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Sovereign1996: 1) The concept is such that it has a lot of scope. The MC can create all kinds of stuff like modern appliances, mystic tools used by cultivators, military weapons, instruments which combine modern and cultivation techniques (such as a very low altitude satellite or a drone, etc). In short, just about anyone one can imagine, and its selling point is the part where MC astonishes others with his superior instruments.

2) The MC can be shown to occupy a no man's land, which he develops into some kind of organisation like a clan, sect, company, kingdom or empire.

3) The MC can win multiple battles against other individuals or organisations, with his superior instruments and modern knowledge.

4) The MC can woo many girls and ...(you know what I'm talking about)

These were the possibilities, and I rated as such.

Cons -

1) Writing is not fluidic. It doesn't feel smooth. Although I didn't find any major grammatical mistakes, the scene description feels broken.

2)The author is totally not good at writing romance. All romance scenes are cheesy, however they are not unbearable.

3) The MC does not feel ambitious. No signs of organisation building. It won't be interesting to read the MC living like Tarzan in the forest.

4) There is no awesomeness factor in MC's cultivation technique. It is kind of boring.

** I've written such a long review as I have a lot of expectations from this web novel.

The Geared Immortal
13 hours ago

Yichezkel: It's just waste of time so don't read this. The story and writing are both okay but the problem is the character especially the mc when he sees someone kill he just kill the killer without interrogation but when someone tries to kill him he just knocked him. This is so bull**** and waste of time.

The Geared Immortal
13 hours ago

HeartRend: Can we not go the incest route all the time (other than ye ziyun). Is it so bad to have a healthy family relation with your mother without thinking about banging her?

Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods · C58
2 days ago

DaoGeneralAeon: Say no to incest.

Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods · C58
2 days ago
Can we not go the incest route all the time (other than ye ziyun). Is it so bad to have a healthy family relation with your mother without thinking about banging her? View More
Half Saiyan in Tales of Demons and Gods · C58
2 days ago

NulZilch: You might be fine with cuckery but not normal people. That's your fetish not ours. So no need to act confused.

What is a slut if not a women who sleeps around? A slut also has sex with consent. No sort of mental gymnastics would change the definition that we have developed for this specific behaviour.

If he wants power, get it. If he wants women, get it. If author wants to give hulk a harem, give him. What i and any normal dude is not fine with is MC laying down his own dignity and laying with village bicycles. Dignity is something a civilized man have not a cavemen. A cavemen would sleep with a woman no matter the circumstances or stakes in it because he's that desperate for sex. Him sleeping him sluts in his communist sex cult isn't dignifying of his status as a MC and leader most of all wholly unnecessary to the story. No reader wants to read such a pathetic MC, and the massive backlash by them proves it. Man have pride and dignity that stops him from lowering himself to such level the MC is in, not caveman.

If author/reposter included this disclaimer that what kind of this fic is. No one normal except people like you would've came here and read it, just as people don't like BL read it.

Marvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential
2 days ago

DarkKnight32: Holy **** thanks bro i almost read this ****

Marvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential
2 days ago

NulZilch: Long story shot. It's NTR. Don't read it, you'll be bombarded with NTR out of the blue.

The story was fine when everyone was just working for power, then suddenly you learn that whole gang is fucking each other in one massive f*ked up or*gy. The hulk makes MC looks like a beta and every girls wants to fu*ck him, and goes around openly talking that MC is 2nd best choice because hulk is busy fuc*king others right now. Oh and all girls in the story turns out to be slu*ts as well who fu*cks everyone in the cult and have list of who's the best.

When you realise that MC is stupid enough to get in one massive se*x cult on mars despite being the boss he stops being an MC, like, where's your dignity bro? Who thinks a cu*ck can be a charismatic leader? If he wanted to wet his dick, go and wet your tool to virtually any girl on earth, you're a billionaire. MC was even relegated to beta position. You are the MC of the story in whose perspective you follow the story. You want him to best and have the best. Instead he settles for sloppy seconds from slu*ts in a s*ex cult on mars. Only a very specific group of people likes that sort of fet*ish and they're called cu*cks.

God, i regret wasting time on it. Hopefully you read this review before your read this story.

Marvel Reborn: Gems of Infinite Potential
2 days ago

HeartRend: MC is good an all, but he seem's too frivolous in love. He basically moves from one girl to the next and has too many love at first sight moments. Instead of love, its more like "lust at first sight". I'm fine with him sleeping with many women for the sake of cultivation, but falling in love or pursuing these women one after the other makes the story a little unappealing for me.

