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There are currently two novels that I am reading which feature a cultivation system. And both are very unique in their writing and style, hope you'll like them😎 Top tier providence: Secretly cultivate for a thousand years 10000 years in a cultivation sect : i obtained a powerful technique from the start (this only has 40 chapters, but it is already picked to be released soon, so it has continuation)

For the past 3 months I did not find even one good novel in the trial reads. But this one is a gem, I sincerely wish that this one gets picked. it has action, adventure, great world building, suspenseful story and everything else that makes a great novel. In fact it is quite unique in it's storytelling compared to other similar Chinese novels. In conclusion; a fantastic read, definitely recommend it!!!

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it kind of has traces of being a harem novel...

there are some clues to romance, there wasn't anything about harem yet, but it is still too early to say.

It started off real nice, but as time went on it became more and more frustrating to continue reading. How can a person be so submissive and have such idiotic way of thinking?! I understand the premise of him being dependent on his master for both protection and system points, but the way let's both his master and all the others treat him makes me want to puke. Even his own disciple treats him like shit!!! Overall it started off nice(the first 20 chapters), the it went downhill real fast!!! definitely don't recommend it!

in 2 weeks it will be released officially. Right not it's only a trial read.

Hello Mr. voltaire, I curious to know whether you are looking for an editor. I saw all lot of akward sentences in the first chapters and so I wanted to know if there is any vacancy for an editor?

it's the same author, he just changed his account name.

Even better than Pocket Hunting Dimension!!! A thousand times better!!! The author has really outdone himself this time. He really did a wonderful job in balancing out the MC's character. This novel is unlike his previous novel where the Main character's actions felt as if they were forced and his pushy character that always acted submissive when talking to his sister or any other female character. The MC's character in this novel is clearly defined, he acts logically, emotionally, with a hint of humour and still retains his whole character. The world-building is also marvelously done. I have not noticed any plot holes as of yet, and I hope there won't be any in the future. As of now I truly hope that this novel gets picked, it truly deserves at least that!!!!

This is truly a masterpiece. The worldbuilding is absolutely great. The main character is unlike the other cliche characters, who are always indecisive and need some kind of tragic event to start cultivating. He does what he wishes to while still maintaining his moral values The story has a very steady development. Neither too slow nor too fast. While the writing quality needs a bit of work, I truly think this is a story worth one's time to read.

thanks man!