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Chibi_Senpai: Author question. I’m sure you already noticed this but did you have the mc think about the effects of the magical knowledge he’s giving out for free ending up in the wrong hands? I know he’s only teaching the students who basically have no loyalty to him. He’s also not gaining anything from this whole academy arc( aka give away all the secrets that make me stronger than everyone arc) but we just saw what happens when the knowledge he’s carelessly dishing out ends up in the hands of those who want to do evil. I know he’s strong so he can bulldoze through all the fakes since he’s the real deal but this can really end badly for those not as strong as him. All I’m trying to say is what does the mc get out of all this charity and does he have a plan when it comes to the knowledge he dispersed being used to cause mass losses of life or target those related to him. They may not be targeted now but down the line when he’s no longer there.

Life Hunter · C99
1 week ago

Solomon369: I think this trumps all cliffs I've seen to this day. I promote your cliff to floating island status. Congratulations! Also thanks for the chapter!!!

Life Hunter · C46
1 week ago

DaoistMasterJohn: Maybe Karaskan killed his family and rap3d his dog.
Or stole his sweets when he was a kid.
Otherwise I can't imagine where all that anger is coming from.

Life Hunter · C46
1 week ago

MartialRose: -sees a god- “Can I punch you?” Dudes got balls the size of Jupiter

Life Hunter · C1
1 week ago

LightningAsura: Thx for bothering to write this, and yes I was a newbie writer when I wrote the first volume almost a year ago, but I believe that as a writer, I grew with the story and I hope you will feel that as you read ahead if you plan too, cheers!

Omni-Mastery
2 weeks ago

SlowSleepySloth: 1 hour is less than 3 days, so they technically weren't wrong

Omni-Mastery · C69
2 weeks ago

Horusz: One more with **** pain because MC believes in God...

Omni-Mastery · C59
2 weeks ago
I wanted to add that while it sounds like I'm completely trashing the novel, it definitely isnt bad, it's just that the little things always kinda leave a bad aftertaste. It's like eating gummy bears and you already can't stand it any more but you just continue eat them. Despite everything I said I still find it interesting and will continue reading it, I'm just hoping you managed to improve along the way. View More

Zerzuskan: So I just finished the first volume of the novel and feel obligated to write a review for this. The point of this review is not to inform other readers about this novel but instead write a constructive critic for the author. I realize that at this point there are more than 200 chapters out and whatever I'm saying can't possible influence what is coming, but I still hope it can help you.

To be honest, while thesettimg of the novel feels interesting and the story itself is kind of interesting, the quality of the writing itself is kinda subpar and doesn't allow me to be absorbed in the story. A mayor point for this is that it doesn't feel like I am experiencing the story from the mcs point of view. It is kind of described as if everything already happend and at the end of each day the mc is writing in his diary. There is a.. desychronizating between what I know about this world and what the mc knows about this world. Once it was written that "he has a idea about something" but it enough time to explain it or something like that and I mean how can that possible be the case? The mc is not writing the story himself in the middle of combat. As long as the mc realizes something I want to know what because otherwise how can I feel connected to the mc? The quality of some descriptions are also not that high because in a sense there are a lot of words which do not help me to understand what is actually going on and sometimes missing some critical information. I realize that you answered some of that in the comments, but if I can't understand it in the story itself just bupy casually reading it's just not good enough. I know its your first book, but this is important and maybe you should get a friend to proofread everything before posting or something. Then if he has a question, instead of explaining to him make sure you rewrite whatever brings up the question so that it is easily understandable. Additionally there are a lot of inconsistencies in the story(mostly the system messages). I know you edited some parts at a later stage so I guess this caused that some paragraphs no longer matches with what was described before. Now some system messages raises some expectations and then the story leaves the reader unfulfilled or rather with the thought "wait what? Shouldn't it be like this?" and it isnt. An example of that is when he absorbs the red mist instead of storing it in his exp orb. He kills a single entity, gains like 7 stats across various categories and similar messages pop up one after another. You even use "..." in a single line as if saying "these kind of messages come a lot but I, not gonna list them all because yeah they are all the same and obvious no one wants to read that" which itself is correct, however when he gains the title for killing 100 of those enemy's, technically your build up would everyone expect "yeah he always absorb those things, the little ones gain about that many stats, the soldiers gives a bit more, if its 100 kills in total that should be about 200 stats in everything ". What actually happens is that he barely gained 2-3٪ of the stat points I expected which always feels really unsatisfying. In your head there is probably a reason for this, but that doesn't mean anything to me if it's not written down. And it needs to be written down before I'm left disappointed not at soemlater stage. Maybe during absorbing the red mist something like "oh he realises that after 3 kills the normal one no longer gain any stats".

