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2017-04-23 Joined Brazil

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Dear Author, please pay atention to the length of the phrases. Your story is truly well written, with good grammar. However, the lack of punctuation nearly kills the mood to keep reading. This would be an example of how this paragraph could be better written: [As long as there is want and desire, there will always be conflict. Its a part of being human. Sometimes conflict could lead to growth, but it can just as easily lead to destruction, if you don't learn from your mistakes.]
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