Khaz_

1d

Commented

This makes much more sense than MC, just remembering random tidbits from the novel on how to acquire every skill.

Next, Enhanced Acquisition makes it easier for me actually to gain any given skill, art, or magic. It synergized perfectly with the next subskill of Prodigy, Skill Tree. While Skill Tree has 'skill' in the name it actually applies to arts, magic, and skills as well. It functions like a crafting recipe/tree on how to get any given ability. All I need to do is think about a skill like Great Sage, and I can see how to acquire it. I see what Common and Extra skills I can combine to make it. I can also see what specifically I need to practice to unlock any art or magic too.

A Tensura Elf in Danmachi

Anime & Comics · SleepySailor

Khaz_

14d

Commented

The story is called "Dragon's Ascent" so unless you add Devil in front of it, it would be misleading. A lot of authors make their mc join the Rias because that's the easiest way for their mc to join the waiting game with Raiser. I hope you will not fall for the same trap and keep your mc free. If you grab Boosted Gear, Rias' rating game with Raiser won't happen for a few years, so you can take your time with this plot point.

ch 12 Chapter 12: Peerage x Proposition

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Khaz_

1mth

Replied to 707SteelWaste

You do remember that mc is a sociopath, right? Every time he shows any emotion to others, he is playing a role to achieve something.

Looking down at my hands, I spoke in a melancholy voice, "You know, I'm not stupid. I can hear them whispering behind my back, saying I'm part giant because of my height and strength."

HP: A Sociopath Gamer In Magic World

Book&Literature · Kitamari

Khaz_

1mth

Commented

Time to make some impurity cleansing pills(potions) to become beautiful and increase gains fron training. Also, true alchemists don't train, they use potions to train for them. Every time your mc will face a problem in the future, his first thought should be: "Can I make a potion for that?". He should also think about crating mutagens of some kind, especially if he wants to stay human he would need to evolve.

ch 0 3 Chapter 3: Experimentation

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Khaz_

1mth

Commented

The reason to take production makes sense, I just hope this mc will not be complaining about how weak he is all the time, like your other dxd mc.

ch 0 2 Chapter 2: Iter Melius

Highschool DxD: Dragon's Ascent

Anime & Comics · Bronz_Deck

Khaz_

1mth

Commented

I ship it

"You can stop being stabby now Nightshade." I tell the diminutive Falmer and she lazily sheathes her dagger, a movement often practiced by Davos now that I think about it... Were the two of them training together?

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Khaz_

2mth

Commented

I noticed this before, but MC has too many things regarding weapons when 1 would have been enough. He has 5 in 1 weapon from his dad, which should have been enough even if it is a bit too op for a starter weapon. Then he started learning how to forge, which sounds alright if he wants to upgrade his main weapon, but it was made by the best smiths in the underworld, so it would be hard to get to their level. Projection magic is next, he only really needs it to produce arrows, which could have been solved by some magical quvier that duplicates any arrow inside it. And now he gets flames that can become weapons, I know that they have more abilities, but right now, it's really useless as he can use projection to do the same and use shadows in place of constructs. MC has way too many powers that do similar things and he doesn't have time to master any of them and despite that he is already way too strong for his age. You had to nerf his shadows already because you have seen that they are too op but you decided to keep on giving him more powers. Blocking some of his powers just so you can have him in a dangerous situation is not a solution, and you already have to do this when he is 7 years old, I have no idea what you will do when he is 14 and way stronger than now.

ch 51 Chapter 51

Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

Book&Literature · Shadow_D_Monarch3

Khaz_

2mth

Commented

I was wondering what will happen with Sybile in the future as she was clearly not powerful enough to follow mc on his multiversal journey. I know that relationships are not only about how strong you are but being carried all the time by your way stronger partner seems really demeaning. I enjoyed their chemistry but could never see her as more than a current fling. Would have preferred for her to survive, but it's still nice to give mc some character development as he clearly became a bit too sure of himself.

ch 190 Chapter LIII: Royal Rumble

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Khaz_

2mth

Commented

Scorch also drew a bunch of looks an the moment he started preening under the attention I tossed him back into my Magicka pool. That will teach you to lose a verbal battle against Savos' bird!

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Khaz_

5mth

Commented

I like the relationship with Sybil, but I hope she will start working harder on her magic because soon, she won't be able to measure to Raylin and become damsel in distress in future fights.

ch 123 Chapter LXIV: Stalling

Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale

Video Games · Rastislav

Khaz_

5mth

Commented

Why did you make 1 page chapter rather than include it in the last one?

ch 47 Chunin Exams: Forest of Death (Final)

Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto

Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet

Khaz_

5mth

Commented

Lily has lived in the magical world for 20 years and still doesn't know the basic stuff about contracts? Also, her angry reactions are a bit immature, I could see teenager Hermione reacting like that, not a mother of 3 children in her thirties.

ch 35 Chapter 35: The contract

Harry Potter: Another Chance

Book&Literature · Krio_Genix

Khaz_

6mth

Commented

That is the best Dumbledor ever. Any other fanfic can't compare xD

"Oh? Do you like it? It's new. A masterful bit of crafting and charmwork too. It was made by an intern at Twilfitt and Tattings recently. I believe he was found in his flat the day after it was finished, trying to make some kind of tome out of his blood and skin. The story was wonderfully macabre enough to catch my interest and I purchased the robe right away," Dumbledore smiled as if he hadn't just explained the beginning of a H.P. Lovecraft novel.