Yeah so overall it's mainly that it feels like you are still struggling with bringing the ideas in your head on paper in a way that let's anyone properly understand what you intend to describe, which would make sense since this is your first novel I think? I'm just hoping it kinda improves along the way.

But good luck

Omni-Mastery
2 weeks ago
Reading Status: C48
So I just finished the first volume of the novel and feel obligated to write a review for this. The point of this review is not to inform other readers about this novel but instead write a constructive critic for the author. I realize that at this point there are more than 200 chapters out and whatever I'm saying can't possible influence what is coming, but I still hope it can help you.

To be honest, while thesettimg of the novel feels interesting and the story itself is kind of interesting, the quality of the writing itself is kinda subpar and doesn't allow me to be absorbed in the story. A mayor point for this is that it doesn't feel like I am experiencing the story from the mcs point of view. It is kind of described as if everything already happend and at the end of each day the mc is writing in his diary. There is a.. desychronizating between what I know about this world and what the mc knows about this world. Once it was written that "he has a idea about something" but it enough time to explain it or something like that and I mean how can that possible be the case? The mc is not writing the story himself in the middle of combat. As long as the mc realizes something I want to know what because otherwise how can I feel connected to the mc? The quality of some descriptions are also not that high because in a sense there are a lot of words which do not help me to understand what is actually going on and sometimes missing some critical information. I realize that you answered some of that in the comments, but if I can't understand it in the story itself just bupy casually reading it's just not good enough. I know its your first book, but this is important and maybe you should get a friend to proofread everything before posting or something. Then if he has a question, instead of explaining to him make sure you rewrite whatever brings up the question so that it is easily understandable. Additionally there are a lot of inconsistencies in the story(mostly the system messages). I know you edited some parts at a later stage so I guess this caused that some paragraphs no longer matches with what was described before. Now some system messages raises some expectations and then the story leaves the reader unfulfilled or rather with the thought "wait what? Shouldn't it be like this?" and it isnt. An example of that is when he absorbs the red mist instead of storing it in his exp orb. He kills a single entity, gains like 7 stats across various categories and similar messages pop up one after another. You even use "..." in a single line as if saying "these kind of messages come a lot but I, not gonna list them all because yeah they are all the same and obvious no one wants to read that" which itself is correct, however when he gains the title for killing 100 of those enemy's, technically your build up would everyone expect "yeah he always absorb those things, the little ones gain about that many stats, the soldiers gives a bit more, if its 100 kills in total that should be about 200 stats in everything ". What actually happens is that he barely gained 2-3٪ of the stat points I expected which always feels really unsatisfying. In your head there is probably a reason for this, but that doesn't mean anything to me if it's not written down. And it needs to be written down before I'm left disappointed not at soemlater stage. Maybe during absorbing the red mist something like "oh he realises that after 3 kills the normal one no longer gain any stats".

Yeah so overall it's mainly that it feels like you are still struggling with bringing the ideas in your head on paper in a way that let's anyone properly understand what you intend to describe, which would make sense since this is your first novel I think? I'm just hoping it kinda improves along the way.

But good luck View More
Omni-Mastery
2 weeks ago

TheHermitKing: Yeah, especially since the chapters of this novel are quite short, but it just felt like it was taking way too long to get his point across

Omni-Mastery · C42
2 weeks ago

kessu91: so 1st chapter hes the super genius of the century but will die in a year no chance of survival... 2nd chapter theres a cure btw but he needs to join this death game to receive it... so you telling me the most prestigious super academy somehow was unable to give him access to the cure? I mean sure its the prologue but atleast try to make it believable instead of this joke that it is now... also being the genius he is why the **** is he exited when the rich guy has done nothing but tell him die in an experiment?

