Atkinsopn

8d

Commented

You repeat limited points like a parrot are you illiterate and do not know what the definition of “free” is?

After some thought, I chose a Pocket Dimension. Having a luxury mini world at my beck and call sounded like a fantastic idea.

Atkinsopn

1mth

Commented

Ivy digging her grave hole deeper, the life dept isn't being acknowledged and could be ignored, her digging is actively detrimental how can someone claim a life dept they actively deny and pretend doesn't exist, creating problems for your self. trying to get Quinn to acknowledge it is like asking to be shackled around the throat. do you have to honour a money dept when the whole world doesn't want the dept to be repaid or its existence acknowledged. Imagine the bank deleted 1st , 2nd & 3rd party information-everything to do with a money transaction in your favour and 10 years later tried to claim you owed them money, how is that different making it up?

Ivy Potter was conflicted.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Atkinsopn

3mth

Commented

I’m crying 🤣😂🤣

Rank: Edger (0/1).

Atkinsopn

3mth

Replied to Atkinsopn

If you’re so adamant that the mc who has more spiritual power than the nine tales didn’t lose in this clash you should be obligated to write Izumi constantly sneak attacking the mc and soul and mind raping her like an all you can eat buffet. You opened the floodgates with how hard she lost in the conflict

Atkinsopn

3mth

Replied to Atkinsopn

Some one invades your soul ripping all your memories stealing everything you know, you know nothing about fighting as a soul they do. You fight back and are having a terrible time fighting this single soul entity off, it splits into a thousand copy’s all whom are still stealing your soul energy and hundreds escape all with your soul energy and memories. You should read the chapter with cold logic, you created an overpowered enemy out of nowhere did your main character get to strong and you ran out of ideas?

Atkinsopn

3mth

Replied to Atkinsopn

Read chp 88 again and say I’m lying

Atkinsopn

3mth

Posted

Don’t waste time everything about the mc is erased halfway through the story im not tagging this spoiler since this is a deal breaker for the main audience of people poking their heads in to look at a REINCARNATED CHARACTER USING FUTURE KNOWLEDGE. Massive plot hole incoming too they ripped all the memories and spiritual energy out of the mc, I didn’t waste time reading further but if the mc isn’t anything but living and having the conversations of middle school handicapped child the writer really lost their marbles.

Atkinsopn

3mth

Commented

How many people dropped this here

ch 64 Shiori vs Izumi(Rewrite)

Atkinsopn

3mth

Commented

This fic will be trash negative -10/10 if you keep introducing terrible gods, that don’t have the resolution of getting the vlad the impaler treatment as their comeuppance. You reap what you sow. Acting like this guy can’t exterminate them all in their future instead of being neutral is insanity regardless of the transmigration cheats.

ch 0 6 The Crossroads Of A Spear Boy

Spear Boy Gets Creative (Cao Cao SI) DXD Multicross Story

Anime & Comics · EzioAuditore_1

Atkinsopn

3mth

Posted

Interesting, it has a good overall story, foreshadowing isn’t transparent so it’s quite nice to follow the story as new things unfold

Atkinsopn

3mth

Replied to ThePrsn

Outing yourself as someone who has read barely any Chinese cultivation stories.

'How would that be possible? The other party could crush you with just one finger, and yet you're still thinking of taking her Heavenly Flame? Even I would have a hard time dealing with a Dou Ancestor right now, and you didn't even consider the relationship between her and your cousin before making a move?' Yao Lao said speechlessly.

BTTH Life Simulator System

Anime & Comics · Kisshot

Atkinsopn

6mth

Commented

Dropped here twice was real bad.

The Daedric Prince champions arc was fun, though I think I could have written their personalities a little better. Differentiated them more, but all in all it was fine... Aside from the somewhat Deus Ex Mehrunes Razor death of Mc... Yeah, I admit I coulda done that a little better, but it's too late for regrets now...

Unbound Familiar

Video Games · Niggross

Atkinsopn

6mth

Commented

I skipped here after dropping twice in the 400’s your biggest sin in this entire book was putting a shackle around your neck when you avoid power like it has HIV. sit down and put thought into a better story that accommodates a more powerful mc without making stupid justifications for the enemy being stronger for no real point apart from I need a challenger powerful mc’s we all know the mc will win it’s grating and irritating when you throw them through artificial problems of their own lapse of judgement which shouldn’t have happened if the philosophy of getting stronger every story of this nature seems throw out the window when they can’t accommodate.

Anyway, I sinned with filler once more, I believe I could have written this story in around half the time it actually took me... I keep forgetting the fact that I'm not simply writing for my own enjoyment but an audience too, I don't wanna be the 'Naruto-Filler' guy I swear...