HugoStlebch - Profile

I read up to chapter 65 and I don't know if I should continue. The story is certainly interesting, but the author's inexperience with his writing is a horror, this story needs serious revision. Attempts in chapters R-18 are terrible and the punctuation in the text is a mess, often you can't differentiate between what the characters thoughts and lines are or when the point of view changes.

I've read up to chapter 125 so I'll be honest in my opinion. I really like your idea for your story, but as well as having good successes, there are also mistakes. Mainly in grammar and continuity Example: in one chapter there was a character who clicked his tongue 5 times and the sighs: (Haaaaaa) seem like screams. It is very obvious that the author knows many Japanese, Korean and Chinese novels and brought some of his strengths to the novel, but he also brought his weaknesses like the personality of his protagonist.

I thought it was cool your story really made me feel the DC universe, I just don't expect the MC to become a cold-blooded character. the only flaw in the story was doing a grammar review and having an English version would be nice and would have a lot more prominence.