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Trojianmaru: To be fair to those saying just use the stone on himself. I think it's a case of short term vs long term. The stone might get him 50 points, but it let's him boost easier beasts to higher levels for later consumption. If he manages to find a mutant beast and catch it, that's a free sacred beast. N if one day, he caught a sacred beast? Who knows.
It's not like the stone gives continuous points, it just bumps them up to the next level.Super Gene · C11
g00df0rn0thing: People like han sen's father are not worth living.They are better off dead.Super Gene · C4
LazyDeath: Thw author of this story doesnt understand the power of numbers.... so what if mcs party kill one or 2 in few seconds.... if the enemies damages is 40 to 50 per hit then he should multiply it by 20s to 50s... thats instannt death... so what if their noobs? Raw power doesnt change wih numericals... this is fucking stupid..Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C110
Daoist_KenBoCole: Im actually starting to like the management and forging parts better than the fighting.
Cant tell if thars good or bad.Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C82
Pokki: Man, the speed at which items lose their value is... Weird to say the least. A few hours ago he sold bronze stuff for 24 silver. And now it's mysterious iron stuff for nearly the same price and bronze stuff is 3 silver. It would make me quite angry I must say. Especially seeing the drop rate described as one in ten thousand.Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God · C42
Archena: Are you stupid? Your English is clearly worse than mine and you don't even know that I had to use some leeway to avoid getting censored. If you don't understand what midnight exercise means then ask your mother what she used to do with me in the middle of the night and how you were born. If you suked your mama's ti.tties instead of author's dik when you were a baby then you would have a developed brain and understand logic. Author's semen can not replace your mother's milk.Last Wish System · C33
Detaboo: So he says he doesn't have time for that time for this then he starts doing extra useless work for money? Why does money always somehow spol Mcs character..Advent of the Archmage · C85
Easlys: 4000 gold from the Dark Brotherhood is less than the 3500 from the syndicate...Advent of the Archmage · C82
Archena: Stupid fukturd, If I know thousand of languages, and only talk with you in english, will you know the name thousand other langugae just from my english? If you practice fire magic, everyone would know he is a time mage, lol. And he knows this bit.ch for how many days? He trusted her enough to reveal his talent to her, but cant do that to teachers? Mc is stupid just like you are. Take your mom and go suk authors dik together with your mom. Coz you can't understand Me, your Dad. So I won't be responsible for teach a disrespectful son about logic.Last Wish System · C33
TrueGodOfExp: Oh, look. Another dual practitioner whose rank 4. It's almost like dual practitioners are common...Last Wish System · C113
OpinionatedPotato: I had suspicions when he first got teleported out of the secret realm and I'm sad to say that they were spot on. Now Yale is just roleplaying as a CEO and learning to craft like crafting is meaningful and important. I really never understood why all rpg and cultivation systems in novels want to use crafting as a side-plot. It's such a waste of time to write and it's even more boring to read. He's already buying trash "metals" from the roadside vendors, next, there's gonna be an "expedition" into a "dungeon, cave, secret realm or mountain system" for new materials. It's so bland and pointless and predictable like we haven't seen the same thing at least 40 times already. And don't even get me started about that company bull****. Using a pet as a marketing pitch? Retarded. Yale is going to leave eventually and bring Wyba with him, then what will happen to the company? Using Wyba as a marketing pitch shows the Author has absolutely no idea what he's doing. A three-year-old can see that Wyba is going to leave with Yale eventually, but the author still uses Wyba as marketing for the company, what does this tell us? It tells us that one of two things is going to happen. Either this stupid bs crafting arc is going to last for god knows how long (till leaving with wyba doesn't affect the company at all) or the town/city/country will come under attack and be destroyed making the fact that Wyba leaves with yale unimportant. I'm so disappointed in this novel. When it started I was hoping to see maybe at least a little new ground being made in the genre, especially since it's so good for an original. But it seems that even new writers can't escape trash tropes.Last Wish System · C94
Symbiote: who's a gold digger? if she was a gold digger she'll go right in the lap of the old man who she'll be marrying when she comes of age. u triggered me.Last Wish System · C43
Archena: I hate Aizu. She is a selfish bit.ch. And why hero would need a low level trash to practice magic? Yes, she is a trashy slu.t. Will only hold back our hero. Test your talent, many teachers will jump to your lap to be your private tutor. And, early morning practice? Why not go for mid night excercise????Last Wish System · C33
Ash009: all for a low level epic item that will soon be outgrown. kinda s2pid.
unlike emperor of solo play wherein certain quest needed to be finished in order to progress the story, unlike king's avatar where they don't give a crap on low level items but the crafting materials. on this novel, we don't see it here.
kinda disappointing that we don't see any behavior of a ******** gamer. where are the farmer clubs or group?Realm of Myths and Legends · C105
Pagemonger: Some comments really are blinded by how the MC was a thousand year old cultivator from a different realm. Forgetting that he reincarnated to a weak body in earth which had low spiritual essence, and he is inside a damn game where only some of his cultivation techniques manifest at their beggining stages.
