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Seems you need to get new prescription glasses or wisen the f*ck up, Rebecca Danek.

That was constructive criticism I wrote there; you're not the first idiot I've had to explain this to, scroll down and see my previous replies to another low IQ brethren of yours. View More

Rebecca_Danek: No one honestly cares we aren't here to be a fu***** English teacher we are here to enjoy the story and read

· C4
2 months ago
Reading Status: C203
Personal rating: 8/10

Personal comment: Very well written but the Author should've written more chapters to conclude the novel properly, because the ending was too sudden for my liking.

Pros:
- Slow, Steady and Eventual outcomes
- Includes well known brands and even makes (who I believe is) Samsung the antagonist
- Includes business take overs and mergers
- Includes stock trading
- Includes cryptocurrency
- Includes global expansion
- Includes employee appreciation (as a neglected employee myself it made me happy)
- Covers many business institutions and markets: School's, Universities, Banks, Governments (Korea, China & US), Electric cars, AI, Phones, Smart Homes, TVs... etc
- Family and school friends are still referred to every now and then (not forgotten or killed off like in many novels)
- Romance (though sparse and not tied up at the final chapter)
- Little xenophobia (doesn't ostracise Japan even though the Koreans are known to hate the country)

Cons:
- MCs personality at the start of the novel was very rude and untrusting at the beginning which was quite unreasonable imo
- Open ended (seriously didn't need to be concluded right after he got his revenge)
- Unrealistic always positive stock trading results + his impeccable memory
- Character neglectment of certain characters; Amelia (that IT genius) even though she was stated as a godly worker we never heard about what she did after the talk of the blockchain technology and there was no further interaction between MC and her mentioned in the following business years.
- Time skips View More
God of Money
2 months ago

shelwyn: I have completed the novel, read from it's start, through the translation process, until the final chapter posted on Friday, April 19, 2019 USA time. These are my thoughts on the ending.


The author should have written a few more chapters. Sure he got his revenge in the end but the last few chapters should have shown him as the richest most powerful person in the world and how he acts without revenge driving him forward. It should have shown us how he grew as a person, the last final bit of character development that satisfied the readers.. To show the MC grew past his death and became an incredible man in the end.

...but it didn't...

Just ending it where it ended is kind of lack luster, kind of disappointing. Oh well the trip here was nice even if the last mile or so was kind of lame.

The story was good, how some down on his luck developer and his good moral code died and revived in the past and how he got his revenge on the company that killed him. He became the richest most powerful man in the world. Ended government and business corruption in Korea and saves countless lives from natural disasters.

The story getting to the end was good even if the final few chapters were a bit lack luster.

I give it 4 out of 5 stars. The only thing weighing it down is lack of character design.

God of Money
2 months ago
Author you can't finish it like that, atleast give us a side story or one chapter detailing what happened in the future like with Witcher 3's ending. View More
God of Money · C203
2 months ago

Supreme_Leader: Many might feel that ending is bad.
I quite like it

Although the romance between the MC and the girls didn't get any closure
I like it that way
he has many love interests
Like Shim Shimei
Julie white
The Programmer girl

And I don't know if he will choose one, and I didn't want this to turn into a harem novel.

I really like novels that have politics and business, management and knowing the future. And takes place in normal modern day earth
And there not many like this

There is only
Extraordinary genius,
12 hours after,
Game market 1983,
I'm in Hollywood
God of cooking.
And
few others. But most of them have veey few translated chapters or maybe irregular translation.

Although IRAS could be counted among them but the novel got ****tier and becomes more xenophobic as the story progresses

Very Pure And Ambiguous too was good at first but the later harem ruined it. And the MC is a little xenophobic too although not as much as Zhang Ye (IRAS)

One of the best korean novels on munpia
The Youngest Son of Sunyang
Is of the same genre but only 20 chapters are translated.

There is a shortage of such novels,
So I am sad that it ended but


He became the richest man in the world and even had his revenge what more can he do. It's important to end it now than to drag it out. Although I would have loved one more chapter describing what he did the next few years, without much detail.

