Webnovel Author: Skaviouz - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Skaviouz

23h

Commented

is this the wrong fanfic? I am confused why it's one piece now? Or did I remember the last chapter wrongly?

ch 29 Chapter 29

Naruto: Double Sasuke Is Way Too Overpowered!

Anime & Comics · FFAddict

Skaviouz

1d

Commented

uhm, Kitamari / Marin_Kitawaga, they have 10 stories listed on their patreon... Considering your accusation, does this mean the other 9 stories are also stolen from others too?

The fic's name is HP: The Magical Gamer by Kitamari.

The Overpowered Gamer (Harry Potter)

Video Games · Percypendragon3

Skaviouz

1d

Commented

I read the dozen main comments so far, to summarize what people say: reaction speed. People keep mentioning foundation, like how Naruto's best with Rasengan. It's because he spends so much time practicing with it as it's his primary combat method, especially with shadow clones. I also want to mention that the it's cannon that his seal is enhanced, it literally is three lines instead of a single long line. So the creation process is probably easier, so he can make many FTG tools/kunai. So I suspect that it's a difference in the seal that slows Tobirama down, and not because his lesser sensing ability? I think Tobirama's FTG uses his own body/talent as a crutch while minato used his knowledge to make FTG easier to use and ended up with a supperior FTG?

I want to hear your thoughts on it to avoid any possible plot hole.

Skaviouz

3d

Commented

Beach means easy fish resource while mountain means easy fresh water resource... How about a mountain that's next to a beach? You already mentioned crabs and natural hot springs... I think you should do both!

Beach or mountain?

Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

Anime & Comics · akikan40

Skaviouz

4d

Commented

Physique, while others say it means physical, even if I don't speak spanish, phenetically and sounding it out, it does sound like physical, but that's too similar to taijutsu? So I am going to assume this means physique or indirectly the chakra quality?

[Físico]

Skaviouz

5d

Replied to Tyler_Henline_7485

I didn't want to say horse-shoes when I already wrote down rabbit feet, so I picked the next best thing. But I was curious, as I didn't know why it was lucky either. So, I looked it up, both Celtic traditions and Norse mythology have associate acorns with good luck. Such as protecting homes from thunder, it's fertility and abundance, and I think it's more sacred than lucky, but the wisdom of an old oak tree, indirectly, I feel sacredness brings luck.

"Damn, did his mother sprinkle sugar on him at birth? What kind of dog luck is this?"

DxD Multiverse: My Dating Sim System

Anime & Comics · Tozoku

that will result in other people who are greedy for his powers would start coming to the island and causing trouble, once the reports that Itogami Island is a constant attack, Japan or Asia will have no choice but to let Itogami Island from their control and declare Itogami island as a country, and when that happens I will reveal to the world that I am the 4th progenitor and will declare that itogami island will be my domain' Alex smiled at his plan.

STB: Runes and Vampires

Anime & Comics · Mozuto

Skaviouz

6d

Commented

the glyph for a and o look very similar

We can see Alex who is currently making a new storage ring, but this time is different, instead of a rune there are 2 groups of runes on the fist size metal sphere, the first one is ᛋᛈᚪᚳᛖ which can be translated to (space) the second is ᛋᛏᚩᚱᚪᚷᛖ which is also translated to (storage) Alex manage to improve his runes by translating a single rune into a letter and make them form words.

STB: Runes and Vampires

Anime & Comics · Mozuto

Skaviouz

6d

Commented

so rather than what he needed unknowingly, it only gives what he specifically desired?

Also, some of you may have noticed that the things the Sacred Gear is giving MC are a bit too specific and convenient. And no, that is not purely because of plot armour, it is intentional.

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Skaviouz

7d

Commented

German for "I love you" according to Google Translate.

"ich liebe dich, sirin."

in the chat group, swap bodies with Alicia at the beginning?

