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Sounds interesting looking forward to a weird type of apocalyptic shop novel. ..............................................................

The novel's storyline in itself is quite solid and seems like a good one but the writing style is painfully slow and in 40 chapters it has not progressed a bit. The story delves into different tangents every few chapters and the tangent is dragged out for 2-3 chapters. The story has potential which is buried due to bad writing. Good read for those that want to delve into very small details of the whole story world in a novel.

This looks like a store type novel many start off slow and good then become fast and bad the synopsis looks like this won't start slow so might be a good read

It's been 30 chapters no fusion don't waste your time if you came for the fusion part of the novel..........................................

I think the author is just so 30 year old guy with a po*n addiction and is using the novel to write his fantasy. Will check out Dark Blood Age thanks for the name

The writing of the author suggests that he is a 30 year old vir*in who is using this book as a platform to release his se*ual fantasy thus destroying the story line. As seen by the first 40 chapters the book is more than 1/4th po*n

The story development till the 42 chapter is quick waiting for more chapters to judge the quality of the rest (filler from here on ........)