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  • The Story is dropped until rework.

    The Story is dropped until rework.

    Fantasy

    Apophis. The very incarnation of all things evil. His sole purpose was to consume all the creation. Immortal and Eternal. He was the bane of all things alive and dead. So all the gods come together sealing him, but at a great sacrifice. But unknown to them a small fragment manages to escape. But this story is not about his fragment and maybe it's revenge. It's about, how what you may see may not be truth. What you hear may be False. It's about a boy and his spirit, who start on a journey to save the universe. Because, sometimes you need to destroy to create. Author doesn't knows why he is posting this. He has a few idea... But they are just ideas. Because author is hopeless. Author will try to write a story. It might be something like Xianxia? .. What's something like xianxia anyway? Next chapter... Will be god knows when. But author knows one thing. Author is handsome. And handsome people don't do wrong.

  • Harry Potter and The Grey Side.

    Harry Potter and The Grey Side.

    Fantasy

    Harry Potter is born three years earlier and that changes everything. Being cast aside for his younger brother who is The Boy Who Lived, he is thrown to the Dursleys. Fortunately, he's saved by his Grandparents and this proves to be the turning point. Learning that strength is everything he starts his journey to become something more than just a wizard. But is everything that simple? Now he needs to navigate Wizard Politics, a delusional Old Man who believes in Greater Good, Aristocrats with multiple agendas, a civilization still stuck in Victorian Era and romance. What you can expect? Strong MC, later OP. Wrong Boy Who Lived. MoD in later chapters. Dumbledore, Weasley, Potter Bashing. ( To some extent.) Sneak Fighting And things which break the laws of reality. Like a two year old rapping, and earth being flat. Harem... most probably no. Possible Romance Interest: DG MC will be dark grey with his own agendas. An alien invasion? No fixed schedule...

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True. But as far as we have read, the drop rates and value are abyssal View More

Heretoc: I am not sure about the whole story, but the game definitely sucks. I am shocked that people even play it. This game is like Pay To Win taken to extreme.

Just for the sake of reference. 1 Credit is around 1 Yuan.
It requires 3 credits for a bullet. So 1 yuan is around 0.14 dollars. So basically 2 bullets for a dollar.

Wtf?

Let's talk about this from a machine gun player's POV. I am taking a rather popular machine gun, M4 carbine. It shoots around 700-900 rounds/min. That's almost 400 dollars for a minute of shooting.

To put it in perspective for people who don't live in US and have no idea about how much is 500 dollars.

A **4 Pro 1 TB costs $367
A Nitendo Switch is around $200
An iPhone XS is around $1000. That's like 3 minute of shooting.

And this is just for the common bullets. He talks about bullets worth 5 credits, 30 credits and god knows what. Plus everything there costs.


And how the author has described the game mechanics, a common player has no chance of even passing lvl 10, unless he's with some serious pay to win player.

This is not pay to win, but pay to play.

Anyway, sorry for the rant. This just really makes me question that has the author ever player a mmorpg or mmo game?

Anyway that's it.

Fatal Shot
1 week ago
I never said ban. I specifically said the word 'discourage. '
Can you imagine your game experience if everyone is just killing each other? You enter the game only to be stabbed in the back, once again finding yourself at the save point. View More
Fatal Shot · C16
1 week ago
Lol true. But as of the latest chapter, the story has improved much. Author has kept what made the story endearing. All the politics and meetings have been kept on side burn or given to that girl.

Regarding the Mars thing. I should have explained it more. He sent the rocket to moon and later from there to Mars. How was it even possible? Sending a rocket made for moon mission to Mars. Whether it's the internal environment unit, the storage space or even the 'shower. View More

Lize: Errr.. sending rocket to mars is nasa project isnt?
Not the mc project.. (he only send it to mars to save them because the accident)
And they have atleast make preparation for atleast decade..
Its true that they launch the mars program to early..
Because mc creating moon palace..
But true the mc romance is.............
Ugh i really angry everytime mc is talking to girl..
😂🤣😂🤣
And yeah i feel it.. after chapter 600is..
The story go down..
Its like the mc is being controles by the system..
He didnt give himself a time..
I always feel that way everytime the mc said he doesnt have time for girl..
Its like he himself that didnt give him time..
A lot of people have already said that he need vacation.. but nope.. he didnt listen.. 😂🤣
He can wait for like a month.. to collect the system reward.. and do the next mission..
But nah.. he always get the reward in the night or in a few days..
😂🤣

Scholar's Advanced Technological System
1 week ago
Lol true. But as of the latest chapter, the story has improved much. Author has kept what made the story endearing. All the politics and meetings have been kept on side burn or given to that girl.

