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moxxxie: It ruins the novel... hay... is everyone of you want **** ur mother... suckers ****tttbags

Harem God of Origin (ATG) · C85
1 hour ago
Ember is the very definition of a cockroach. I hope in this story they are able to get rid of that stereotype and kill that guy off when he should be killed lol. View More
The Legendary Mechanic · C567
2 hours ago

KaZe_DaRKWIND: I would be very surprised if he doesn't end up having a ground fight with Ember. If anything I wouldn't be surprised if Ember actually ends up surviving and staying as the stories cockroach for a while longer.

The Legendary Mechanic · C567
2 hours ago

HeartRend: Third

Dragonborn Saga · C483
1 day ago
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Dragonborn Saga · C483
1 day ago
Thank god for this review. I was actually considering to read this novel, and this saved me a lot of my time - especially cuz i have an exam tomorrow lol =') View More

Legion20: Deleted my old review after finishing book 1. this is the update one.
Writing quality: 4 stars The author has a good style, clear and capable of conveying well the feelings of the characters and the world around them. There are some grammatical mistakes each chapter, but the author is fixing them, also they are far from bothersome. The real problem is that both the chars and too many dialogs seem forced, litterally stuffed down the reader's throat.
Stability of updates 5stars: author promises, author delivers.
Story development 3 stars: The plot development is slow, also some things are a bit too forced for my taste. The story takes some twists that contradict what happened earlier, and tbh i do not like it. Also several plotholes are present.
Char development 1 stars: The MC is monstrously cliched (smart, handsome, sensible, honest bla, bla bla) not to mention that at just 9 years is a paragon of wisdom despite being quite silent and introverted. (that plus the fact that always at 9 yo he already has girls fighting for him...). The rest of the cast is well depicted and fleshed out, tho, i really like how the author describes their attitudes and feelings. why 2 stars then? Because the MC is unbearable and unbelievable. He gets injustly imprisoned, tortured, starved for years, and is still goody goody. then he gets r*aped (yes, r*aped) goes to the dark side, and then the author goes back to him being good thanks to a deus ex. Either he is a saint or has no brain. His BFF aegin is made of cardboard, becomes friend with the MC because his great-great-etc grandfather was a vampire sernvat too. cool explanation for a bromance at first sight, uh? All the char, and i mean all of them are either idiotic, or forced cuz author hand or just made of cardboard.
World background 4 stars: The world is interesting and so is the whole set up. No idiotic useless info dumps, the author only gives what you need when you need it. No 5 stars because plotholes even in WB.
3.4 is the final score. I dropped this after book 1.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 day ago

Legion20: Deleted my old review after finishing book 1. this is the update one.
Writing quality: 4 stars The author has a good style, clear and capable of conveying well the feelings of the characters and the world around them. There are some grammatical mistakes each chapter, but the author is fixing them, also they are far from bothersome. The real problem is that both the chars and too many dialogs seem forced, litterally stuffed down the reader's throat.
Stability of updates 5stars: author promises, author delivers.
Story development 3 stars: The plot development is slow, also some things are a bit too forced for my taste. The story takes some twists that contradict what happened earlier, and tbh i do not like it. Also several plotholes are present.
Char development 1 stars: The MC is monstrously cliched (smart, handsome, sensible, honest bla, bla bla) not to mention that at just 9 years is a paragon of wisdom despite being quite silent and introverted. (that plus the fact that always at 9 yo he already has girls fighting for him...). The rest of the cast is well depicted and fleshed out, tho, i really like how the author describes their attitudes and feelings. why 2 stars then? Because the MC is unbearable and unbelievable. He gets injustly imprisoned, tortured, starved for years, and is still goody goody. then he gets r*aped (yes, r*aped) goes to the dark side, and then the author goes back to him being good thanks to a deus ex. Either he is a saint or has no brain. His BFF aegin is made of cardboard, becomes friend with the MC because his great-great-etc grandfather was a vampire sernvat too. cool explanation for a bromance at first sight, uh? All the char, and i mean all of them are either idiotic, or forced cuz author hand or just made of cardboard.
World background 4 stars: The world is interesting and so is the whole set up. No idiotic useless info dumps, the author only gives what you need when you need it. No 5 stars because plotholes even in WB.
3.4 is the final score. I dropped this after book 1.

The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 day ago
Reading Status: C1
*This story involves an MC who has to go through a lot of hardship before he changes his moral standing to become better and stronger. As such, please expect to dislike him at times before he makes it through this period*

Ok, so can anyone tell me what chapter he *changes* his moral standing to one where I/we would like it? I rather skip to that part in reading this story.

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The Monster Inside: The First Vampire
1 day ago
Normally, the Yaoi tag is added when the MC or Male lead themselves are gay. If its some random gay character hardly anyone will mind, even if its a side character with some importance. View More

Cody5622: Nah the original commenter said he thinks this is a good story but if there's a gay character he's gonna drop it. If you drop a story you've been reading and think is good just because there's a gay character or a minor element of romance between two people of the same gender, you're definitely homophobic in some way. Simple as that. Not saying that has to mean they hate gay people, just means they're uncomfortable enough with someone being gay that they would stop reading a novel they like.