The Hedonist Sword God · C77
1 week ago
MC is good an all, but he seem's too frivolous in love. He basically moves from one girl to the next and has too many love at first sight moments. Instead of love, its more like "lust at first sight". I'm fine with him sleeping with many women for the sake of cultivation, but falling in love or pursuing these women one after the other makes the story a little unappealing for me. View More
The Hedonist Sword God · C77
1 week ago
As a finance student what you said hurts my soul. View More

Democratis: Yes!!! No Shares is great!!! If you are not the head of a company then the share system is great for you, but if you are the share system sucks ass (unless u need investment) because there are so many laws and restrictions as well as you lose a lot of power and our MC seems more of a leader then a follower. Thanks for the chapter!

Rise of House Falken - Harry Potter Fan Fiction · C10
1 week ago
new "Prince" of asgard... View More

Aikaya: I would love to see Hela saying to Odin: "Heya dad, I brought you the new king of Asgard, btw he's your grandson .."

The Chronicles of Elijah · C67
1 week ago

krollox: Is Sasha dating Reynolds daughter or is she into reynold

The Burning Fiend · C137
1 week ago

Tartarus: Anyone got recommendation of other coiling dragon fan fic?

The Burning Fiend · C137
1 week ago

jai_97: 1 week since updates. (*T ^ T*) Come back!!!!!!!!

The Burning Fiend · C137
1 week ago

Romelimmmotna: Juan:Sir can i have a question? Teacher: Yes! Juan: A cargo plane carrying 100 sack's of rice, 1 falls off how many sack's are left? Teacher: 99 Juan: I have another question! how do u put an elephant inside a fridge? Teacher: i dont know Juan: its easy you just open the fridge and put it in. I have another question! Teacher: okay ask! Juan: how to put a donkey inside the fridge?? Teacher: It's easy you just open the fridge and put it in. Juan: No sir! You just open the fridge take out the elephant and put it in. Teacher: ohhh.. Ok! Juan: let me ask another one, If all the animals went to the lion's birthday party, and one animal went missing which one would it be? Teacher: the Lion ofcourse! Because it would eat all the animals. Juan: No sir, it is the donkey because its still inside the fridge. Teacher: are you kidding me?! Juan: no sir! One more question. Teacher: ok!! Juan: If there's a river full of crocodiles and an old man wanted to cross, how ? Teacher: There's no way, he would need a boat to cross. Juan: No sir, you just swim and cross it because all the animals went to the lion's birthday party. Juan: One last question. the old man cross the river but he still died why? Teacher: i dont know Juan: the reason is he was hit by that sack of rice!!

I have a Mansion in the Post-apocalyptic World · C767
1 week ago
Great chapter, Hope you update many more! View More
Sage of Darkness · C53
2 weeks ago
I really hope he doesn't leave the guild. Also, if he can turn the small village into an empire it would be really cool. View More
Sage of Darkness · C30
2 weeks ago

Sovereign_Uyr: What do you mean, the top echelon are pretty chill with him so the chances are like non-existent.

Sage of Darkness · C30
2 weeks ago
Please don't ever leave the guild!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! View More
Sage of Darkness · C25
2 weeks ago
Awesome story, gonna be really sad if MC leaves the guild =( View More
Sage of Darkness · C22
2 weeks ago
Exactly, at this point there is no reason to leave the guild. He helped build it so big and it would also in turn be really beneficial for him as well. If he leaves the guild and joins that Ye Feng's guild i'm gonna be pretty sad about it =( View More

7sins_Lord: That idiot. he help build this one why run to another that's always at war

Sage of Darkness · C19
2 weeks ago

7sins_Lord: That idiot. he help build this one why run to another that's always at war

Sage of Darkness · C19
2 weeks ago

deadimp: A very interesting take on twilight I really enjoy it and like how the mc wanted to go somewhere else and ended up there. Can't wait for new chapters in both this and the other novel by this author they are some of the best I have ever read

How Not To Live! (Twilight)
2 weeks ago
Unfortunately View More

Sheriff_K: I mean, who DOESNT think with their little brother? 🙄😝

Rise of The Undead Legion · C46
1 month ago
Thanks bro, since a good number's been stockpiled i'm gonna get into reading it now. Good thing was tho that since its been in the top 100 i've come across it often in my search for another novel lol. Thanks for the heads up tho. View More

Lamenial: Yo. Chap 93. Idk if BlaqueLyte told u at 50 tho

The Lust System
1 month ago

Lamenial: Yo. Chap 93. Idk if BlaqueLyte told u at 50 tho

The Lust System
1 month ago

Hyuki: yea hope he isn't controlled by her...i can understand a equivalent relationship but not the op mc who gets controlled by a girl he doesn't seem to like at all...

you see to often how the character changes quickly between everyone else and some specific girls/women

In the DC World with a System · C10
1 month ago

Brother_sly_1: Yup I hate novels where the main character let's their girls walk all over them or control them.

In the DC World with a System · C10
1 month ago

TrollingVamp: Nice! Hopefully he won’t become the girls personal *****

In the DC World with a System · C10
1 month ago
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