Regarding the Mars thing. I should have explained it more. He sent the rocket to moon and later from there to Mars. How was it even possible? Sending a rocket made for moon mission to Mars. Whether it's the internal environment unit, the storage space or even the 'shower. ' View More

Lize: Errr.. sending rocket to mars is nasa project isnt?
Not the mc project.. (he only send it to mars to save them because the accident)
And they have atleast make preparation for atleast decade..
Its true that they launch the mars program to early..
Because mc creating moon palace..
But true the mc romance is.............
Ugh i really angry everytime mc is talking to girl..
😂🤣😂🤣
And yeah i feel it.. after chapter 600is..
The story go down..
Its like the mc is being controles by the system..
He didnt give himself a time..
I always feel that way everytime the mc said he doesnt have time for girl..
Its like he himself that didnt give him time..
A lot of people have already said that he need vacation.. but nope.. he didnt listen.. 😂🤣
He can wait for like a month.. to collect the system reward.. and do the next mission..
But nah.. he always get the reward in the night or in a few days..
😂🤣

Scholar's Advanced Technological System
1 week ago
There is a difference between having same elements and being similar. World Online is a VR novel and despite that managed to stand out. Not sure about Chinese novels, but if you read originals or fanfics, many of them are amazingly done with interesting story lines.

My main issue is that the author never seems to have played MMO. Let's say Red Name Players. It's there to discourage player killing and preventing the game from turning into an all out kill-fest. But except the fed army will kill you if you enter the main city and more equipment will fall, I don't see any drawbacks. In fact it's like a token effort from game devs to prevent PVP.

Pay money reduce kill count. Kill players to reduce kill count. ( even more ridiculous.) Or go and solve missions. (This one actually makes some sense.) And a city for red name players? O_o View More

Linds: Every VR novels will have same elements. Because they are game genre. PK system like this is also not bad. Comparing to other VR novels with few hours of red name its quite strict. And something new? I hope you were joking. Its a VR novel, plus its a Chinese one. They pursue quantity over quality. So face-smacking, snobbish villains, unreasonable guilds, unrealistic people are their bread and butter. Read reincarnation of the sword god. You'll understand then. I always read title and skip it. That one makes no sense and its more broken than this one.

Fatal Shot · C16
1 week ago
I was hoping for something new. This just seems to be a copy of other VR novels. Why were the reviewers hyping it so much.

The game mechanics is stupid.
The whole game should just collapse on itself with such ridiculous currency value.
Red Name and Player Killer mechanics are dumb.
The weaponry is confusing.
It is just a copy paste of other VR novels, except MC is a sniper. View More
Fatal Shot · C16
1 week ago

HeartFlame: Those PK rules seems awfully stupid.

Every single mmo rpg author(chinese) never actually played a videogame before, they come with the weirdest fucking rules that makes no sense whatsoever

Fatal Shot · C15
1 week ago
For people who say complain about yuan to credit. He said that 1 yuan is 1 star credit. And 1 star credit is between 1-10 credits.

So let's take the maximum possible amount. 10 credits per yuan. That's 3 bullets per yuan. 1 yuan is about 0.14 dollar. So that's about 33 bullets for 1.4 dollar or 10 yuan.
Taking the same thing as above, a 800 round / min will cost around 24.24 dollar. So even then, a 25 dollar per minute game play.

So even you shoot just for just 1 min per day for 30 days, you are paying around 725 dollars per month. Of course, that's only when you are just shooting common bullets and only for 1 MIN.

Not talking about guns or other hardware. View More

Heretoc: I am not sure about the whole story, but the game definitely sucks. I am shocked that people even play it. This game is like Pay To Win taken to extreme.

Just for the sake of reference. 1 Credit is around 1 Yuan.
It requires 3 credits for a bullet. So 1 yuan is around 0.14 dollars. So basically 2 bullets for a dollar.

Wtf?

Let's talk about this from a machine gun player's POV. I am taking a rather popular machine gun, M4 carbine. It shoots around 700-900 rounds/min. That's almost 400 dollars for a minute of shooting.

To put it in perspective for people who don't live in US and have no idea about how much is 500 dollars.

A **4 Pro 1 TB costs $367
A Nitendo Switch is around $200
An iPhone XS is around $1000. That's like 3 minute of shooting.

And this is just for the common bullets. He talks about bullets worth 5 credits, 30 credits and god knows what. Plus everything there costs.


And how the author has described the game mechanics, a common player has no chance of even passing lvl 10, unless he's with some serious pay to win player.

This is not pay to win, but pay to play.

Anyway, sorry for the rant. This just really makes me question that has the author ever player a mmorpg or mmo game?

Anyway that's it.

