ViolatedMonkey

5mth

Commented

you should have had the MC change his name to Adam. he could pretend to be the original human.

ch 24 Expanding to new lands

The Immortal (twilight fanfiction)

Movies · Beans_on_a_tree

ViolatedMonkey

6mth

Commented

didn't this movie bomb?

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ViolatedMonkey

11mth

Commented

I'm suprised you don't have like 50 chapters already completed. if I was you I would take a week and write chapters. then release one every 2 days while you keep yourself ahead.

ch 12 Author's Note

Snakes and Ladders (A Hollywood SI/OC)

Movies · Archonstine

ViolatedMonkey

1yr

Commented

it would be nice if he wasn't on the lacrosse team. that's a little too close to the MC

Technically many girls flirt with me since I am the best player of the lacrosse team and probably the future captain, especially after my new transformation I got an upgrade to my physique, but if I must be stuck with a girl, I want her to be good enough to never bore me.

Teen Lion: a Teen Wolf Fan-Fic

TV · WebReaderPub

ViolatedMonkey

1yr

Replied to Dennis_Wadford

that's what I was saying. he's been regrowing his whole body for like 300 chapters.

ch 935 Growing an Arm

Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain

Sci-fi · Eight O'clock At Night

ViolatedMonkey

1yr

Commented

??? MMA is art that doesn't have any fancy movement. it's literally the most practical stuff from everything.

What's the use of MMA when a spear head pierces your brain or an arrow pierces your lungs? Before you could make any fancy movement, you would already be dead in some gruesome way.

Another Leylin: Warlock Of The Magus World

Book&Literature · SwordDomainGod

ViolatedMonkey

1yr

Commented

shouldn't his fatigue be 2/2 now? how is he able to enter another dungeon.

[You have entered the low level yellow rank dungeon — Rabbit Grassland.]

Alternate World: I Started With Two SSS Templates

Urban · Cold Fried Anchovies

ViolatedMonkey

1yr

Commented

it would be a cool scene once enel saves ace and luffy. and has them on their boa t. he explains why he saved them. how there is no such thing as the gomu gomu no mi. and it's actually the Hita hita no mi : nika

ch 61 Clashing with the Strongest

One Piece: Reborn as Enel

Anime & Comics · VeganMaster

ViolatedMonkey

1yr

Replied to XenoCantSee

if no one answers your questions there is one good reason. Enel supposedly has the strongest fruit. the thunder thunder fruit. but it's actually the second strongest. right under the sun god Nika. since it's immune to thunder.

He was going to let Luffy do his thing, even if his current relationship with Luffy was a bit strained, he still had thoughts of befriending the future Sun God Nika.