SmartudZ

1yr

Replied to Ashton_Clark

the moment after reading this chapter, oi dude, that was KS right there. then when i go to comment section, im too late for it, lol

ch 413 Incident [5]

hmm... how about Ava the beast tamer girl that joined Rens group? or anyone else, like your new original character, for example, an innocent young elven girl / princess around 100 years old. there other races in the novels world, why choose a female human? kinda weird if it's an orc or dwarf.

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In The Author's POV as a reader

Book&Literature · Deepship

SmartudZ

2yr

Posted

something i dislike from this novel is the MC is actually racist. he destroyed Newyork as Pain with shinra tensei, he is ok to release any bijuu all around the world but he didn't want to touch China for any of his dangerous play. the MC reason, i realy hate it, it sound like the author is bootliking a chinese readers because Chinese readers doesn't want him to touch China.

loLGHGHGWg

Anime & Comics · YFT

SmartudZ

2yr

Commented

hmm.. is it tensa zangetsu?

ch 107 106. Befriending The Beast

The Shinobi of Straw Hats

Anime & Comics · PeekACoo

SmartudZ

3yr

Commented

everyone just want the author to make ace survive the war, but i thinks it's necessary for him to die. the mc has the power of naruto world, bit he is too weak. reviving Ace is not impossible people. the author wanted to make the mc part of mugiwara's crew, so of course he will make the mc not be stronger than luffy. iff he is far more stronger than luffy, it's pointless to make him join strawhat pirate.

ch 96 95. The Great War 6

The Shinobi of Straw Hats

Anime & Comics · PeekACoo

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to Luky_shark

??

ch 11 Unexpected

The Myth: Shinobi 10.000 AN

Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to DragonslayerOfArk

The Hokage no longer exist, and he even literally callad himself a Kage. XD

ch 10 New School

The Myth: Shinobi 10.000 AN

Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to Deatlord

sorry for the typo

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Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to Knights_Errant

inspired by japanese tshirt with a bad english word, like japanese wearing tshirt with "FUGLY", "dhiarea" on it, and they dont even know what it means. (source yt)

"Everyone stay on thir ground! dont move! this is an attack, we are TITS Organization!" one of a terrorist member announced with a headset on on the stage.

The Myth: Shinobi 10.000 AN

Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

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kinda like a crying emoticon wit 2 capital Ts, maybe they are craying because you're laughing about their org name XD

"Everyone stay on thir ground! dont move! this is an attack, we are TITS Organization!" one of a terrorist member announced with a headset on on the stage.

The Myth: Shinobi 10.000 AN

Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to Knights_Errant

its not about chakra, i mean it like some physical and mental burdens directly to his body

"how can that whiskers boy did so many, he got a huge Chakra, but its after effects?"

The Myth: Shinobi 10.000 AN

Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to Knights_Errant

i love the Japanese for his casting, but ill use english for the jutsu names, its seems fun for me, i write for fun, sorry

Kawarimi no jutsu (Substitution technique), Bunshin no jutsu (Clon technique), Henge no jutse (Transformation technique) and Sunshin no Jutsu (Body flicker technique)

The Myth: Shinobi 10.000 AN

Anime & Comics · SmartudZ

SmartudZ

3yr

Replied to Knights_Errant

sure, but itll be too fast for an early chapter

for Taijutsu i can train with villagers that are actually loved Ninjas and martial arts too, like my dad or my neighbors, well i need to hold myself to not hurt them.