Reading with comprehension is the key of understanding the story and be immersed by it. Not just speed reading through the story forgetting essential factors that contributes to the growth of the MC.
The story is great so far and I will never get bored with such speed.Realm of Myths and Legends · C20
fillerkiller: I wonder how many more times he's going to nearly be murdered before he finally realizes that when he has a chance to level up he should take it. Or maybe he'll continue to make the dumber choice for the rest of the story?Monster Paradise · C74
Rozuka: To be quite honest the story does have a ton of potential. The concept, albeit not entirely original, does well in maintaining a unique feel for its niche. The world clearly has had some thought put into it and makes it feel as though it will expand even more. Some concepts seem odd but as you go they make more sense and are actually rather diverse and interesting as well. The story actually feels like a real weak-to-strong story without mega plot armor, I.e divine intervention or some BS.
Now with the good parts out of the way though...the bad really comes into play, hence my stoppage. Firstly, the characters start to feel rather flat. Well not so much start to as much as never really get going. Aside from a few moments where they show some personality, for the most part they feel robotic. Alongside that, there is even a. Lack of real physical descriptions for repeat appearances or important characters. Most of the time they are described with very generic terms of “handsome/beautiful” and the color of their hair or their height/weight just thrown on top. That could be overlooked as the story otherwise is interesting right? Well the bigger issue is that, even when the story seems interesting, the grammar and editing are non-existent. There are so many errors, typos and missing words that you spend a chunk of time just re-reading a sentence to decipher what’s going on, ruining the flow of events. It does state that an editor was picked up at chapter 35 and for about 4-5 chapters the quality massively improves...but that’s just it. It’s only for a few chapters and then it gets worse than ever. This was what really stopped me from continuing as it began to be a chore to keep up with and, with the inevitable premium wall, not worth my investment to do more work than reading. If edited properly and earlier chapters rewritten o would definitely go back in but sadly, at this time, it doesn’t feel warranted.
On a final note, I can’t speak on the update schedule, as I started late and stopped at chapter 62, but it seems most people are okay with it.Monster Integration
020_FM: First of all, I really like the setup of the Story. I think its brilliantly done. One of the best of all original Novels I've read.
SPOILERS starting here.
My short summary of the main points:
The MC grows up in a world where people are able to bond with monsters upon graduation from school to increase their own powers. Even though he was offered a monster with high potential due to his academic achievements, he chose one raised by his own family with less potential and weaker ability's as he did not want to join an Organisation. He starts to cultivate the "supreme combat exercise", strengthening his own body to overcome the lacking potential of his bonded monster while enduring the pain that comes together with using this technique. His monster gets stronger as he levels up the "supreme combat exercise" as they share a symbiotic relationship.
He travels to the most dangerous city of the continent after graduation to quicken up his cultivation to achieve his goal, which is to participate in a tournament five years later. From that point on until the most recent chapters he starts to regularly hunt monsters to increase his strength and accumulate wealth, with some twists happening while hunting those monsters. The bonded monster of the MC, while weak, turns out to possess the ability to identify natural treasures while adventuring, giving hope that those treasures can be used to power them up.
There are a few points stopping me from enjoying the novel fully.
The grammar is really bad. Even though there is a proofreader starting from chapter 36 (not sure which chapter it was exactly), the quality of the story does not go up substantially. The storyline is nicely thought through but the character growth in terms of power is lacking. When it seems that MC grew substantially, all the other characters that he is currently interacting with seem to have grown even more, resulting in a seemingly weak MC that is depending on the protection of the other characters.
The novel has gone premium yesterday which I can completely understand because it is a great story and good performance should be rewarded. But the quality of writing needs to go up steeply to justify fee-based chapters.
For those that read up until here: All in all a great story with potential but held back by the bad grammar, nonetheless worth reading.Monster Integration
EveningSong: Dropped at 143 as it is not worth the stones.
Tl:dr "meh" at the best of times, needs a full re-write to be worth the stones.
This is not, by any means, a premium novel. Nor is it complete garbage. It has potential, a novel concept, and some solid ideas. However, that potential has yet to be expressed up until chapter 143.
