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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C178
ShadowH1: When this quest is over, I personally would like to see Lisandra be brought over to Shiro’s world. Reason 1: After this quest is over and when so many chapters has passed it would be boring if the only thing that actually happened was that Shiro got some items, gained two levels and changed to a [Corrupted Elemental Sylph]. Reason 2: Although it would be boring if the only way the story progressed was that Shiro got some rewards. It would be much more interesting if all these chapters served a greater purpose, such as a character introduction. Reason 3: I believe that Lisandra would fit in great amongst Shiro’s team. Not to mention her personality that would fit right in, she poses abnormal strength for her level and she is even going through Shiro’s personal training. And after spending all this time with each other it would be weird if Shiro and Lisandra did not grow close to one another. Reason 4: It is not something imposable to happen, just look at Yin for example.
Things to take note of:
I have been suspecting that Lisandra most likely possess a class before the [Hero] class so if she were to join Shiro’s parry she would need to obtain another class or her relationship with Shiro would not be so good. The author could go about solving this problem in different ways. For example, you could write how due to Shiro’s influence and education Lisandra will not have the mindset of a hero and therefor she may obtain a different class such as [Corrupted Hero], kind of the same way Shiro got [Corrupted Elemental Sylph]. In this way, her element might also change from light to Shadow. It might also be good if she got a balanced class seeing the only person in Shiro’s party that might be considered balanced (having some offense but also some defense) is only Madison. But even then, she is not good at offense and defense at the same time but rather only switches between the two. Another thing I would like to say is that this might also be a good chance to shine some light on the mysteries of dungeons, the system and such, perhaps it’s all the work of the gods.
Last suggestion, have the requirement for the S rank reward something like getting Lisandra to certain strength and then have the quest sum up what would happen in the future. Something like what happened back in the “dungeon story: Kingdom’s survival” back at the Shadow Temple. I would rather not have Shiro deal with the political situation in a world where it would not even make a difference at the end of the day.
Also, I think that this comment might have turned out a bit longer than I expected, but ohhh well what can I do about that now?Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C178
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