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celefoata_

1yr

Posted

Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs a bit of work and the story feels very dry. Characters feel really dry too, it's just a very... dry story. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.

The Descent of Dawn

Fantasy · xash_alan

celefoata_

2yr

Posted

Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, too many run-on sentences, and the story feels dry. Paint dries faster than your story progresses.

endeavour to utopia

Sci-fi · gintoki_

celefoata_

2yr

Posted

Stop plugging your novels in the discord general chat. Grammar needs work, sentence structure feels weird, and the story feels clunky. Also, using systems is the shittiest writing. I literally cannot stand this system bullshit anymore.

Re-Writing. Search Name Of Cover To Read New Version.

Fantasy · TheHeavenlySleeper

celefoata_

3yr

Commented

You discord nerds, I'm still the tler

ch 1924 Silver Alchemy Celestial Alchemist

Unrivaled Medicine God

Eastern · Feng Yise

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