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AlunaSola: He doesn't care. just found him in the reviews along with Ramennoodlez roasting the heck out of another reader who tried to help him fix plotholes and inconsistencies.
Chapter 60 topcomments i'd pointed out a plot hold that was easy to fix, and Biako wasn't even at 100 chapters at that point.
It's been a year, nothing in the early chapters has changed or been fixed.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

AuthumLeaf: It's cool but I feel like the MC is getting dumber ass the chapter go by. Jdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjjrjrjrjrjrjrjdjdjdjdjjfjfjrjrjrjrjrjfjfjfjfjfjdjfjfjfjfjdjdjd

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19 hours ago

AlunaSola: It's hard to read the whole thing when the top comments about the story are about plot holes that could've easily been fixed. For example Chapter 60 i'm in the 5 comments about a plothole that needed only a simple name change. it was a punch to the face that brought me out of the experience of reading the book and it wasn't the first time i'd commented about other mistakes like this. Sure the Book could be better down the line, but unlike the translated stories, Originals still have the ability to edit the chapters. It's been a year since i posted that comment . and when we early followers of the novel commented about these flaws in hopes of helping the author to fix holes that would make the story flow better he ignored many of us. the top comments in the early chapters have stayed there for a reason. This story really could been the 5-Star Cake! How can you enjoy the full course meal when the chef refuses acknowledge the eggshells you ate in your first bites.

I've tried. The story has been doing pretty Okay. It's just frustrating to see an author brush away the new readers and hope they'll either skip the first section or rush through it to get to the good parts
Because you guys can't see my ratings i'll verbalize my scoring.

Writing Quality : ★★
Stability to updates : ★★★★
Story Development : ★★★
Character design : ★★
World Background : ★★★
Editing : (Sigh) ★

Noticing the "Constellation" of the Stars: Accidentally Priceless

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

Satis_Shrestha: Author really need to know what has been written in the previous chapter..... Information donot match mostly in the player status ...... seriously really need to focus on those

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19 hours ago

DevourerOfSouls: This is my tenth time publishing this.

Asshole and brainless author, I only gave my criticisms to fix the s.hit in the opening chapters, and he excludes my criticisms.

Author, Don't you want to receive criticism? so remove the "premium" from this junk called "Rise of the Undead Legion", I'm not much to be angry with an author, but that author really made me angry.

(Keep deleting that I will continue to post this same message, it's already saved, so I'll see you again when delete this review)

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

shakedmigdal: This is “feel good” story, classic and not complicated. But when everything just falls into the lap of MC without reason and the inconsistency of his ability/inability to do stuff kind of bothers me.

Also it’s like 2070 in the novel for no reason other than the game console, so I made the mathe and in 50 years the inflation will make 12,700 dollars worth as much as 1,000 today approximately. (It varies so it’s just a scale) still the prices are of as today.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

MiddleEastern: Took you long enough to delete my review, I thought you had given up. glad to see you active and well.

basically this is my 4th or 5th review, I might as well create a bot to re write this once it get deleted again
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Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

Obsidion: Only at chapter 27 so far, but the amount of absurdity in this novel ia beyond me.
I mean there is a limit of how dumb you can make the MC be, or how many inconsistences your story have.
I will still read to see where it goes and review it again, but god, it's a disaster

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

SkyAboveTheSky: I remember writing a negative review for this novel long back. It was deleted cuz because of less stars. I don't see him deleting spam reviews since they give him stars without actual review.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

Blacklotus: I absolutely despise authors that delete reviews for WHATEVER REASON.

There is NO excuse for an author to delete a review.

Its like if a company that produced a product on amazon decides to boost sales by deleting all reviews under 5 stars. Its NOT right, its a SCAM.

You trying to defend the author places your IQ below 0.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

Lonmar: and I do not agree with this opinion.
yes, today if the author had to correct all the faults mentioned, it would take him a long time.
but at the time?

and for the general debate, I think that in most cases, people who make a sensible criticism on a small number of chapters for good reasons.

if you see a house with unstable foundations, you don't want to move in. (to continue with the metaphors)

I remember having had this debate in another discussion before, and I listed several reasons why I think writing reviews early can make sense ...
I no longer remember all my arguments, I will content myself with the example of Dimensional Sovereign: the novel had gone from a management style to pure action in a handful of chapters ...
when you appreciate the beginning of the book and the theme changes, it may be interesting to mention it to future readers ...