Fatal Shot
1 week ago

Heretoc: I am not sure about the whole story, but the game definitely sucks. I am shocked that people even play it. This game is like Pay To Win taken to extreme.

Just for the sake of reference. 1 Credit is around 1 Yuan.
It requires 3 credits for a bullet. So 1 yuan is around 0.14 dollars. So basically 2 bullets for a dollar.

Wtf?

Let's talk about this from a machine gun player's POV. I am taking a rather popular machine gun, M4 carbine. It shoots around 700-900 rounds/min. That's almost 400 dollars for a minute of shooting.

To put it in perspective for people who don't live in US and have no idea about how much is 500 dollars.

A **4 Pro 1 TB costs $367
A Nitendo Switch is around $200
An iPhone XS is around $1000. That's like 3 minute of shooting.

And this is just for the common bullets. He talks about bullets worth 5 credits, 30 credits and god knows what. Plus everything there costs.


And how the author has described the game mechanics, a common player has no chance of even passing lvl 10, unless he's with some serious pay to win player.

This is not pay to win, but pay to play.

Anyway, sorry for the rant. This just really makes me question that has the author ever player a mmorpg or mmo game?

Anyway that's it.

Fatal Shot
1 week ago
Reading Status: C14
I am not sure about the whole story, but the game definitely sucks. I am shocked that people even play it. This game is like Pay To Win taken to extreme.

Just for the sake of reference. 1 Credit is around 1 Yuan.
It requires 3 credits for a bullet. So 1 yuan is around 0.14 dollars. So basically 2 bullets for a dollar.

Wtf?

Let's talk about this from a machine gun player's POV. I am taking a rather popular machine gun, M4 carbine. It shoots around 700-900 rounds/min. That's almost 400 dollars for a minute of shooting.

To put it in perspective for people who don't live in US and have no idea about how much is 500 dollars.

A **4 Pro 1 TB costs $367
A Nitendo Switch is around $200
An iPhone XS is around $1000. That's like 3 minute of shooting.

And this is just for the common bullets. He talks about bullets worth 5 credits, 30 credits and god knows what. Plus everything there costs.


And how the author has described the game mechanics, a common player has no chance of even passing lvl 10, unless he's with some serious pay to win player.

This is not pay to win, but pay to play.

Anyway, sorry for the rant. This just really makes me question that has the author ever player a mmorpg or mmo game?

Anyway that's it. View More
Fatal Shot
1 week ago
Not complaining, mostly confused. Anyway, ISSTH fatty. The guy who could eat spirit stones and used treasures as toothpick. View More

RoryZaffre: Are you complaining? Though cliché, does it not still work? And i must say, this would have to be the biggest meatball friend added for comedy that ive seen appear in a novel so far. If there is a novel with one bigger and funnier, please do tell

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C164
2 weeks ago
Right.... If they can't be fat then they must be skinny. Why not? Let's just make them Laurel and Hardy.


Seriously? Haven't you ever heard of a rhetorical question? Maybe sarcasm? An observation? Nope? View More

OldTimeTea: Do you want all the characters to be skinny then ?

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C164
2 weeks ago

Heretoc: ... Do all Chinese novels must have a fatty as a side kick, mostly for comedic relief?

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C164
2 weeks ago
... Do all Chinese novels must have a fatty as a side kick, mostly for comedic relief? View More
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C164
2 weeks ago

ProCultivator: Arthur was a king from keltic legends and if you have read valhalla sage, you might know that there are powers like geass in that myth

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C162
2 weeks ago
Umm... I believe Arthur's origin are still under debate. Although there are high chances about his celtic root due to certain poet. I just checked several websites ( and no newspaper... 😅) and it's still not set in stone.

In fact if we talk about historically, there are incredibly high chances that he didn't even exist and he was only glorified later. Anyway, I can't actually see what power can he grant. He was a warrior. And no where in his myths there are talks about geass and magic, unless you add merlin to the quotient, which itself should not exist as there was no person called as Merlin ( he was based on few people... Even his name like Emrys)

Finally, Valhalla Saga is a work of fiction. Many mythological characters and figures have been twisted, although not in a bad way. So using it as a evidence is rather foolish. 😅

But yes, it's possible to include such things, but probably in a more warrior-ish(?) way. Like magic sword of truth. Lol.

And in the end... Knowing this author, would he really have gone beyond the first google entry? I doubt he has researched any of the characters apart from Sun Wukong. He will probably make him some super god gifted king with ability to use sword. 😂 View More

ProCultivator: Arthur was a king from keltic legends and if you have read valhalla sage, you might know that there are powers like geass in that myth

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C162
2 weeks ago

Heretoc: Lmao. True. It was not even like excalibur was made by him or something. He was just a strong human king. I can't actually see it as something as comparable to Titan Gene, God Genes or even... Merlin gene. Although knowing author he probably has messed up the Arthurian Legend and turned Arthur into something straight of Fate Series.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C162
2 weeks ago

neopolitana: yeh sure, and then they will obtain the special abilities "madness und zeal", " rile up", "super propaganda" ,"bonus damage vs non arian races" and most importantly "hitler moustach". gotta love dem hitler moustaches...

