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Bonjour auteur revener vous me manquez donnez au moins une date de reprise svp View More
The Burning Fiend · C139
3 weeks ago
merci a vous j'adore votre roman prener soin de votre santé !!! =) View More
The Burning Fiend · C138
1 month ago
merci pour le chapitre !!!! View More
The Burning Fiend · C137
1 month ago
Revener besoin plus de chapite plsssss View More
The Burning Fiend · C137
1 month ago
Reading Status: C132
Une seule chose a dire GÉNIALE VRAIMENT MERCI A L'AUTEUR POUR SON TRAVAIL . J'ai rattraper l'histoire en seulement 2 jours de lecture de base j'adore l'univers du romans mais je trouve qui a bien présenter les nouveau personnage et surtout le MC ne suis pas Lynley mais crée sa propre aventure il ne se crée pas d'ennemie au hasard il s’entraîne et vie sa vie il dépasse complètement Lynley . Il n’y a aucun clicher vraiment un roman a pas louper LISEZ LE !!!!!!

PS N’abandonner pas ce projet pls vous avez tout mon soutient !! View More
The Burning Fiend
1 month ago
merci pour le chapitre j'adore votre travail vite la suite c'est super intéressant je m'en lasse pas =) View More
The Burning Fiend · C132
1 month ago
merci pour le chapitre =) View More
The Burning Fiend · C130
1 month ago
Oui sa peut être intéressant je te soutient 👍 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C0
3 months ago
Super chapitre merci 👍 vite la suite 🐼 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C88
3 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 vite la suite sa deviendra de plus en plus intéressant je me m'en lasse pas 😎 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C86
4 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
Fun in Highschool DxD world · C74
4 months ago
Nami vivi View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C0
4 months ago
Merci pour cette sortie en masse 👍 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C70
4 months ago
Ouff j'ai eu peur n'abandonne pas pls j'adore votre travail 👍 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C0
4 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System · C42
4 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 la suite pls 🐼 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C56
4 months ago
J'ai mis une critique 5 étoiles ✨ les idiot qui n'ont pas lu 10 chapitres ignore les il sont seulement des imbéciles merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C0
4 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 je devener fou 🤪 vous avez arrêté au pire moment le chapitre précédent View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C48
4 months ago
Reading Status: C47
Bonjour tout le monde c'est rare que je conseille une fan_fiction j'ai lus beaucoup de ce genre surtout de naruto et one pièce mais celui mérite 5 étoiles ✨ certains dirait qu'au début sa avance trop vite ou que c'est cliché mais l'écriture de l'auteur et la présentation des son histoire change tout ces vraiment agréable à lire les seul chose genente c'est que les combats vont trop vite à part avec garp bien sur. Ne lisais pas les mauvais commentaires qui on même pas lu 10 chapitres. Merci à l'auteur pour son boulot 👍👍👍👍👍 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe
4 months ago
Noooonnnnn ne vous arête pas la un chapitre de plus pls merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
One Piece: Death Scythe · C47
4 months ago
merci pour le chapitre vite la suite =) View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C96
4 months ago

Draconax: THIS IS AN ACTUAL REVIEW WITH DETAILS AND SUMMARY. READ IT.

IF YOU WANT TO GET TO THE REVIEW, SKIP THIS PARAGRAPH. First, I would like to say that this novel deserves a higher rating than it currently has. Why? Because several people have left one-star reviews, claiming that the other novel in the "What's Next" section had more reviews. This is not true! Also, the original novel is NOT DROPPED. These rumors have been propagated by one single user who has also been leaving hate comments and abuse. Now, onto business.

Overall Summary: I've only read to chapter 10, the latest chapter released, but it seems pretty good so far. The basic premise is that there is a character, named Lin Yun, living during the apocalypse. It's a magic world, but they used up all of the mana, and now there is none left, and their world is ravaged by disasters. The main character is originally from Earth. However, this seems unneeded as it is not relevant to the story in any way as far as I can tell. Lin Yun is struck by a mysterious phenomenon, causing them to transmigrate into the body of one Mafa Merlin, a 9th Rank Magic Apprentice. Mafa belongs to a trading company called the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce, and is very wealthy. However, his father was with their fleet of ships transporting several extremely valuable goods when a storm struck and sunk the fleet, killing his father and bankrupting the Flashing Gold Chamber of Commerce. Artemis Fowl, anyone? Now, creditors are coming to collect, but Mafa has no money to give them. Lin Yun, however, retains the knowledge of his two past lives, and is aware of several advanced techniques that would not exist for centuries, allowing him to advance into a 1st Rank Mage. And I can't reveal any more without spoilers! Yay!

