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Flyzar: Throw Ino, Don't throw Ino. Just have both, a Mortal Wife and an Otsutsuki Wife. Balance in Love and Life.The Sharingan Hyuga · C86
PRLXThanatos: great story, and loving the mass of chapter releasesThe Sharingan Hyuga · C79
OoguruRyuuya: I was afraud you would write several chapters just explaining the backstory with a few minor changes but this seems pretty promising so far.The Sharingan Hyuga · C78
Ruined_Leprechaun: Damn...is this a zetsu backstory...that's a first...The Sharingan Hyuga · C78
Isaidiot_Blue: For those that want to read this. Consider this a warning, just some random things that tick me off.
-Instead of devil fruit author says fruit of the devil
-instead of logia fruit author says loggia or lodge
-its a logia fruit based mc
-its a water logia LOLOLOLMy new life in One Piece
Joao_Arthur: Dude OMFG stop making the same mistakes again and again, really, did you never read your own novel before post it? do you even try to improve at all?Reincarnating as Issei Hyodo in DxD world
God_King: I don't need perfection, but I do need effort. Several people have corrected the author (because how can you improve without constructive criticism). I didn't say the novel was trash (that would be unconstructive and pointless), I just pointed out some mistakes. Mistakes that have also been pointed out by several people and by not fixing these mistakes the author is showing his lack of care for his work. I don't need perfection I need effort, because if you don't put effort into improving your writing and into everything you write you might as well not write at all. And I think you really should calm down, you might have read too many xianxia novels if your first response to criticism is calling the other person shameless and thick faced. (I do enjoy xianxia novels myself but not the extent of becoming chunni).Reincarnating as Issei Hyodo in DxD world
God_King: Gone instead of gun. Write instead of rights and that was just what I caught from skimming the first 2 chapters. Plus these are mistakes that have been pointed out to the author and he doesn't correct them which shows a lack of care on his/her part.Reincarnating as Issei Hyodo in DxD world
AsuraMonarch: Ain't even gonna read.
Top review is a guy called Kreuz saying the author has excellent grammar.
Okay so expectations became an all time high, I was thinking.
"Something readable?!" I saw the synopsis that excitement died down.
First chapter in the first paragraph there were obvious mistakes and the flow wasn't good. Read a few more paragraphs found some CONSISTENT mistakes, And i've seen how he says You, LITERALLY FUCKING U.
I don't care if the story is decent but the fact that someone thinks that he has excellent grammar already extinguished my hopes in this grammar forsaken fanfic.Reincarnating as Issei Hyodo in DxD world
Conqueror1: I actually drop a single manly tears 😭One Piece: Marine's Life · C15
Ardi_Yuniarsyah: Author-san maybe you can make He less narssistic and make him more realistic. HeheheIs It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in SAO? · C2
Taurus99: No offense but this beauty personality is annoying might be just me but could you change it so he changes from always narcissistic to sometimes as he gets older.Is It Wrong to Try to Pick Up Girls in SAO? · C2
Blackrock5: I can't understand those bad comments, cause I do like the fact that he has a rival so it's more fun reading it 😁😉The Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C80
Mizrael222: Horrible book. This story does not deserve the ranking it has. The fact that this book is even in top 200 shows that you don't even need to have a good book to make it in a high place. This story feels like it's a fantasy for the author and self-inserted himself. All of the characters are bland, generic and full of cliché. The writing quality of it seems like someone **** down a paper then publicized it. Not even "This is only my 2nd language, so please bear with me here" would excuse the horrible quality that this story has. The only good thing about it is the Stability of Updates, as the author promised for 2-5 chapters a day (which is actually insane, and credit is given when credit is due). There is absolutely no story development at all, the character goes to an internet café, the main character then gets hit, meets god, then gets absolutely everything. Now that is the point of this story, so getting that op system is fine, but then everybody just wants to be his friend, girls want to be his wife for absolutely no reason. The universe literally bends over so it can please the main character, there is no reasoning provided at all for anything. As I said before, the character design feels bland, everything is forced, and does NOT represent what actual people would say: Ex: (oh my god mc is so cool kyaaaaa)... no. Nobody would do that, I feel like the only bit of realism that the author took was from anime and manga and did not put any actual realistic stuff in here. I would not put this review here if the story was ignored and not even in the top 1000 (It doesn't even deserve top 1000).Overpowered Godly System
LordFi7th: This is no different than naming your MC Carlos in a novel where all the characters have Chinese names. Heck you could've named him Sun Tzu even.Against the god (fan-fic) · C9
D_REAPER: I’m fine with the bashing part but the last name doesn’t sound good together with it also shoulda been vashura sounds coolerAgainst the god (fan-fic) · C9
TrueImmortalDevil: Indian name in world where EVERONE have chinese names ...Against the god (fan-fic) · C9
Alyptriline: We're not yet a civilization level 1Super Emperor System · C33
TheTrueGilgamesh: 1chp every ten years😏 yes still worth it if you can dump the dumb bimbo charlotteSuper Emperor System · C33
BugsyToots: Dude who in this world has the option to change their appearance to this extent and they dont. I don't think anyone loves themselves that much.Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C1
kessu91: So whats the point of this chapter? He gets no bloodline goodies and goes with old face and thats that? What a fucking waste of time...Skyrim system in Harry Potter World · C1
sadark: why is the MC obeying Hancock? he doesn't have to , they attacked him and yet he is behaving like their errand boy??????? what that change of personality?One Piece: New Beginning · C18
yooooooooooo: At the start of the story I thought she would be hot....... I just googled her ....****iittt 🤢killer off please we need hot anime wifu (ino).The Sharingan Hyuga · C45
CornboyRay: JAsura! You are a pice of garbage. How dare you leave me on a cliff hanger like that😡😤! I feel like you just took the crack pipe out of my mouth as I was about to spark up. That was my last rock... I had to do things for that rock... Unspeakable things. Things that shall remain unspoken🥺😢. I love this novel and that's how I feel after the end of every chapter so don't take offense. 😂 Can't wait till the next one.My Hero Academia - Saiyaman · C15
Uchiha Sasuke : Through the Multiverse · C0
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