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C162
2 weeks ago
Lmao. True. It was not even like excalibur was made by him or something. He was just a strong human king. I can't actually see it as something as comparable to Titan Gene, God Genes or even... Merlin gene. Although knowing author he probably has messed up the Arthurian Legend and turned Arthur into something straight of Fate Series. View More

toxicSpike: Why king arthur bloodline?! Merlin i could understand but what did arthur do besides drawing a sword from stone, getting proclaimed king because of the sword and getting cuckolded by his nephew

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C162
2 weeks ago
Eh... Because I always read atleast till Chapter 200, as to give author time to acclimate and set the story. Because many people promised that the story improves after Chapter 200?

And if you would have read my following comments you wouldn't be asking such questions.

Did that answer it? View More

Tenzai: If you have that many complaints, then drop it. Nobody is forcing you to read this "horrible trash novel"

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
2 weeks ago
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Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
2 weeks ago

Heretoc: You can clearly feel that the author is not writing this story for the story's sake, or for the need to create a masterpiece. He's just writing this for the word count and money. I don't have any problems with authors writing for money. I would call them foolish if they don't wrote for money. Lol. But this guy... He's just taking this to an another level. While chapters filled with repeated sentences and unnecessary descriptions. He contradicts himself every few chapter. I just hope that the story really improves after chapter 200-250, as some people claimed. The basis of the story could have created another great story.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
2 weeks ago
You can clearly feel that the author is not writing this story for the story's sake, or for the need to create a masterpiece. He's just writing this for the word count and money. I don't have any problems with authors writing for money. I would call them foolish if they don't wrote for money. Lol. But this guy... He's just taking this to an another level. While chapters filled with repeated sentences and unnecessary descriptions. He contradicts himself every few chapter. I just hope that the story really improves after chapter 200-250, as some people claimed. The basis of the story could have created another great story. View More
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
2 weeks ago

Heretoc: The plot could have very well been a start of another great story. But author completely ****ed it up through filler, racism and above all, a broken inaccurate story line.

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
2 weeks ago
The plot could have very well been a start of another great story. But author completely ****ed it up through filler, racism and above all, a broken inaccurate story line. View More

kulmai: ikr... The plot is interesting but the writing's style, not so much...

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C160
2 weeks ago
Why can't he write more about his own country? 🤔 Anyway... I will check your suggestion. I have actually tried searching for similar books on Qidian, but the site is so messy... 😅 Plus there are so many books... It's hard to find good ones among all the trash. View More

gamma_sheep: now the book in qidian cannot write more about the change in MC country. author can not write more after level 10. unless author use view of total human beings.
if you want to see the level 10 science,重生之超级战舰(means Rebirth and became a spaceship)is a better book

Scholar's Advanced Technological System
3 weeks ago
The current chapter? Seems to be. The algebric and geometric meeting...But if you notice, it was like author just didn't knew what to do after chapter 700. It's like he just went with the flow trying to figure. out something to do or write. Everything became rushed and at the same time incredibly dull... Especially all the meetings. It was only around chapter 950 or something, right after he solved the Reimann Theory, did he get some type of goal. The great thing is that Virtual Reality Arc shows a lot of promise. I just want to know what's after level 10😅 View More

gamma_sheep: I am chinese ,i can tell you that this book is in a critical point at chapter 1093, because most of novel in this website become bored(completely fantasy).But the author now still try to use science theory to explain. I just want to say it is the best book which use theory to explain black technology .

Scholar's Advanced Technological System
3 weeks ago

Heretoc: So he has given up on his parents. Then why the hell is he even back?

Legend of the Mythological Genes · C142
3 weeks ago
So he has given up on his parents. Then why the hell is he even back? View More
Legend of the Mythological Genes · C142
3 weeks ago

Eddicted: An author with a lot of egoistic and misguided nationalism who thinks chinese are gods and all other races are villans and underdeveloped.let me tell you author all the inheritance china was obtained from indian monks.even the buddhism and its techniques came to china from india.indian monks saw the lives of chinese living like animals,so they passed their knowledge to correct and better their lives.its ok to be proud of your country but its not ok to think you are above others.it disgusts non chinese readers and all your good writing skills are gone to waste.atleast try reading comments at end of every f*ckedup "i am a super chinese MC" chapter and you will understand.

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