Omni-Mastery · C2
2 weeks ago

leonid10: Oh Jesus christ why is the author so inconsistent. The announcements kept going and he only turned it off at the 20tj level so why does he just pull the 15th lvl crap from nowhere?

Shadow Hack · C126
2 weeks ago

Ecnival: The inconsistencies in this novel are frustrating. Why is it that as soon as he cleared the 10th and 15th floor a huge announcement was made across all the dimensions. However, absolutely nothing when he clears the 20th floor. Yeah, I know he decided to remove his name from the ranking, but that is a different matter altogether.

Shadow Hack · C126
2 weeks ago

Gromowid: What a mad ład! He just personally killed his teammate over a dispute. Killed a person. His peer. Bare-handed. Under the eye of the rest of his group. Not that a certain shadow-hacking someone was supposed to keep a low profile. How do you do that after violently murdering someone?
I can't wait to see consequences of this action.

Shadow Hack · C78
2 weeks ago

Daoist_Eternal_Sky: Thank God it's just +1 per level.. Otherwise it would truly be broken as hell.

Shadow Hack · C5
2 weeks ago
Maybe 15? "Although he is a hero his cultivation is still a bit low" View More

REDLAW: Who wants to bet how many chapters it will take before everyone forget that he is a hero and begins to look down on him

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C422
2 months ago

SageCrow: Well....after reading this novel till the current chapter all I have to say is that there are many many many many many many plot holes and most of the time this thing doesn't make any sense if you go logically. I mean think back to the part when he entered the university where he met all those adept cultivators and the ranks above it (I don't really remember the ranks) but I don't think I saw them fight.... heck I didn't even see the principal fight who is supposedly the strongest person in the university.... and the main point being that humanity was facing an occupational hazard and all the other forces were sitting by the sides watching the whole show...... That makes me think that they would only react if the spirit aliens were to destroy the "fist line of defense" being the Great wall university...... ( GUYS PLEASE DON'T FLAME ME FOR GIVING MY OPINIONS, I MEAN IF U THINK I'M WRONG THEN PLEASE STATE YOUR MIND)

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C422
2 months ago
I know, I said so myself, just that this one tops them View More

wizwiz4: There's lots of chinese racist novel like this.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C256
2 months ago
Pff, most of them collapse or disappear or whatever, and it's not like all of them are created 5 seconds before the end of the mythological era View More

TerrestrialOverlor: That is literally the case, people just can't find them

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C374
3 months ago

BlackAndNothing: Its been fun
But now its time to say goodbye

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C377
3 months ago
10* View More

Zerzuskan: Secret realms seem to be lying around everywhere quite casually and it has been atleast q0 chapters, it is time

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C374
3 months ago
Secret realms seem to be lying around everywhere quite casually and it has been atleast q0 chapters, it is time View More

Cliff_Slayer: maybe author have other ideas like having and unknown expert helping or another secret realm?

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C374
3 months ago

Top_Comment: The author is prob gonna copy paste the next 10 chapters from the last time Mc escaped the same way.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C374
3 months ago

Eliflockan: "If they weren’t able to escape the calamity today, there would be endless troubles in the future." Really? There wouldn't be any trouble because the MC would die and that would be the end of the novel XD

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C373
3 months ago

Avacus: Think you have a typo with the ranking rewards. First place gets 10k academic points but second place gets 20K?

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C371
3 months ago
Nono it doesn't work, he just designes an intelligent character and then that character will write the story itself View More

WolfEatstheMoon: Remember even if he's supposed I be a genius a character can't break human intelligence as the author is human

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C369
3 months ago
Nah you can't say that. Dont forget that vitality also influences intelligence and a normal human from today only has 0.1 vitality... he is 32000 times smarter than us, can't you tell by his actions?! View More

alwaysareader: So Mc even after awakening a bunch of Genes that strengthen his brain is only smarter then a rock now.
Tnks 4 da chapter.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C369
3 months ago

readm: why didnt he just make his iron cudgel grow when he was inside the giant

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C367
3 months ago

clare: everything was fine until he mentioned the game, from there his explanation became confused. I will realize that I do not mention anything about a game.

Divine Brilliance · C1
3 months ago

Immortal_Pigpuff: How smart has he become.... truthfully not that much.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C364
3 months ago
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