The characters have all the emotional depth of a cardboard cutout. The battles are not satisfying. The dialogue is sub-par.
For a first time author's embryonic novel, this isnt half bad. To be something worth paying for however, it needs a solid block of editing, a complete re-write, and some time for the author to grow more accustomed to the English language (my understanding is the author isnt a native speaker, kudos to you friend for the attempt but you have a few miles left to go before you sleep).Monster Integration
TheCrow: Ty for the review. I can assure a better reading experience in later chapters. Ty for reading.Once Human, Now a Parasite
Once Human, Now a Parasite
Once Human, Now a Parasite
uRb4IN_: Having read over 300 chapters i can give a proper review. The story is ****. Review over. It doesn't matter if you read the first 5 chapters or the next 100 chapters. The whole story is based on a dude that always attracts people who have an instant killing intent towards him. All of those people are somehow called geniuses but dont even present the slightest amount of logical or reasonable thinking. The plot of getting provoced over and over and over again in a never ending circle is just to depressive and unbearable. Second, the ranking and leveling speed of all people within the novel get pretty quickly out of hand. Like sidecharacters can easily compete with MC eventho he has most op leveling machine. Or people being on the bottleneck of the next realm for so long but then in the next chapter breaking throu 4 realms in a swift loop, just so illogical. To make it a short, the last illogical thing is the chaotic and unreadable design not only the story but every chapter itself. Like honestly the author must have been on acid. Its a shame to copy and paste the last word, sentence or paragraph as the title but thats just the tip of the iceberg. You will pretty quickly find out that 50% of the entire words are represented by the word amazing, formidable or other synonyms. 30% insults like the sentence you are courting death and fighting shouts, 19.99% explaining the realm of each opponent and the battletechnic and qi they are using and lastly .01% going on in the story is.
All in all it's more entertaining watching bible.tv 24/7 then reading this book for even 5 chaptersMartial God Space
Rozuka: I’m not sure where to really start here. I guess the first thing to say is that all in all the novel is just slightly above average. In almost every regard it just feels like it’s just a tiny bit better than your standard generic clone.
The translation, though appreciated, feels very unrefined. I’m not sure whether the blame here should be on the translator or editors though. There are so many phrases and words in general that get repeated over and over and over and...you get it? Hence I feel that part of it falls on editors. I know typically eastern languages have a larger variety of words for very specific terms, items and tasks. The translator may not have the extensive English vocabulary to match but editors can go through and do that at least a little bit. There’s also the issue of the disgusting overuse of “the” prior to terms in the novel. His blade tore through “the space,” it was as if “the god” had descended. Unnecessary uses like those just make sentences feel so disjointed and uncomfortable to read.
As far as other aspects: the updates are consistent which is nice and the world actually has some very interesting aspects and pieces. Sadly the broken grammar and storyline really let down whatever good points the world building has going for it. Most of the interesting areas devolve, very quickly, into unexplored backdrops as the novel only focuses on the fight scenes, which aren’t bad but the pacing ruins them.
What I mean is the story is so over saturated with nonstop fights they all start to blend together. It’s already typical in the genre for several fights to feel the same but after the first hundred or so chapters, which were actually pretty good, they literally ALL feel the same. Our MC gets maybe two chapters between these constant waves of zombie-like antagonists throwing themselves at him. No expansion on the world, other characters or even slight deviations into side daos, which many better novels use as relief and plot development. One of the best parts in the novel so far was when he briefly followed the dao of alchemy in Yi Yuan school. It showed him using one of his tools and actually interacting with non-brain dead characters. He developed his base using some formations and was shown to possess more than just brute strength and a snobby attitude. Sadly it only lasted for about 4-5 chapters but it was enough relief to make the next fight feel eventful and not just forced.
All in all the novel is around a mid 3 for me. It started off with stronger potential but has slowly fallen to the way side because the author just lacks in diversity. I still have 200 or so until I’m caught up and there are some glimmering signs of hope now that he is interacting with Hua Menghan and his fellow Star Peak disciples a bit. With more characters there is more room for at least interactions outside of the same trite “Ye Wixen used a sword intention that split the space and his golden godly appearance wowed the crowd.”Martial God Space
Martial God Space
Reborn: Evolving From Nothing
Kebean: So for anybody who is wondering, TMW has signed with QI and has withdrawn from WW. So this is indeed the same novel, True Martial World.
On another note, this is one of my favorite LN and you should give it a shot. 1000+ translated chapters so far :DTrue Martial World
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