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enjoyed the story, hated the long wait, hoping for a part 2.

would have given a better rating if not for the chapters after 600. it seemed like the story was going somewhere it when there, then fell apart. forgetting key points in the story to advance a quick character need. duplicate chapters the say the same thing as the last but with 3 sentences changed. skipping ahead in the story in ways that makes no sense. huge chunks of information missing. I really liked the story but now it's garbage. please fix your story I know you have the skills too you have shown them in earlier chapters.

was good 3/4 of the way then it got sucky. writer did not keep track of status of the main character. huge power ups at the start then long no power ups. what happened to the other dragon forms.

I like how you made the three stories connected . the last part of this book seemed rushed and not thought out. but most of the story was great.