Translation Quality: 5/5: Not much to say here. Good grammar, slightly odd sentence structure, but that could be more due to the original style than the translator's style. Thanks for translating this, Shiraishi!

Stability of Updates: 5/5: This one I can't really judge, since we haven't had any updates, but the original mass release (10 chapters) was enough to get a basic idea of the storyline, and apparently there will be 14/Chapters per Week, or 2/Chapters per Day. Thanks for translating, again, Shiraishi!

Story Development: 2/5: Unfortunately, I'm going to have to give this one a 2/5. Why? Because there's not really a plot. Yes, I am perfectly aware that I have only read 10 chapters and that there is probably an actual plot. Here's the problem. The MC is insanely OP. He's aware of advanced techniques, looks like an alchemy genius, and so forth. That's the problem with so much future knowledge. Additionally, there is so much FACE-SLAPPING! Like, so much of it. It's the equivalent of... let's imagine you're in a technology competition. There's a really rich kid competing with you who has gotten this far on money alone. But now, he has to compete based solely on his skill... and he produces the technology needed to go faster than lightspeed. This is through no fault of your own, the problem is that the kid is from the future and knows how to build stuff that comes in several centuries. Do you see the problem? Now, let's say the... government wants his stuff. Unfortunately, the kid can also build giant mechas, plasma cannons, interstellar ships, and even technology that can stop a nuke. That's what the equivalent of this is. There's not going to be much of a plot because the MC is just THAT OP.

Character Design: 4/5: This one's a bit hard to judge, since we've only seen about five different characters, including the MC. The MC himself is not that well-developed so far, but it's sort of funny to watch him drool over really common items since they don't exist far into the future. Going back to our earlier example, it's like the kid drooling over seeing a piece of wood. Maybe trees don't exist in the far future! Then, we have Raymond, the son of the old caretaker/housekeeper. He's a 5th Rank Mage who gets face-slapped by the MC. Then, Raymond is all, OMG, you're amazing, I'm gonna follow you around. He ends up getting amazing (to him) rewards from the MC, but the sad part is that the MC doesn't even notice... next comes the "uncle." Have you ever seen that trope where the family relative tries to take the MC's stuff after the parents die? Yeah. That's him, and he's the main reason that Character Design is losing a star.

World Background: 5/5: Again, not much so far, but it's pretty well developed. It's a world called Noscent, and personally, I think the whole, "running out of mana" thing is very interesting. The ranking system goes like this: Magic Apprentice --> Mage --> Great Mage --> High Mage --> Archmage. They have something similar for other jobs as well, like Alchemist. In the beginning, we also get some fun background info about what wrecked the world, and later in the book, about other cities and countries, and so forth.

Overall, this is pretty good, but there is likely to be a lot of face-slapping and MC being OP, so if you don't like this sort of thing, don't read it! I can't speak as to romance because we haven't even seen any female characters yet, so I don't know if there is romance. Also, Shiraishi is a very good translator! Thanks! I personally am going to keep reading this. Upvote this comment if you liked it so that more people can get ACTUAL reviews and not just random five-star or one-star reviews.

End of the Magic Era
4 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Ring View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C71
5 months ago
OPPAI SAMA !!!!!! MERCI POUR LE CHAPITRE 👍 View More
I am Hunter! Why Do I Need to Be Popular? · C0
5 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
One Piece: Z Pirates (one piece fan fiction) · C73
6 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 vite la suite 🐼 View More
I am Hunter! Why Do I Need to Be Popular? · C0
6 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
One Piece: Z Pirates (one piece fan fiction) · C72
6 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
I am Hunter! Why Do I Need to Be Popular? · C0
6 months ago
Je les pas vu venir xd merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
Profane Prince of Domination · C47
6 months ago
Merci pour le chapitre 👍 View More
I am Hunter! Why Do I Need to Be Popular? · C0
6 months ago
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