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SonataL

SonataL

male LV 5

The obscure we see eventually. The completely obvious, it seems, takes longer. ~Edward R. Murrow

2017-12-25 Joined Canada

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SonataL
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Commented
Kinda OP since it would also affect those significantly stronger than him by the 50% decrease in abilities.

Creates a circle with 20m radius of pure, perfect darkness. Enemies are blinded, weakened, and will experience constant damage within this radius. Power escalates with proximity to caster.

The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

The Challenger's Return: Rebirth of the Rainbow Mage

Games · NightWind

SonataL
Commented
Run on sentence

My life before I died, could be called an uneventful one, I had no dreams and aspirations, of course apart from being transmigrated to another world, but like that's ever gonna happen, right... I had few friends and the ones I did, I rarely spent time with. My parents wanted me to study hard, get rich and finally get married. Of course, I agreed with them... in the beginning. But I started getting addicted to web novels, light novels and a bunch of other stuff. I would spend hours every day reading away locked away in my room. Neglecting spending time with my family and studying for school.

na yea na yea

na yea na yea

Anime & Comics · nightRox

SonataL
Commented
You're switching between present and past tense. You said "continued" which is past and then say "tries", which is present.
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Cultivation Online

Cultivation Online

Games · MyLittleBrother

SonataL
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Commented
No. Same reason as the other 2, it seems a bit forced.
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