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ch 127 Chapter 127: Whitebeard and Mikoto, Naruto's Confusion

Naruto, Be My Son

Naruto, Be My Son

Anime & Comics · Ginormous_Madman

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A good story overall, at the very least the first 100 chapters seem to be. The various arcs don't seem to be dragged out for word count, and the story sidesteps the major cliches and manufactured face slapping scenes found in these types of stories. While the MC doesn't just spill the beans on all his abilities, he also avoids the cliche of tying to 'seem musterious' or 'hide his true power from others'. The others in question aren't a bunch of idiots either, and can easily figure things out from the clues provided (like the grade and size of his Blessed Land based on the number of treasures he can use, the special products it can produce, and the number of people it can shelter. They figure out the correct number right away from context, rather than wondering randomly or greatly underestimating the MC despite having recorded facts on what grade a blessed land needs to be to accomplish a certain feat). Overall it's a good story with themes similar to many others but without many of the cliches one would get sick of after a point.My one dislike of the story, is the overuse of a certain phrase. Everytime the story cuts away to side characters discussing something relating to the MC, the story cuts back with "Of course, MC doesn't know what these people are discussing" or something along that vein. Once or twice it's fine, but it gets super annoying to read it every damn timr. Like obviously the MC doesnt know what is being discussed in a conversation he is nowhere near, there's no need to keep pointing it out.
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Oh ya, I'm sure an immortal, multiversal being has so much in common with a medieval maiden. Totally fell deeply in love in that 1 year -.-With the sheer gap in life experience and general knowledge, it'd be like your average joe if the street falling in love with a rock.

"I met your mother in that last year of my life, with my death not far off and I fell in love. You may not be able to understand the significance of that right now, but you will once you reach my age. Finding love like that at the end of my life was the most beautiful and tragic thing I have ever experienced."

The Phoenix - A GOT Fan-Fiction

The Phoenix - A GOT Fan-Fiction

TV · GodOfFreedom

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He personally ordered the perpetrator Uzumaki Kushina to be imprisoned in Konoha's prison. No one, including him, is allowed to visit!

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

Fantasy · XslopX

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Konoha squad, Baiyunye Mountain, Shancheng Qingye, Moonlight Storm, Uzue Xiyan.

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

Fantasy · XslopX

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The fourth is a shameless bald man in a yellow tights.

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

I’M IN NARUTO, SIGN IN ŌTSUTSUKI AT THE BEGINNING

Fantasy · XslopX

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