God of Money · C203
2 months ago

shelwyn: The author should have written a few more chapters. Sure he got his revenge in the end but the last few chapters showing him become the richest most powerful person in the world should have been how it really ends. To show the MC grew past his death and became an incredible man in the end.

Just ending it here is lack luster, kind of disappointing. Oh well the trip here was nice even if the last mile or so was kind of lame.

God of Money · C203
2 months ago

SmilingReader: It seems like the ending was rushed. I guess with him getting his revenge the drive of the story would end but still I actually wanted him to take over the corporate world 😄

God of Money · C203
2 months ago

Panzerfausst: Aww he didnt get to be with Shin Semi???

God of Money · C203
2 months ago

Shamial: And it's all over. Ending feels kind of lackluster as so much more could of happened, like seeing him actually pretty much take over the world with money and showing how powerful he got like having the world leaders numbers waiting for him, or like something with romance.

However I feel it makes sense to complete it here as well as he's completed his goal, he destroyed those who destroyed him and his possibilities are endless from this point onwards. A open ending is pretty good in some cases.

It's enjoyable for what it is, just a fun revenge story where you can just blow off some steam and enjoy it

But just yeah, I really enjoyed the novel, not many novels like this IRAS and the likes compared to the martial arts or cultivation novels. Overall 7.5/10.

God of Money · C203
2 months ago
So Nam uploaded the program Woosung made... this is bad neww for the company, no? View More
God of Money · C38
4 months ago
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God of Money · C38
4 months ago

mmendescortes: She look at him like the strange dude looks at her, an asset! The key difference is that she is looking at his wallet and the other guy is looking at her body...

God of Money · C33
4 months ago

Man: Yep. It makes sense to CS students too. I think I can put this webnovel on my resume as another internship.

God of Money · C28
4 months ago

Neveryoumindme: This story is a massive disappointment, i'm not sure if i was spoiled by other translators who selected better stories or what, but i expected a lot more from a korean novel. In my experience they are usually better written then chinese ones and shorter, being shorter is usually what helps them because the author doesn't repeat the same plot points every arch to pad the word count.

The story start is pretty weird, we are introduced to the main character and a villain whose action are baffling. The mc "luckily" manages to return to the past, he's now got a FULL YEAR before the game starts and he pisses it off.
From what it's described he does nothing other then finding a very important location in the first few days, only to leave it and do nothing for the rest of the year. He doesn't try to maybe, i dunno, find and kill the guy who he hated so much before, try to connect with figures who are going to become deities or possibly very strong allies in the future.
He could have reincarnated within a few days of the start of the game and the story would still be the same while leaving the readers with less doubts about the author and protagonist intelligence.

Now we get to the juicy part, he gets to the location he scouted a year before and becomes the first to transition to the new deva mode.
He gets a pretty sweet +200 stats bonus for every aspect of his character and proceeds to tell the reader that such a huge bonus, even higher then what he expected, would definitely propel him to the ranks of the top devas.
It actually makes sense since reaching such stats would apparently take a year or two. That would have been a good point where the author should have stopped the *beep* plot armor and sent the mc into the wild, but nope.
The protagonist has not enough of a leeway so we get another stupid scene where he "totally randomly" gets a whooping +1000 stats in each attribute. That results in the mc having now better stats then what he achieved in 7~11 years before the reset while still being a level 0.

He's now ready for adventure, the revenge is probably forgotten for now but i'm pretty sure we'll meet the antagonist later in the story where he proceeds to trounce the mc anyway or gets blasted for sins he has not yet or may not ever commit. Anyway the protagonist finds a low level dungeon he goes in and is immediately confused, apparently in 12 years of surviving in the "hellish" world he never learnt how to fight or think since he fights like a toddler who just learnt he has arms. I should stress that the basic stats for a normal lvl 0 deva is 20 across the board, our mc has 1200 in each, by all rights he should be having trouble just moving without having spent some considerable time adapting to such absurd stats. He should be having fun and being mildly frustrated trying to take a few steps without accidentally breaking the sound barrier.
The power level is so high he should atomize anything that he touches, especially low level mobs that have their name preceded by the word "weak". He kills them easily enough but apparently the stats are meaningless since he only manages to crack some skulls and he's considerably astounded by the fact.