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19 hours ago

AlunaSola: It's funny that you mention cooking. sure the cake was great. but I saw the eggshells in the batter and the cook didn't bother to take it out before baking it into premium

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

AlunaSola: It's hard to read the whole thing when the top comments about the story are about plot holes that could've easily been fixed. For example Chapter 60 i'm in the 5 comments about a plothole that needed only a simple name change. it was a punch to the face that brought me out of the experience of reading the book and it wasn't the first time i'd commented about other mistakes like this. Sure the Book could be better down the line, but unlike the translated stories, Originals still have the ability to edit the chapters. It's been a year since i posted that comment . and when we early followers of the novel commented about these flaws in hopes of helping the author to fix holes that would make the story flow better he ignored many of us. the top comments in the early chapters have stayed there for a reason. How can you enjoy the full course meal when the chef refuses acknowledge the fly you ate in your first bites.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

WN_Enthusiast: Hey man, i haven't read the story but going by how your thought matches mine a lot, i am willing to bet that our taste will as well. I don't agree that i gotta read the whole thing to leave a review. As a matter of fact 54 chapters is a lot. Most good books get you hooked by that time. We are all bz ppl with ryl stuff with limited time and we use that limited time to read WN. If i waste my time reading a crappy novel, i will most definitely post my thoughts so that any likeminded individuals dont waste time. I just had an experience with such book called "let me game in peace" yesterday.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

Lagat489: Lol.. 56 chap is enough or should I say a lot imo. Whether its get better in later chapters or not it does not matter the fact the he read 56 and reviewed it means at least he wants it to improve.

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19 hours ago

DavidxAnonamon: Maybe the author shouldn't delete reviews.

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19 hours ago

Acedus: Thing is, reviews here (mostly) aren't made by professional critiques whose occupation means that they have to read the entire thing, these reviews are left by regular people who'd rather not finish a novel that they don't enjoy. Besides, 50,000 words is the average word count for a typical light novel, meaning that Hh's already read a whole 'novels' worth of what the author has to offer.
Besides, according to your logic, almost no review on any webnovel is 'valid' because most reviews are made before the reader finishes the novel.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

Acedus: Except this isn't an anime series which gets a season with a set of episodes every year or so. This is a webnovel that (used to) get updated regularly, meaning that if it can't draw you in within 56 chaps (which is at least 56,000 words worth of reading already mind you), is there really any point in continuing on?
Sure there's always the ever-present possibility that it 'gets better' but ignoring the fact that that possibility rarely, if ever, becomes true, if it were to (hypothetically) come true, would it be worth trudging through at least 56,000 words worth of content that you don't enjoy just to get to that point? Excluding maybe you, most people would answer no.
It's a cliche line but 'first impressions count'.

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19 hours ago

Acedus: You're literally saying that we should stick with a piece of media no matter how much we dislike it? Let's make an example of your train of though because your example is way too misleading for my liking.
If I were to play a game that I didn't like for 5 hours, I (according to your logic) should just keep playing because of the possibility of it suddenly becoming good at the 6th hour? That's he stupidest thing I've ever heard.

Rise of The Undead Legion
19 hours ago

DiabolicalGenius: Kindness is a good girl. It'll be nice if we see more of her in the future. Though with Shi and Zhu people might think he's making a loli harem. The FBI might take a trip to China~

Cultivation Chat Group · C1252
1 day ago
Ha! That grand reveal of his identity! Their efforts to “revive” him was doomed to fail! XD View More
Gamers of the Underworld · C586
6 days ago
Yeah, after the novel was officially released and got somewhat popular, they actually went over and edited parts of it. View More

Kyruu: Did this get edited or something ? While it is not absolutely the best grammar , it is not like MTL at all

I Am A Legendary BOSS · C7
6 days ago

DaoistCitizen: Song one mightve been a trickster, but in the end hes an immortal, and of the ancient heavenly city at that. North emperor said many wanted to beat him, but less than 10 ever managed.

His one other appearance was pretty badass too, stepped into the scholarly faction fight, oneshot 8 profound sages, looked at shuhang then left.

When the fool reveals his mettle, it results in absolute domination 🙃

True that we dont know enough yet tho. More questions, more and more questions..

Cultivation Chat Group · C1245
1 week ago

Migole: So this golden guy and Shuhang both have the following:

1) A deep link with Buddhist body strengthening even if it isn’t to their taste

2) No chance at becoming a scholar even though it is to their taste

3) Their first combat move is to call for reinforcements

4) Terrible naming sense and a propensity to Troll their opponents

90% sure this is Slow Witted Song. Goes to 100 if we find he can’t use a sword

Cultivation Chat Group · C1245
1 week ago

Fleks: Slow-wited Song turned his signature move "Senior, help!" into his path to immortality!

Cultivation Chat Group · C1245
1 week ago

Jack_N_Mikhail: I need that cape.

I Am the God of Games · C129
1 week ago
Fate needs to die. View More
Reverend Insanity · C1677
1 week ago

SlayerX: I feel like feng jin huang might follow the same path and join fy.....just a feeling tho

Reverend Insanity · C1677
1 week ago

SlayerX: Fate gu can weave a net for him upto rank 9 but at rank 9 both him and fate stand as equals so fate can't really completely control him like in the past...

Reverend Insanity · C1677
1 week ago

TanyaSilver: I think Heavenly Curt temper with fate gu. And Constellation also assimilated with Will of Heaven to twist it's rules to be more favorable towards the human race. Fate might has allow Hong Ting to become a Venerable but perhaps Fate gu also wanted to use Hong Ting to defy Heavenly Court and instead turn him against them. It feels like fate operate like a computer with it's own set of codes. And Heavenly court is like a virus inside the system, so the system try to flush it out using every means it has at it's disposable. And since it's a system, it won't care what consequences it will bring. It's goal has always been to balance out things. Take surplus away while adding it to another.

Reverend Insanity · C1677
1 week ago
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