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A surprsing good read , well writen I read all the 19 pages in one go , the only dowside is the updates , let's hope the author doesn't give up witing this fiction

So far this novel has me hooked ! I see a lot of potential in this fiction. However there aren't enough chapters to make a more detailed review . Will update once more chapter are out

wow this nivellement i's great thé MC doesn't have any super power (at least not yet) but makes use of logiciel thinking to confront thé challenges I really Hope this novel Gers picked

Intesting Caracter caustious , not too Op but has good potential. This might be another fantasy novel but this fiction has his own style . Hope to read more of it

well as there is only 40 chapterd out , it is hard to give à accurate review. But son far I love the Mc. Driven yet human smart but not overbaring ,talented yet not op. Yes this fiction describes à HUMAN aventures to the unknown . The human relationship are realand it makes it real enjoyable to read No brain dead canon folder to make our Mc look good only histoire skill and his knowledge on his way to the extrodenary

Vote for this novel to be picked , it's a real find . Can't wait for the next chapter. Please help this book to be selecting by voting . Although th concept is not new , MC transmited in a sc fi world and he has a cheat that allow his to absorb orbs of knowledge , it is well writen and our MC is very likealable , calm ,smart and deceiceve . The grammar and le world backgroung are also well develloped . Which makes this a story a must read !

Great story , honestly this is a great find. The MC is down to earth and smart . I also enjoy his progres and achivements which are rich and exctining but not heaven defiying. It only makes the story more realistic , most fictions with systems devolop so fast and in all directions that brings the story directly into fantasy -:- . This story istruly enjoyable to read , and I really hope it get selected

This novel has great potential . Here is a list of the good parts: We can see our MC growth in caracter as well as in skill. Another nice part is tha our MC is not OP he slowly but gradualy get stronger, making the story more realist. Also a selling part of this fiction is the stable updates which make me recommend this fiction too all lovers of competive sports fictions. The points to improve is the quality of writing , it's not bad but could be better , the author is probrely a bigginner , but hey everyone needs to start somewhere. I recommend this novel because I believe is worth your while .