One last thing that really baffles me is the protagonist choice of future development, apparently being adaptable is stupid? He's got stats that could lead him down pretty interesting development paths but he's going to throw such an advantage away and just focus on being a melee class. Really? The argument for why he should go down that road it's pretty flimsy too.

Anyway avoid like the plague unless your favorite decent korean author pissed you off. If that's the case, read this and you'll understand that the tiny mistake that upset you is not that big a deal when compared to this burning pile of trash.

The world turned into a game after I woke up
4 months ago

Jcvv51: ty

The world turned into a game after I woke up
4 months ago

Nameno: I hate idiotic MC. Thanks, will avoid.

The world turned into a game after I woke up
4 months ago

Kuromonge: Don't worry, I'm not reading, ty.

The world turned into a game after I woke up
4 months ago

Neveryoumindme: I endured such a sacrifice so that pure minds like yours wouldn't have to face it... i'm weeping in sadness, my efforts were in vain... i couldn't save you...

The world turned into a game after I woke up
4 months ago

zaiziua: TOO LATE!!!!!!! I've READ IT(my rational brain is crying)

The world turned into a game after I woke up
4 months ago
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The Legendary Mechanic · C266
4 months ago
So the dwarves speak like the Irish, eh? Interesting... View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C5
4 months ago

visily: Lots of stretching

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C5
4 months ago

Sage_HiddenBear: Agreed. Usually 1 or 2 passives and an active per race.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C5
4 months ago

TomRiffle101: I know this is much too late, but for anyone writing novels with races, a races main skill should always be passive. Giants should naturally have a much greater strength. My opinion, but backed by novels read.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C5
4 months ago
I've noticed a few grammatical errors here and there. I also feel a bit more background/scenary description could serve this chapter more justice since its pretty stale imo.

Besides the massive info dumbs it's ayt I guess. View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C1
4 months ago
On that note, allow me to recommend a website that has a library filled with good hentai novels:
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secret_life101: Well if the author dropped the novel then they wouldn't have noticed your constructive criticism

· C4
5 months ago
Mate often times you need to remember to reread a reply, to your reply, twice... I already stated that I wrote the comment when the chapter count was lower - the author would've noticed it him/herself.

Nonetheless the novel was dropped and my criticisms were only partially addressed when he/she requested for a voluntary editor that none of the readers stepped up to take the role of.

Once again let me address that you take it from a senior member, critics place valid points and can only ever be nicely honest or brutally honest (like myself). Whereas other naive and fickle minded readers (like yourself) seem to wash over these faults like they're nothing as you have no standards (which is gained from extensive experience) to apply while reading a novel. View More

secret_life101: Well if the author dropped the novel then they wouldn't have noticed your constructive criticism

· C4
5 months ago
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The Legendary Mechanic · C266
5 months ago
The fact that my subtle comment managed to tick you off surprises me the most.

This novel is badly worded (alike to machine translations) and for a novel it's vital for the readers imagination to be evoked (especially for a ero like this one) thus this was a critical point of concern. Therefore I thought I'd leave my thoughts here to express potential further concerns (such as this problem recurring in the latter chapters) that could lead to this novel turning out badly (i personally rate it a 3/5).

Unless you also haven't noticed; the author dropped the novel. Back then another reason I was critical of this novel was because the chapter count was low and I didn't wish to waste time unnecessarily.

Nonetheless I don't expect us to see eye to eye therefore I shall point out that your inexperience in reading novels shows well in this situation. So take it from a senior in the scene, there'll always be critics and when I wrote this, it was fully with the intention of it acting as constructive criticism. View More

secret_life101: Dude/ Dudette idc who the **** you are but you up in here trying to act like some kinda grammar police like if it bothers you so much quit complaining and get lost 🙄

· C4
5 months ago

MortalPug: "how am I alive?"

BECAUSE THE AUTHOR COMMANDS IT!!!

The Legendary Mechanic · C188
6 months ago
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