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

TaxationIsTheft: Books about gay people and gay people are not the same thing. Are you retarded or something?

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

TaxationIsTheft: Books about gay people and gay people are not the same thing. Are you retarded or something?

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

TaxationIsTheft: Books about gay people and gay people are not the same thing. Are you retarded or something?

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

Cherrygod: Did this guy just basically say "if you dont read yaoi you a homophobe" theres a word out there called preference my dude, straight men typically "PREFER" not to read yaoi doesnt make them a homophope, they can read it just fine theres no "fear" its just not their thing. You needa chill before bringing up the dictionary every comment

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

TaxationIsTheft: Yaoi novels tend to be focused on that relationship when they’re tagged as such. There’s no fear or irrationality involved here. It would be yaoiphobia not homophobia regardless.

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

Proudmore: If its Yaoi tag, then lets burn the story. I feel vomiting whenever i see Yaoi tag. I dont care about gay people, but i wont ever read a yaoi story because its disgusting to see it from a gays perspective.

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

YoyoRakesh: Bro I am really terrified if it's a gay Story!

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

YoyoRakesh: Bro I am really terrified if it's a gay Story!

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

YoyoRakesh: Bro I am really terrified if it's a gay Story!

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

KingAkaron: I'm not homophobic, but I have absolutely no interest in reading a Yaoi story if I myself am not gay. Quit throwing that word around you mong because you clearly don't know what it means.

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

Fagful: I just don't see the point in reading a story where the mc is gay if I'm not

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

YoyoRakesh: What's that yaoi tag? Seriously? If it's true I have to drop it. Yu Come one man it's a good story. Please don't made it yaoi. If the tag was false please remove it or you will lose more viewers than you can imagine.

A World Worth Protecting
1 day ago

lsoma: Oh yeah 1000000% agree with the op background thing. Gets me so salty, I see it in tons of novels and just why ? Does the author get high or something when designing the background and realise later then just nerf him like wtf

Realm of Myths and Legends
1 day ago

AsianLadyBoy: Yeah I know, this novel will never end just like detective conan. The world is more likely to end before this novel is. 10 Rl years later the Mc has only been playing the game for 2months out of the 1 year he was going to play it.

Realm of Myths and Legends
1 day ago

Prehistoric_Wolf: Think about it for more than 10 yrs Conan in detective conan is still on going with more than 1k episodes. And he is still 10 yrs olds.

Realm of Myths and Legends
1 day ago

AsianLadyBoy: I was hipped for this novel with in the first three chapters. Until the author made the MC retarded. Why do so many authors like giving the MC an OP background just to nerf him by making him retarded? The most fun i had with this novel is when he is not actually playing the game. When he is out in the real world kicking some ass. I wish i liked it when he was actually playing the game but his over explanation of things makes me not enjoy it.

So far the Mc has been playing the game for two days and it seems that about 3 days have past in RL since he has started playing. Since after logging of the first time it took him over 24 hours to log back in to play for the second time. When he went back to play it was at chapter 57. It took a total of 117 chapters for him to log out of the game for the second time. The author says that the games time is 10-1 RL time(10 hours in game =1 hour real time). So if the story keeps going at this pace. And lets say the MC will play the game for 1 year then it is safe to say that this novel will be about 21,054ch long. Since three days have passed in the story and those three days is 174 chapters long. There are 121+ 3's in a year. So divide 365(years)/3(days) you get 121.66666repeating. So 121(days)x174(chapters)=21,054. remember that the 121 is a full year in the story. So **** that I'm out!

Realm of Myths and Legends
1 day ago

CocoaButter: Ugggh Val is a walking hazard. His need for justice and immaturity will end his life one day. Poor Ren he has to babysit him.

Demon Lord's Reincarnation · C64
2 days ago

Darkdelusion: Probably Ren will need to wipe up Valdel's mess like the last time he brought Kuro.

In return, Valdel will probably be grateful for some time, before some random NPC makes him doubt others again

Demon Lord's Reincarnation · C64
2 days ago

Darkdelusion: Day 1: Valdel decides to walk on his own feet.
Day 1: Different ways to use valdel get formulated.
One day, that is the total time he can spend without screwing himself.

Demon Lord's Reincarnation · C64
2 days ago

ReaderLove: Nice except you forgot to mention his dementia and the fact he doesnt have a brain. You have 8 year of history, pretty sure he should have the least bit of brain cells to not sign that contact in the first place. Or is he one of those person that instead of getting smarter become more dumb as he "matured". Very laudable, the fact you rate this novel as a"rally good story". When I see this novel as a book full of holes and filed with the author idiocy.

Tales of Magic Swordsman
3 days ago

Niko91: Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .

Tales of Magic Swordsman
3 days ago
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