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Thanks for the review and as I have disclosed before, the harem isn't confirmed yet.

The language was good and the story was paced decently and if there's something I must point out, the story just lacks an element to arouse more of my attention.

The story starts fine I guess, though there's that lacking element which just can't keep my interest. Also, grammar can still be improved through it is understandable.

Well, what can I say besides it being a good romance novel? The characters are interesting with a certain characteristic or trait to them. The release rate might be slower compared to those daily releases, but in terms of quality, it's there and worth the wait. After all, quality over quantity.

I would say it's a fine way of writing as some people prefer slower paced novels over fast paced novels. Just a different group of audience in my opinion, but keep up the good work!

Even though I've only just read the first few chapters, I can say confidently that the world development and characters have all been described in detail, not through the use of vocabulary, but imagery writing as well which actually gave me quite the vivid imagination and and good first impression of the novel. As for the plot, I would say it's more slow paced with the events well thought out and reasonable.

The story has a intriguing dark side to it which I have to say aroused my attention, especially with a few elements that pop out in the story though it feels that some situations could have been paced more quickly (Personal thinking)

Thank you for the review, honestly, I'm quite surprised that someone prefers a harem.