this site is already contaminated with harem so pla don't make this one😭😭Gate to the Multiverse · C1
Canjang: That's our boy!!! Go for everything!!Birth of the Demonic Sword · C412
muraki: wow even after learned for 3 weeks, he shamelessly accepted refund wtfNightmare's Call · C20
shelwyn: This took way too long you know! Please try and have regular updates after this, thank you.Nightmare's Call · C16
zPRAWN: Pretty alright book so far, it's just a shame the book has been out for 2 days and already missed a release. Hopefully this isn't a sign of what's to come.Nightmare's Call
ErozothDraeor: So forced. A single human betrayed him "damn the heaven, I will go against you and all humanity". "Ugghhh, I AM STARRRRVIINNG, I have been here for .... 20 minutes already, I cant take it anymore". Even injured its not like his body will force the feeling of hunger to that extent.A Chaotic World · C4
BorderlineAnorexic: Friendship with people who wanted to capture and sell me for resources just a moment ago? No thanks. I would just kill them to save me from the trouble.Is that a Wisp? · C14
Kosta_Marios: The virus evolved, now instead of just saying give us harem they find reasons to ask for a harem. *Grabs the bug spray*Game of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan · C12
Hk4747: Plus another point for an all-female pack of werewolves in this setting with him as the leader is everybody would least likely suspect the women of anything they wouldn't think of them as a threat could get a lot more done in human form and it wouldn't have to be explained By plot armor just common sense of people ignoring women thinking their weak and not monsters and hidingGame of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan · C12
Daymuz: It would be nice to add Arya too.Game of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan · C10
Game of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan · C10
Iceglade: I don’t know why you did it but the change in the way you tell the story made it hard to read I’m sorry if your trying a new writing method but it please go back I love the store so far keep it upGame of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan · C7
Jasonenrick: Ohhh man awesome story but i don't like the fact that he will Turn his family.
If he turns some who are 100% Loyal to be his Soldiers ....okay but in any other way ....don't know but somehow it isn't as cool as before because his whole Family will be like him and it somehow(for me )doesn't make the MC Unique anymore .
But if he is the Leader of the pact and they are his 100% Loyal Soldieres lurking in the Shadows then this is fine by me ;)Game of Thrones FANFIC: Lycan · C6
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