Video Games · FurinaDeFontaine

Skaviouz

7d

Commented

Silver hair... Maybe you can say that your father or mother was one of his lab rats, he wanted to reincarnate himself, but the fuinjutsu and jutsushiki (cursed technique) partially failed, and you instead are slowly inheriting his chakra, it's nature, and some knowledge? If you explain anything, that's the most sound, and that's if you explain anything... I mean, he invented bringing back the dead, why wouldn't he experimented to bring himself back? Maybe even suggest Tobirama even suspected Madara Uchiha to have done the same with Izanagi using his Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan, so he experimented the same? The only problem would be if someone reawakens Tobirama from the pure land and calls him out XD. Response: Tobirama then removed his memories, so that if that failed, he wouldn't reveal this even after the grave. Okay, maybe I am just having fun thinking of ideas.

On top of that if he were to reveal Fuinjutsu, Spirit Transformation Technique and a bunch of jutsu only once used by Tobirama, anyone would be able to see that he has a problem.

Konoha: The Template System

Anime & Comics · Tobi_444

Skaviouz

10d

Commented

How much is taken lul? Even 1% of nine-tails would be lots and lots of power... That's like equivalent to 11% of one-tails' power?

As they shook hands, Yoichi thought, "Opportunity for a daily theft, activate!"

Naruto: An Uchiha With A Superpower Roulette

Anime & Comics · Zaelum

Skaviouz

11d

Posted

I have some concerns. This work was written from 2008 to 2012. Your username, Perfect_Lionheart, does match the fanfic's author from ff-net but on this platform you only joined a month ago (2024-03-14). You are advertising your payeon/tojishin. But you don't mention this payeon on your ff-net profile. Next concern: You are purposely making it difficult for others to read for free. WN Ch 4 (Lightning part 1) corresponds to the end of ff-net Ch 1 while WN Ch 5 (part 2) is the start of ff-net Ch 2. Honestly, I think you should keep the original chapter structure. What you could do: If you can edit your profile on ff-net to mention the tojishin payeon or this platform's legitamency, then my concerns would be solved. Regardless of anything else though, Thanks for posting a great fanfiction and bringing attention to a great work that is good to read!

Harry Potter: Hero's adventure

Book&Literature · Perfect_Lionheart

Skaviouz

11d

Commented

I like his spunk, makes me smile. And I can totally imagine Dumbles double crossing and going back on his promise XD

His expression collapsed further when Harry stood, and saying, "Oh, and I was the one to recover this, not you," took the sword of Gryffindor, and left the office.

Harry Potter: Hero's adventure

Book&Literature · Perfect_Lionheart

Skaviouz

11d

Commented

No sugar, just a normal satanic ritual with four-leaf clovers, acorns, rabbit feet, and a turkey wishbone.

"Damn, did his mother sprinkle sugar on him at birth? What kind of dog luck is this?"

DxD Multiverse: My Dating Sim System

Anime & Comics · Tozoku

Skaviouz

11d

Commented

I was confused what bidet sprayer was, from the toilet, an extra hose that can be used to shoot water where one pleases.

It reminded him of something he watched in his past life: a comedian talking about his experience of throwing a piece of chocolate candy into the air and swallowing it, but the chocolate candy got stuck in his throat. In desperation, he went to the bathroom and used the bidet sprayer to try to melt the chocolate candy and save himself...

DxD Multiverse: My Dating Sim System

Anime & Comics · Tozoku

Skaviouz

12d

Commented

Smell you later, aligator?

"It was something like... 'Strive! Fight! Ollie gator!!'"

Konoha: Sealing Jutsu Sensei of Ninja Academy

Anime & Comics · ReidAstrea

Skaviouz

12d

Commented

Oh, you sweet summer child...

When Asuma read in the book that his grandfather said to the First Hokage before going to battle, "I shall take care of your wife; do not worry!" tears welled up in his eyes, moved by the sincere friendship between the two.