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I really do like this novel I was hooked chapter 1 but the pacing feels wicked fast. I looked forward to the school setting in the beginning and it felt like 2 chapters later that was flew past with nothing interesting happening. by chapter 100 there has been no substantial arc of any kind just boatloads of new things happening chapter after chapter. I really hope the pacing can be worked on for later chapters

I just can't bring myself to like this. I liked the description and the idea of it. But there is a limit to things and the mc is just downright dumb. Avoiding the face-slapping trope is fine but making the mc a pushover because the world is easy and he "never saw the bad side" is not good writing. Does not help when I read the author's review saying one arc is really bad and that's why so many chapters are unlocked. It's hard to bring oneself to put so much time into reading when it's going to get worse before it gets better.

I dont really understand a lot of the reviews on this novel Its an absolute slog to read through, the development of the characters is non existent after 200 chapters. I think the author has a great world but needs to work on characters. The reviews about no cliches and originality are just not true either. The echoes and memories are just like super gene. The shadow ability reminds me of shadow hack, unsealing emptiness, and solo leveling while still having some originality to it atleast. Overall though I just cant find myself recommending this to anyone, especially trying to claim its one of the best novels on this app is just insulting to the novels that have that title. I do wish the author all the best, definitely has a talent in writing or the world background wouldn't be so good.

this wasn't needed though. The dark race has been tossed aside. He never even fully explored the other side. they have been building the danger from hundreds of chaps on the dark race. Then within a couple chaps bam aliens, space travel, invasion. Finish a plot the dark race was actually interesting.

I have always loved mylittlebrothers novels. My biggest concern is the commitment to them. Dual cultivation is 1k chaps in not finished but the auther moved onto cultivation online which hit 1k chaps and now here is a 3rd novel. I'm worried about investing into these novels and never seeing their endings.

the first so many chapters are basically a retelling of arifureta. Elana is kaori both ate healers that love the mc. he gets stuck in a dungeon after being betrayed. First monster he hunts is a rabbit that ends up being way stronger than him. Then gets a lightning power from a wolf. Falls into a deep abyss, mutates with longer silver ish hair. like come on?? how obvious can you be just say there are heavy inspirations in the book description area.

there is not a lot of authenticity when you take plots from other things. the amount of arifureta plot off bat and you call this authenticity.

why in gods name is the mc named moss?? do people not know how to name a character. May be dumb to nit pick the name but its hard to immerse in a novel when im reading about moss.

Off bat weak mc who finds metal ball in a library. skipping the nitpicking of how is he the only one to find it part, the ball is neat. Fuse genes to become stronger. 150 chaps in he fused multiple genes got cool abilities that evolve with him. When he fights the pangolian beasts and it described the changes on his armor it was awesome. 20 ish chaps later all that is retconned the ball is useless, the genes he fused are useless, he is talentless and just was lucky. Okay whole story tossed out now there are machine worlds and martial arts worlds. His planet is weak and he is weak. Given some bare run of the mill cultivating guide thats only strong on his planet but commonly used elsewhere. Whats supposed to be interesting now? talentless, boring mc with no special abilities or anything. world is all over the place and no information lasts more than a chapter without being uno reversed. Im fully caught up to chapter 290 and its not worth it at all anymore. Amazing concept even if used before in other stories but scrapped for some boring crap.

I really enjoyed how the book started out and I have read up to around chapter 150. However im quickly getting annoyed at the inconsistencies that have suddenly started. earlier they said using external weaponry what not hindered leveling up. I also have noticed the the orbs that are supposed to drop suddenly seem to not be a thing after he killed 10 first order enemies and not a single mention of an orb dropping.

there is nothing about this that stands out over other system novels. the characters are not interesting. The system seems very boring and not fleshed out at all. All it does is show his stats. I dont see how the other reviews speak so highly of this novel.